VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3] [Mr Palmer]

[Sadowdark]

I did commented on your post itself

That's why Anna broke up with these guys, because they turned out to be total assholes. It will be a date and it will look like a business meeting. Pigwin and Anna will talk about planning a business trip. Finally, the financial problems were solved. When Pigwin wants to surprise Anna and break her, she does not know David's financial problems and offers help, and even asks his friend not to take up the lawsuit against David's company. When Anna tells Pigguin that she knows her husband's problems, he becomes furious but hides it. Pigwin won't blackmail her, only the old fisherman Marvin will, because he said that she should come to him of her own free will and be grateful to him for solving the problem with her husband's company,,, . But if you agree to replace him after two years of absolute obedience. Pigiwn may remind Anna at every turn and under every pressure and initially demand small favors from Anna, and then she will see that Pigiwn has complete control over Anna and will demand sexual favors. Anna is under pressure because he helped her husband with problems at the company, and she agreed to obey him unconditionally and now she does not want to repay him. Chris doesn't have any money, we don't know that yet, but I think he installed the virus to steal money from David's company for the same guy Kendra works for. Anna will not be a Bakrut because David told her so because he has financial problems. And your choices from Ch1 and Ch2 will count in Ch3, this will certainly be the case on the corruption path. He can get money from old Fox

 

[Sadowdark]

So howcome David was her 4th?

1. She met a guy in high school, but he was an asshole and didn't take her seriously.
2. Guy She met him when she worked in a store, even her father didn't know about him. I don't remember this dialogue anymore, but I think it meant that he liked getting a blowjob and she hated it. He forced her to give blowjobs all the time and dumped him. or something like that. And that's why she didn't give David a blowjob, and Kendra suggested she practice on Chris, Anna says she'll practice giving blowjobs on Bannan.
3. The guy He was from college .He was the star of the local football team, had other girlfriends and cheated on Anne
4. She met Dawid after graduating from law school,

 

[Couto25]

That's why Anna broke up with these guys, because they turned out to be total assholes. It will be a date and it will look like a business meeting. Pigwin and Anna will talk about planning a business trip. Finally, the financial problems were solved. When Pigwin wants to surprise Anna and break her, she does not know David's financial problems and offers help, and even asks his friend not to take up the lawsuit against David's company. When Anna tells Pigguin that she knows her husband's problems, he becomes furious but hides it. Pigwin won't blackmail her, only the old fisherman Marvin will, because he said that she should come to him of her own free will and be grateful to him for solving the problem with her husband's company,,, . But if you agree to replace him after two years of absolute obedience. Pigiwn may remind Anna at every turn and under every pressure and initially demand small favors from Anna, and then she will see that Pigiwn has complete control over Anna and will demand sexual favors. Anna is under pressure because he helped her husband with problems at the company, and she agreed to obey him unconditionally and now she does not want to repay him. Chris doesn't have any money, we don't know that yet, but I think he installed the virus to steal money from David's company for the same guy Kendra works for. Anna will not be a Bakrut because David told her so because he has financial problems. And your choices from Ch1 and Ch2 will count in Ch3, this will certainly be the case on the corruption path. He can get money from old Fox

Blackmail in sense yes she will come to him for money...i meant submission route. If she want more money..she has to do what he want

 

[DarthSpitz717]

Except nothing happened during law school. Anna focuses only on studies and her only friend was a pink vibrator. There is a dialogue when Anna talks to Chris about it, and then in her mind she says that she regrets throwing away that pink vibrator, now she would need it and could use it

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Yes that is true... however

while using that vibrator what was Anna's fantasies... who or what was she thinking of when using it? The main point is she did have a toy and used it. We can talk till the cows come home on the finer points about her not dating and toy use. Doubt either of us could come to an agreement if there is any significance about this little fact.

