VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[exazubi]

Everything you say is true, but healthy criticism is also needed!
And i’ll throw a fly in the ointment in your speech: "Originally Mr. Palmer said that in the CH1 and CH2 there will be no action and all the fun will begin with the CH3, now he says that we should not wait for action right away in the CH3, real action can happen from the second to the seventh update!"
My guess is this is the fifth or sixth update, and by today’s standards this is a year or more of waiting!
We can’t argue with the fact that before that he did everything quickly and clearly, everything you said correctly and a lot of respect to Mr. Palmer for that!

Nevertheless, he would still be in chapter 3. So this is by no means a contradiction.

I wonder, what does everyone expect? Should Anna now run away crying to her neighbor, push him against the wall and kiss him suddenly? And he then asks "Wow, what's going on now?" And she just replies: "Shut up and fuck me, now!"? Then rip off his clothes and immediately ride him bareback? And ideally this happens in the hallway, with the apartment door open? Next Hank and Marvin happen to pass by there and they immediately join in?

I think anyone who thinks somewhat logically will realize that it won't happen this way. The earliest sex that could possibly take place is a revenge fuck. Everything else still needs time and story development. Of course, Chapter 3 won't be a single, instant gang bang. That would also be quite a break in style. If anyone expect something like that, he/she is definitely in the wrong game.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Nevertheless, he would still be in chapter 3. So this is by no means a contradiction.

I wonder, what does everyone expect? Should Anna now run away crying to her neighbor, push him against the wall and kiss him suddenly? And he then asks "Wow, what's going on now?" And she just replies: "Shut up and fuck me, now!"? Then rip off his clothes and immediately ride him bareback? And ideally this happens in the hallway, with the apartment door open? Next Hank and Marvin happen to pass by there and they immediately join in?

I think anyone who thinks somewhat logically will realize that it won't happen this way. The earliest sex that could possibly take place is a revenge fuck. Everything else still needs time and story development. Of course, Chapter 3 won't be a single, instant gang bang. That would also be quite a break in style. If anyone expect something like that, he/she is definitely in the wrong game.

I'm not saying that it should be one way or the other! I hope the dev has a script and sticks to it!
These are the words of Mr. Palmer when him asked when the action will be in the game: "Who is waiting for some kind of action, know that in CH1 and CH2 this is the beginning of the story, its bild up of a story, all the most interesting and the action will take place in CH3 of the game, so whoever wants this, come to the CH3!"
Here a random person comes after these words and reads the forum, "yeah, soon there will be a CH3, but the action in it will only be after several updates", which will take( one update more than three months) for about a year or more! Of course, he has the usual question - (just like in my head, but i didn’t ask it since i played these CH1-2) "why won’t there be action right away?" After all, the dev wrote that the entire bild up of the process for action will take two parts, first and second and now it turns out that half a third of the part will be spent on building up a narrowing for action! Do you see the logic?
The dev himself knows best what and how to develop in his game!
But the basis of the plot of this game is based on a story from literotica where, if my memory serves me correctly, in the plot Jake fucked Anna after her quarrel with David on the second day, he came to her because she was at home after the quarrel, and it seemed that she was even a little drunk, and when she opened the door for him, they started fucking right away!

 

[exazubi]

After all, the dev wrote that the entire bild up of the process for action will take two parts, first and second and now it turns out that half a third of the part will be spent on building up a narrowing for action! Do you see the logic?

You are interpreting more into this than was ever said. And most of it are fan theories, not the words of the developer himself. When did he actualy promise that sex would start immediately? He never did.

If you know the game and have followed the storyline, you might be able to figure out from the logic itself that it will take a while on the most routes. And even when the sex fianlly starts, the story will continue in between. Or do you think all the sex scenes come one after the other?

It should also be mentioned that there have been at least 3 updates this year alone. They were all quite long. And no one knows for sure how long it will take until it becomes serious. I don't think it will last a year or more. But that too is just one theory. For a one man project it's come quite a long way, which is amazing considering the quality. It's time to slow down and be a little fair. Most developers of this quality are considerably slower.

 

[MrLoverGJ]

He!

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[ItsNotUs]

You are interpreting more into this than was ever said. And most of it are fan theories, not the words of the developer himself. When did he actualy promise that sex would start immediately? He never did.

Dude!
I will write you again the words of Mr. Palmer! These are not inventions and guesses, these are his words: "Everyone who came here just to see the action, come after the CH2 of the game in the CH3 there will be content for you!" But after the completion of the CH2, in the end, answering questions, he already wrote that there will be no real action right away in the CH3, it will not be earlier than the second update and no later than the seventh!
Most likely the dev changed the plan of action and changed the plot, so that the action appears in the game as a logical outcome! But whether this will mean the end of the game or not, the dev himself does not yet know, or did not know at the time when he summed up the results after CH2!

 

[ItsNotUs]

Is that the shadow of the Dark Lord?

Join the dark side of the force and you'll have a dick up to your knees!

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[TeamEquipe]

But the basis of the plot of this game is based on a story from literotica where, if my memory serves me correctly, in the plot Jake fucked Anna after her quarrel with David on the second day, he came to her because she was at home after the quarrel, and it seemed that she was even a little drunk, and when she opened the door for him, they started fucking right away!

