VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[DarthSpitz717]

For me the one thing I realized, out of all the suitors for Anna. Marvin can cause her the most trauma. If she fucks Marvin, she would be made fun of by all the women for fucking the ugly, old, maintenence guy, with Kendra leading the pack. The guys would bombard her because if Marvin can hit it anyone has a shot. Of course if it got out to David she would be at risk of losing her daughter because he can claim unsafe conditions especially if all above things are happening. Fuck the OLD GUY

If David finds out Anna fucked Marvin, I could see her making up this sympathetic lie to david about Marvin has cancer and doesnt have much time left to live, and it was his dying wish to make sweet love to me so he can die a happy man. What kind of a person would I be to turn down a dying man (not really) of his final days so his "make a wish foundation" was to sleep with me so he can die happily and peacefully in his sleep
But anyway where have you been, Why are you getting home so late, are you still cheating on me with Alexia? Am i going to find more condoms in the backseat, you make me so stressed out, i think i need to go to Robinson and get a full body massage and meanwhile you can feed sophie, bathe her read to her and put her to bed, and dont wait up for me, cause i might be staying out all night

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This train of thought has a serious set of plot holes to overcome where this is an option.

David finding out about Marvin, yes sure very doable within the story, but it comes down to:

1. David doesn't even know Marvin exists. As hints, clues, and irregularities point that something is up with Anna, David would not be able to make connections with Anna's activities with Marvin. For now, David is aware of other men around her, like Hank, Jake, Robinson (more so now that David knows Anna was at Robinson's house).

2. I hate bringing up over and over the whole spy camera thing, but Marvin would know of them and how to access the data. More to the point the only real place those cameras could get anything good is Anna's private breast pumping room-- anyone other than Marvin, Anna herself would have to invite them into that room.

3. Without some kind of evidence, like pictures and video, how would Kendra be able to prove any Marvin/Anna interactions?

4. YES! Marvin is a dried-up old man well past his prime, and Anna is a goddess still in her prime. So if someone was told anything about Anna and Marvin, who would believe that someone like Marvin got to rail Anna--a woman who could have just about any other man? And this would include David. It'll be like reporting a Big Foot sighting.

5. Most adults deal with rumors as just what they are. So a rumor starts about Anna and Marvin--just how many would take the rumor serious? A rumor about Hank and Anna...; or Jake and Anna are much more plausible for people to give it any serious thought.

To make the Anna/Marvin path devastating, especial toward David, Anna and Marvin would have to be caught in the act.

 

[Adhdclassic]

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This train of thought has a serious set of plot holes to overcome where this is an option.

David finding out about Marvin, yes sure very doable within the story, but it comes down to:

1. David doesn't even know Marvin exists. As hints, clues, and irregularities point that something is up with Anna, David would not be able to make connections with Anna's activities with Marvin. For now, David is aware of other men around her, like Hank, Jake, Robinson (more so now that David knows Anna was at Robinson's house).

2. I hate bringing up over and over the whole spy camera thing, but Marvin would know of them and how to access the data. More to the point the only real place those cameras could get anything good is Anna's private breast pumping room-- anyone other than Marvin, Anna herself would have to invite them into that room.

3. Without some kind of evidence, like pictures and video, how would Kendra be able to prove any Marvin/Anna interactions?

4. YES! Marvin is a dried-up old man well past his prime, and Anna is a goddess still in her prime. So if someone was told anything about Anna and Marvin, who would believe that someone like Marvin got to rail Anna--a woman who could have just about any other man? And this would include David. It'll be like reporting a Big Foot sighting.

5. Most adults deal with rumors as just what they are. So a rumor starts about Anna and Marvin--just how many would take the rumor serious? A rumor about Hank and Anna...; or Jake and Anna are much more plausible for people to give it any serious thought.

To make the Anna/Marvin path devastating, especial toward David, Anna and Marvin would have to be caught in the act.

I agree with most of what you said but I think Marvin would out himself. Marvin swelling his chest to Jake boasting about how he got what he couldn't. Speaking as a guy that would definitely boast of an old mans ego. Especially if Jake aint getting any from her. But on the flipside now Jake would have his in with Anna in a blackmail.