What is missing in understanding naughty Anna is what she was thinking, desiring, wanting when she was actively dating-- hell we don't know if Anna was dating with the off chance, she would find a husband or she was with guys that just tripped her trigger. It's those little details that might help us understand Grant or Marvin, or not.

 

[Couto25]

1. She met a guy in high school, but he was an asshole and didn't take her seriously.
2. Guy She met him when she worked in a store, even her father didn't know about him. I don't remember this dialogue anymore, but I think it meant that he liked getting a blowjob and she hated it. He forced her to give blowjobs all the time and dumped him. or something like that. And that's why she didn't give David a blowjob, and Kendra suggested she practice on Chris, Anna says she'll practice giving blowjobs on Bannan.
3. The guy He was from college .He was the star of the local football team, had other girlfriends and cheated on Anne
4. She met Dawid after graduating from law school,

I am looking forward for 7 guys lol not interested in these 3 anymore.

 

[boobthief]

AWAM is no more genius story wise..render wise yes...story wise perfect marriage is 100 times better..And i am talking about only sexual content renders...the situation and dialogue is perfectly developed in this game...it's just you know in the end, which part of nudity should be shown to the gamers is messed up for this game lol...he go for male nudity instead of female nudity lol. He should think of us as Chris and then he will understand what we want from Ana lol.

AWAM..idk whether the story is progressing or not since an year...it was stuck on same PD since 2 years. No progress in corruption of Sophia in straight path..I can speak only about myself that I don't like lesbian path...I dont think he has showed anything in straight path since last year, and there will be no straight scene this year too most probably with snail pace of development. Main story is dead already there...he is just creating some random individual theme with those character for the particular Playday...Atleast in this game main story is moving forward....but yea Mr. Palmer has to improve on tease and sexual content wise...thats all.

The genius part is the thirst trap (of ensnaring people with dichotimous kinks).

Genuinely, both are talented artists. Both understand the cohorts in their audience. It's really no different to OnlyFans.

Like three card monte, they are undeniably talented but cheap street magicians: you pays your money and maybe this time you find the Queen (sex scene). So close! You almost got it... Maybe next update you can pay to win?

Do you think this developer can't render nudity? Can't do a sex scene? Their computer just says no?!

Enjoy their lament about their glorious purpose and exquisite narrative... but they will tease and blueball you until the subscriptions numbers go down then they will most likely just fuck off into the ether.

Still, really good renders. Shame they sold their soul to suckle at the Patreon titty.

 

[Couto25]

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Yes that is true... however

while using that vibrator what was Anna's fantasies... who or what was she thinking of when using it? The main point is she did have a toy and used it. We can talk till the cows come home on the finer points about her not dating and toy use. Doubt either of us could come to an agreement if there is any significance about this little fact.

What is missing in understanding naughty Anna is what she was thinking, desiring, wanting when she was actively dating-- hell we don't know if Anna was dating with the off chance, she would find a husband or she was with guys that just tripped her trigger. It's those little details that might help us understand Grant or Marvin, or not.

It's not naughty Ana lol it's normal Ana like all other girls when she was dating to have a family and someone who can fulfill her sexual needs and respect her at the same time...that's why she didn't like it when david hold sex when she denied to give him blowjob.

If someone push Ana's button, she might go for it. As of now in the corrupt path, she is not looking for long term relationship but yes she has sexual needs so she will give in to someone whoever trigger her sexually.. she's just staying with David as a favor for her child support mostly...once she will know from Hank that David is bankrupt, cant even support their child and he is hiding this information...there will be another fight lol...as of now the fight between them is only for cheating/sexual needs. I hope Chris take advantage of that.

 

[Couto25]

The genius part is the thirst trap (of ensnaring people with dichotimous kinks).

Genuinely, both are talented artists. Both understand the cohorts in their audience. It's really no different to OnlyFans.

Like three card monte, they are undeniably talented but cheap street magicians: you pays your money and maybe this time you find the Queen (sex scene). So close! You almost got it... Maybe next update you can pay to win?

