VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3] [Mr Palmer]

[catgameryt011]

No payment required. This is free But I must also say that my interest in this story is decreasing day by day... Too many unnecessary characters added. Chris, Jack, Hank, and Marvin's paths would suffice. It's okay for the actions in the story to be delayed... But if she's going to have something with someone, I'd rather the plot be well-designed. Like the war going on inside her and why she lost it. I didn't like that she turned into public property in one day.

but is there or is there not an update from you on marvin and anna?

 

[Menace o Santana]

When he threaten to go to Robinsons if she didnt show up in 5 minutes, I was like there you go.

That is he most Daring thing David ever did so far in the whole game at least we can expect to see a more daring and confident David in a near future updates.
It will not only benefit the players but the game also, i mean David confident would be a huge Originality bringing to this plot. Usually in most of slow developpement cheating plot the MC is always a little submisive if not a little,(a completely coward) who's to affraid to question his wife.I hope that Mr Palmer will not throw the idea of David being Confident, that will benefit the plot a lot in the Faithfull route and also in the cheating route.

 

[Adhdclassic]

That is he most Daring thing David ever did so far in the whole game at least we can expect to see a more daring and confident David in a near future updates.
It will not only benefit the players but the game also, i mean David confident would be a huge Originality bringing to this plot. Usually in most of slow developpement cheating plot the MC is always a little submisive if not a little,(a completely coward) who's to affraid to question his wife.I hope that Mr Palmer will not throw the idea of David being Confident, that will benefit the plot a lot in the Faithfull route and also in the cheating route.

The scene would have been even better when she said she's at Robinsons and they were talking he said OK hung up. Next thing you knew he was knocking on the door.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

That is he most Daring thing David ever did so far in the whole game at least we can expect to see a more daring and confident David in a near future updates.
It will not only benefit the players but the game also, i mean David confident would be a huge Originality bringing to this plot. Usually in most of slow developpement cheating plot the MC is always a little submisive if not a little,(a completely coward) who's to affraid to question his wife.I hope that Mr Palmer will not throw the idea of David being Confident, that will benefit the plot a lot in the Faithfull route and also in the cheating route.

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Oh David definitely overestimates himself, but we are watching a drowning man tying rocks around his neck. Now if he is thinking he is a butt-kicking-name-taking machine, I suppose when a desperate guy is in the throws of panic and emotional upheaval, even a mouse can become a tiger.

Ever hear someone say, "that's not fair"? Fun fact life isn't fair but our hero, David, believes he has certain rights because Anna is his wife... this update made David treat Anna more like property than a person. Further, by asserting his rights of half custody of Sophie and almost to the point of making ultimatums is emotionally enraged David acting out. I wonder how many players of this game out there feels sorry for David?

Would David have come to blows with Robinson had he gone over? I'd say that's a 50/50 possibility. Certainly with 100% likelihood he would have made it clear Anna is his wife and belongs to him. Damn few boys like to share their toys, another fun fact of life.

As to this game regardless of a player's choices, David is a mild semi-insecure man when it comes to his wife. Jealous when there is no call for it, clueless when tact is required, and totally blind (just look at his "friends"). The brief encounters we see of David's father just shows how lacking David is. The father was right in one way, marrying a pretty woman has its own perils and perhaps the old man knew his son didn't have the balls and self-confidence to have married such a goddess.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Good guess but wrong. They were both written separately; but from the same premise.
The outline of a plot including characters was sent to me, and as I later found out, another author on Literotica.
We both wrote our versions without prior knowledge of each other until Temptation was published.
This prompted me to finish my version, which I had started but not completed.
I didn't read Temptation until I had submitted my story.

gotta say both stories were good but temptation was better story was more extensive, and the revenge was nice too.