 

[Couto25]

I agree with most of what you said but I think Marvin would out himself. Marvin swelling his chest to Jake boasting about how he got what he couldn't. Speaking as a guy that would definitely boast of an old mans ego. Especially if Jake aint getting any from her. But on the flipside now Jake would have his in with Anna in a blackmail.

If Marvin boast that he got Ana in front of Jake...Jake will definitely go for Ana in corrupt path..Thats what kendra is waiting for.

 

[THLE]

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This train of thought has a serious set of plot holes to overcome where this is an option.

David finding out about Marvin, yes sure very doable within the story, but it comes down to:

1. David doesn't even know Marvin exists. As hints, clues, and irregularities point that something is up with Anna, David would not be able to make connections with Anna's activities with Marvin. For now, David is aware of other men around her, like Hank, Jake, Robinson (more so now that David knows Anna was at Robinson's house).

2. I hate bringing up over and over the whole spy camera thing, but Marvin would know of them and how to access the data. More to the point the only real place those cameras could get anything good is Anna's private breast pumping room-- anyone other than Marvin, Anna herself would have to invite them into that room.

3. Without some kind of evidence, like pictures and video, how would Kendra be able to prove any Marvin/Anna interactions?

4. YES! Marvin is a dried-up old man well past his prime, and Anna is a goddess still in her prime. So if someone was told anything about Anna and Marvin, who would believe that someone like Marvin got to rail Anna--a woman who could have just about any other man? And this would include David. It'll be like reporting a Big Foot sighting.

5. Most adults deal with rumors as just what they are. So a rumor starts about Anna and Marvin--just how many would take the rumor serious? A rumor about Hank and Anna...; or Jake and Anna are much more plausible for people to give it any serious thought.

To make the Anna/Marvin path devastating, especial toward David, Anna and Marvin would have to be caught in the act.

As in VN Jessica O'Neil

 

[AlfredBundy4]

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This train of thought has a serious set of plot holes to overcome where this is an option.

David finding out about Marvin, yes sure very doable within the story, but it comes down to:

1. David doesn't even know Marvin exists. As hints, clues, and irregularities point that something is up with Anna, David would not be able to make connections with Anna's activities with Marvin. For now, David is aware of other men around her, like Hank, Jake, Robinson (more so now that David knows Anna was at Robinson's house).

2. I hate bringing up over and over the whole spy camera thing, but Marvin would know of them and how to access the data. More to the point the only real place those cameras could get anything good is Anna's private breast pumping room-- anyone other than Marvin, Anna herself would have to invite them into that room.

3. Without some kind of evidence, like pictures and video, how would Kendra be able to prove any Marvin/Anna interactions?

4. YES! Marvin is a dried-up old man well past his prime, and Anna is a goddess still in her prime. So if someone was told anything about Anna and Marvin, who would believe that someone like Marvin got to rail Anna--a woman who could have just about any other man? And this would include David. It'll be like reporting a Big Foot sighting.

5. Most adults deal with rumors as just what they are. So a rumor starts about Anna and Marvin--just how many would take the rumor serious? A rumor about Hank and Anna...; or Jake and Anna are much more plausible for people to give it any serious thought.

To make the Anna/Marvin path devastating, especial toward David, Anna and Marvin would have to be caught in the act.

(TLDR: agree, lol)

All of that is pretty accurate. The difference between someone like Chris and someone like Marvin is that there was a long prior relationship via her husband. That and Chris never really kept it all that much of a secret that he was attracted to her. He claims he hid his feelings but I'm sure it would be somewhat obvious to at least her, if not her and David. A rumor about those two wouldn't need much supporting evidence to be taken somewhat seriously.
Marvin? A stranger to everyone until recently and he's old as fuck. It would take absolute proof for that to even be believed or taken seriously.

I've mentioned before but I basically found this site after fucking up the only relationship I ever gave a fuck about for a dumb fling with a coworker. My ex heard things long before she ever knew I cheated...and it was very easy for me to brush it all off. Getting caught took the chick I was stupidly fooling around with telling her directly. Short of that or videos/photo proof and my ex would have taken my side with any rumors. Zero doubt.

So the Marvin angle in this story, if it revolves around blackmail or David finding out it would require proof. Rumor wouldn't realistically move the needle there.