Do you think this developer can't render nudity? Can't do a sex scene? Their computer just says no?!

Enjoy their lament about their glorious purpose and exquisite narrative... but they will tease and blueball you until the subscriptions numbers go down then they will most likely just fuck off into the ether.

Still, really good renders. Shame they sold their soul to suckle at the Patreon titty.

I said good renders of AWAM teasing wise because he shows what people want Woman nudity / BJ /HJ..the only thing that is missing is someone satisfying Sophia sexually via fingering/licking, if not sex....right now AWAM developer use sophia as a whore to satisfy all kids sexual needs via HJ and blowjob....it's not a trap, he already declared 2/3 years ago that Sophia will have sex on which Playday....but the thing is after his declaration, his update speed went like a snail and he keep giving excuses. He decided Dylan and Ellie will be MC after that declaration and story focus got shifted, main story progress got stuck...He complete 1 playday in 2/3 updates nowadays...not allowing to reach the main story to sex, focusing on development of dylan and ellie relationship with their friends in between the story.

On the other hand in this VN, you cannot even call tease scene as a hot scene because here the developer doesn't show the audience what they want lol...so those scenes should not be defined as tease/hot scene. In the end if you will see chris masturbate on video call while watching ana boobs....I will not define it even as a tease or sexual content of the story lol ...We are playing this game as a porn game and he is showing Ana is watching porn via text lol it's not hot for me. With Marvin its mid i can say...he could have done better and show some more intimacy there...I agreed to slow corruption that fine no to early sex but he failed to deliver proper sexual content tease wise too so far. As of now, until part 2 whoever like those scene, idk what they like in it..and he called it a hot scene of the story in his post lol.

That's why I said instead of demanding more character / relationship buildup, demand more sex lol...enough of building characters relationship. This way whenever the story will end , it will have like 60% -70% of story and 30% of sex....but if he kept teasing and leave the sex with all charaters for the end....then we are playing a VN with 95% of story and 5% sex depending on the route you choose...it's more like normal VN rather a porn game.

 

[Davidleene]

there will be no sexual activities in this patch, i can feel it, another waste of update

 

[DanThaMan]

there will be no sexual activities in this patch, i can feel it, another waste of update

Of course there won't be, the most you will see is her nipple.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

there will be no sexual activities in this patch, i can feel it, another waste of update

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There are two main ways to read a novel. You can read it from beginning to end, or you can read the first chapter then skip to the last chapter and read it. When it comes to adult content, that is why there is Pornhub... instant, no real plot, no investment in the characters, just BLAM-BOOM-BANG!

But what really is good here? Neither yours or my critique of the progress of the game has any effect on Mr. Palmer's work. For my part, I'll either be totally satisfied with the results or disappointed--but that is me and the world will not come to an end either way...LOL!

 

[Couto25]

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There are two main ways to read a novel. You can read it from beginning to end, or you can read the first chapter then skip to the last chapter and read it. When it comes to adult content, that is why there is Pornhub... instant, no real plot, no investment in the characters, just BLAM-BOOM-BANG!

But what really is good here? Neither yours or my critique of the progress of the game has any effect on Mr. Palmer's work. For my part, I'll either be totally satisfied with the results or disappointed--but that is me and the world will not come to an end either way...LOL!

For story novel there's whole bookstore too lol..this website is for bang boom bang novels that's missing blam boom bang...whole city library is filled with romantic novels all around the world and Amazon kindle too for all types of erotic and romantic stories online without blam boom bang. Lol..there are few novels on Kindle who wrote about character how they look and howz the weather of the day is for 3 pages.