As stated before, both by myself and Mr_Palmer, there is no similarity in the story on Literotica and this game going forward, so trying to draw any comparisons is a total waste of time.

 

[Ass Fan]

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[Ass Fan]

I'm enlisting.

 

[TeamEquipe]

So, for a one man project, quality and progress are excellent!

Agreed. (Although he does have an artist).
But it should be remembered that Mr_Palmer has a FULL-TIME job as well.
So imo, the progress has been stunning so far.

 

[Ass Fan]

Agreed. (Although he does have an artist).
But it should be remembered that Mr_Palmer has a FULL-TIME job as well.
So imo, the progress has been stunning so far.

 

[Ass Fan]

Yes, but even saying that, some here don't understand.

 

[pnkrel]

You all are legit worried for nothing. Atleast give him a chance and let the part 3 start. Here, people are speaking as if the part 3 has already disappointed them without any hot stuff and action. All so called healthy criticism should be done after the update and not before. The update will speak for itself, and it's getting nearer considering how he has been silent for long. So possibly, he's busy in creating like he did in past

 

[exazubi]

Dude!

I will write you again the words of Mr. Palmer! These are not inventions and guesses, these are his words: "Everyone who came here just to see the action, come after the CH2 of the game in the CH3 there will be content for you!" But after the completion of the CH2, in the end, answering questions, he already wrote that there will be no real action right away in the CH3, it will not be earlier than the second update and no later than the seventh!

Most likely the dev changed the plan of action and changed the plot, so that the action appears in the game as a logical outcome! But whether this will mean the end of the game or not, the dev himself does not yet know, or did not know at the time when he summed up the results after CH2!

I wonder how you came up with that. How do you know what the usual plan was? Like the story in Literotica that the game is based on? You're not the dev, are you?

This his game is based on it. That means: it's an adaptation, or just inspired, not a copy! It may be that sex starts earlier in the story than in the game. But that doesn't mean it's the same in the game. It can start earlier, later, or in places where it don't appear in the story on Literotica. The sex will start during Chapter 3, that's what the dev said. Everything else is your interpretation. And you're wrong with this one.

 

[wildthing6]

Hibernation is the only solution.
Pick up Cartman as example, all gone well ... except for the year (details).
Asleep for some years and when you wake up you'll find done (with JOHN still half way !!!)

Or you can play the REAL game ... think how many way Anna can deny Jake the snake, teasing him with sexy poses and then sneak around with all others

 

[kadamk123]

It would certainly be nice if the next update dropped this month. However, I wouldn't be shocked at all if its not till early next year. It's December and we don't know what obligations he has to his job or family that will keep him from working on this game. Again if that bothers anyone who is subbed to him just cancel it for now. Any sneak peaks or whatever he posts, someone is always gracious enough to share with us so we don't really miss out on anything at all.

 

[ItsNotUs]

As stated before, both by myself and Mr_Palmer, there is no similarity in the story on Literotica and this game going forward, so trying to draw any comparisons is a total waste of time.

He took the story as a basis - this is already similar! But only the dev knows what will happen next.
And I didn’t compare these stories, i just gave an example of an emergency sex scene against the background of a similar story( base story).

 

[ItsNotUs]

I wonder how you came up with that. How do you know what the usual plan was? Like the story in Literotica that the game is based on? You're not the dev, are you?

This his game is based on it. That means: it's an adaptation, or just inspired, not a copy! It may be that sex starts earlier in the story than in the game. But that doesn't mean it's the same in the game. It can start earlier, later, or in places where they don't appear in the story on Literotica. The sex will start during Chapter 3, that's waht the dev said. Everything esle is your interpretation. And you're wrong with this one.

What am im saying wrong? Let's get facts!
I gave you the words of the dev - that they are lies? No! Those who have been here for a long time remember about this and if you are interested, read the results of the "answer to the question" from Mr. Palmer after the CH2! Where there are very interesting moments, such as that he has several paths ready according to the script, the rest are still in development, where he removes supposedly unnecessary characters from the game, because after finishing the CH2 he realized that it takes a lot of time to realistically build a plot that will smoothly flow into the "action" - he hadn’t thought about this before! This is a fact and that’s why he started deleting unnecessary characters!
As for literotica, this is just an Example and no matter how you shout that these are different stories, the story from lit erotica is the base of this game, all the characters and the initial plot!

 

[ItsNotUs]

You all are legit worried for nothing. Atleast give him a chance and let the part 3 start. Here, people are speaking as if the part 3 has already disappointed them without any hot stuff and action. All so called healthy criticism should be done after the update and not before. The update will speak for itself, and it's getting nearer considering how he has been silent for long. So possibly, he's busy in creating like he did in past

This is just reasoning and if you read carefully what i wrote above, everything is said there!

 

[ItsNotUs]

Bro, you seem so not chill for someone who creates fan art for the same game. It's like you appreciate and seems bother by it. Personally speaking, I won't care if the hot stuff keeps on getting hotter. No dev is obligated, all you can do is just wish, I guess that they deliver. And he's doing his stuff; albeit, he has its own way of holding stuff till he feels like. Don't care, though. All so called mild stuff are really really erotic till now. I have high hopes for him, and his level of writing and NTR element in it is very good. Waiting for nude lactation and anal stuff, personally. XD