For a porn game I have praised the pacing and realism so far with Chris specifically. Again, it's a dumb porn story so a lot of unrealistic shit happens but the thing you can make realistic is the pacing and reactions of characters to news.
David doing anything but rolling his eyes at a rumor of a 900 year old man fucking his wife would be incredibly unbelievable.

So...he needs to film it to some degree. Be it fucking or touching her in general, proof has to be had or it basically never happened in the minds of anyone but those two.

On a final note with a different topic, I'll repeat that the dev doesn't need to rush the Chris storyline to the point of fucking IRL but it has to happen in the story timeframe to maintain realism.
I really hope the dev doesn't pull an AWAM and have her bring EVERY man in the story to the point of a BJ before moving on. That's not how humans - even whores - behave.

Though, oddly enough, the men that seem most likely to progress with Anna based on the story alone are Marvin and her father's longtime friend. Maybe the neighbor if the dev were to write a scenario where he somehow saw her blowing Chris, got proofs and blackmails her. Maybe?
So it seems like an old man would be next just based on what we've seen so far and their relations to each other.
Old friend has a long-time longtime relationship with Anna and now power over her via work. Marvin has his own works but also the backing of the main antagonist on top of that. Antagonists, really. So it's sort of a 3 vs 1 with Marvin and Anna.

We'll see but I just want whatever continued realism we can possibly have in what is always a dumbass porn story. Give me a little realism in a setting that by nature is unrealistic and illogical. This one has done that so far.

 

[Couto25]

I think Chris and Marvin are just a tool to open Ana internal sexual desire...not knowingly but unknowingly they're doing it in a way..once she doesn't mind giving bj or being touched in pussy from others, she'll go for it...and that might not be either with Chris or Marvin...That person will be with whoever Ana wants to go for it being submissive way or naughty way...Jake will be the one to get first bwahahhaha ..I doubt it...but it can be possible.

 

[Sadowdark]

I think Chris and Marvin are just a tool to open Ana internal sexual desire...not knowingly but unknowingly they're doing it in a way..once she doesn't mind giving bj or being touched in pussy from others, she'll go for it...and that might not be either with Chris or Marvin...That person will be with whoever Ana wants to go for it being submissive way or naughty way...Jake will be the one to get first bwahahhaha ..I doubt it...but it can be possible.

Those characters that have their own main stats and are important to the plot. The rest are additional characters whose job is to corrupt Anna for the main characters.

 

[sslovoe]

i not know why this be useful or be sexy part for game in future and how she gona send jake or anyone
is this gona be part at next update for view seduce small part for future plan

 

[gregorioVII]

i not know why this be useful or be sexy part for game in future and how she gona send jake or anyone
is this gona be part at next update for view seduce small part for future plan
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Stockings are the best

Anyways, I guess Jake will give her this underwear outfit as a gift

 

[Sadowdark]

i not know why this be useful or be sexy part for game in future and how she gona send jake or anyone
is this gona be part at next update for view seduce small part for future plan
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MP has a style of repeating the same events, where first you have no choice in scenes. And then in a similar event you have a choice. It looks like shopping 2.0, Jake, in the future. It can be anything. . Taught by his previous polls, where Mp always decides. And those choices that supporters choose, he ignores.

 

[sslovoe]

i not want jake be any part in game
he wast lot art wast update
boring long part for nothing all update with his part if use other character will be lot move in game with other
game make some part slow game
like flash back garvin when she youung... was long wast time
and jake many time visit her office all with nothing

only thing developer can make his part be wild is idea of join him with his boat teach her and she wear bikini if this make as wild be only thing can be worth
other be wast game time
its slow game relase wait 3 to 4 month we not want wast on him

we not want chat only we want real action

 

[Sadowdark]

i not want jake be any part in game
he wast lot art wast update
boring long part for nothing all update with his part if use other character will be lot move in game with other
game make some part slow game
like flash back garvin when she youung... was long wast time
and jake many time visit her office all with nothing

only thing developer can make his part be wild is idea of join him with his boat teach her and she wear bikini if this make as wild be only thing can be worth
other be wast game time
its slow game relase wait 3 to 4 month we not want wast on him

Or a ride in his unpaid fast car with Anna.