 

[Sadowdark]

I said good renders of AWAM teasing wise because he shows what people want Woman nudity / BJ /HJ..the only thing that is missing is someone satisfying Sophia sexually via fingering/licking, if not sex....right now AWAM developer use sophia as a whore to satisfy all kids sexual needs via HJ and blowjob....it's not a trap, he already declared 2/3 years ago that Sophia will have sex on which Playday....but the thing is after his declaration, his update speed went like a snail and he keep giving excuses. He decided Dylan and Ellie will be MC after that declaration and story focus got shifted, main story progress got stuck...He complete 1 playday in 2/3 updates nowadays...not allowing to reach the main story to sex, focusing on development of dylan and ellie relationship with their friends in between the story.

Don't forget that Sophia is acting like a stupid bimbo. Who has amesia after every action and doesn't remember anything. He always has his memory cleared, and he always has remorse.

 

[Sadowdark]

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Yes that is true... however

while using that vibrator what was Anna's fantasies... who or what was she thinking of when using it? The main point is she did have a toy and used it. We can talk till the cows come home on the finer points about her not dating and toy use. Doubt either of us could come to an agreement if there is any significance about this little fact.

What is missing in understanding naughty Anna is what she was thinking, desiring, wanting when she was actively dating-- hell we don't know if Anna was dating with the off chance, she would find a husband or she was with guys that just tripped her trigger. It's those little details that might help us understand Grant or Marvin, or not.

One moment in the game where all the fantasies Anna might have are listed when Kendra asks her about them, such as if she likes older men, if she likes to be dominant or submissive, if she likes gangbangs and likes doing BJs. and the player can decide or not, or indifferently. There was something else, but maybe I don't remember

 

[Panos24]

Hmmmmm !! Many of his old AWAM are here! And I don't know how good this is for the future of this game!! Oh my god! It's a porn game! I don't want to get old when I see the main character in action! I might die before then!

 

[DarthSpitz717]

For story novel there's whole bookstore too lol..this website is for bang boom bang novels that's missing blam boom bang...whole city library is filled with romantic novels all around the world and Amazon kindle too for all types of erotic and romantic stories online without blam boom bang. Lol..there are few novels on Kindle who wrote about character how they look and howz the weather of the day is for 3 pages.

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We live in an imperfect world

 

[Sadowdark]

Blackmail in sense yes she will come to him for money...i meant submission route. If she want more money..she has to do what he want

Somehow this doesn't sit well with me. Why would Anna come to Pigiwno for more money? she works in his company and gets a salary. Even out of submission, when Anna agrees to be Pigiwin's partner for 2 years, he says that he will receive double his salary.

 

[Couto25]

Somehow this doesn't sit well with me. Why would Anna come to Pigiwno for more money? she works in his company and gets a salary. Even out of submission, when Anna agrees to be Pigiwin's partner for 2 years, he says that he will receive double his salary.

maybe to give some contract to David company...and Hank could enjoy Ana and ask some favour from her to satisfy himself and his partners. if you are single then salary feels enough for yourself but if you get some responsibility of family and child etc...all money and salary seems less.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

Somehow this doesn't sit well with me. Why would Anna come to Pigiwno for more money? she works in his company and gets a salary. Even out of submission, when Anna agrees to be Pigiwin's partner for 2 years, he says that he will receive double his salary.

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Your reply to the previous post....

" Blackmail in sense yes she will come to him for money...i meant submission route. If she want more money..she has to do what he want ..."

echos what I been saying which is some over simplistic plots in the game. Yes, it could be just that simple... blackmail...extortion...or in this case a forum prostitution might be the developer's intent. But there are too many hints of more complex plots...and you are right, this possible plot is pretty lame and weak

 

[Lord Bradley]

Just read latest status update and my expectations are ginormous. That being said I have enjoyed some very nicely tailored moments in this game without epic visual scenes, just from body language, dialogue and nice atmosphere. Of course I want a treat for the eyes, but I won't complain if it's a simple text/emotion based setup that's well done. Problems start when neither of these things are met - no visuals, no atmosphere - then it's just filler no one enjoys. Hopeful and anxious, let's see what the future holds!