 

[sslovoe]

Or a ride in his unpaid fast car with Anna.

think my friend here make anna go jacuzzi with chris .. massage with rob ,,, and jake make him bold more than game

 

[Sadowdark]

i not know why this be useful or be sexy part for game in future and how she gona send jake or anyone
is this gona be part at next update for view seduce small part for future plan
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Or dinner with the old fox in the next update. He called Anna before dinner and said Anna, put on the underwear and stockings I gave you as a gift. Or there is no agreement to return the money. Anna later says to herself, I burned this underwear and stockings from him, I will have to buy new underwear and stockings.

 

[xzuko]

I don't know why, but I absolutely can't stand Jake. His character is really irritating. He's the only person I don't want Anna to have any scenes with. According to the 'dislike character' poll, I guess most people don't like Jake either

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I don't know why, but I absolutely can't stand Jake. His character is really irritating. He's the only person I don't want Anna to have any scenes with. According to the 'dislike character' poll, I guess most people don't like Jake either

Well k don’t want any naked old man scenes, but thats what all his patrons vote for. That’s why I quit my subscription here long time ago

 

[Adhdclassic]

I think DEV is not using Jake enough or properly instead he has chosen to overuse pornstache and deflated uncle fester. Pull back on Jakes arrogance, give him some emotions or at least a semblance of a brain. Instead of horny playboy and thats it.

 

[Couto25]

Those characters that have their own main stats and are important to the plot. The rest are additional characters whose job is to corrupt Anna for the main characters.

There are 8 main antagonist..He already told before...The thing is he is not building story on other plot else the point would have been awarded to them too in their storyline. They will get their chance when the story will reach to the point when their turn will come...Like as of now Marcel / Leonard turn didnt came yet. The story doesnt reach to the point where Ana need evidence of Alexia from them yet. We have to wait and see who will get Ana first but it depends on how MP will try to build corruption for Ana...like being groped by everyone, giving HJ/BJ/Boobjob to everyone then sex etc....or it will be like HJ then ana is corrupted up to the point of HJ so she will take a step ahead with the next antagonist something like that...it depends on MP..we can just wait ..As of now for the last 2 updates, the story was build in such way where the main scene was with Chris so corruption growth can be seen only with one antagonist...but if main scene changes with different antagonist like the upcoming one is with Marvin, Thursday storyline main scene will be with Grant...this way we will see if corruption level of Ana stays to the same level as of chris or it grows with time. Thats the main thing I wanna see with MP.

And to be honest, I dont believe in point system...it's just for MP timepass...it's not defined that if Ana submissive point will be 20 then only she will go for sex....it's no where defined...it depends on what scene MP build no matter whatever point he give to Ana....like Ana submissive point is 1000 and she do sex with Hank but in the next update she only give HJ to tim and dale and she dont do sex even after 1000 submissive points...so that's absurd.. thats why I say, it depends on MP which scene he developed for Ana and not the point system.

 

[Sadowdark]

There are 8 main antagonist..He already told before...The thing is he is not building story on other plot else the point would have been awarded to them too in their storyline. They will get their chance when the story will reach to the point when their turn will come...Like as of now Marcel / Leonard turn didnt came yet. The story doesnt reach to the point where Ana need evidence of Alexia from them yet. We have to wait and see who will get Ana first but it depends on how MP will try to build corruption for Ana...like being groped by everyone, giving HJ/BJ/Boobjob to everyone then sex etc....or it will be like HJ then ana is corrupted up to the point of HJ so she will take a step ahead with the next antagonist something like that...it depends on MP..we can just wait ..As of now for the last 2 updates, the story was build in such way where the main scene was with Chris so corruption growth can be seen only with one antagonist...but if main scene changes with different antagonist like the upcoming one is with Marvin, Thursday storyline main scene will be with Grant...this way we will see if corruption level of Ana stays to the same level as of chris or it grows with time. Thats the main thing I wanna see with MP.

Maybe he changed his mind because he said that Marcel is an additional character and has a small role in the plot.

 

[Sadowdark]

think my friend here make anna go jacuzzi with chris .. massage with rob ,,, and jake make him bold more than game
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If time permits, and it is doubtful.