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sslovoe

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It's like your speaking Klingon or something
easy Charles Dickens
i know my self
what you have ?

dog born barking not make him special
so what else you have beside be funny
you not artist
you not game writer

so only have you mom birth ass that you mom special making ass
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Depcaprio

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I think dev adding Chris to this update just to hype the next update.. I think he's gonna make a small cameo like in text message or some... Or it may even the dev who wants to surprise us with a really good scene with Chris.. anyways waiting for the next update ☝
 

sslovoe

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I think dev adding Chris to this update just to hype the next update.. I think he's gonna make a small cameo like in text message or some... Or it may even the dev who wants to surprise us with a really good scene with Chris.. anyways waiting for the next update ☝
the developer maybe like him or see he is reason game become popular
before last update everyone angry from slow build game and he start loss lot fan
when chris come with last move , game become top
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Adhdclassic

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Well this game/VN is based off a story from Literotica, and in it Chris does bag the wife. If I'm remembering rite they have a FWB relationship up until the husband comes over and sees Chris leaving. Then walks into their bedroom and can tell that by the bed that they were fucking, then she stops seeing Chris then he posts a bunch of pictures of the two them every where.

So the story I imagine will follow a similar way. But in story I don't think all the other people are in it,like the janitor or her dad's friend. Just trying to prepare this for the more sensitive players out there that Chris is like Thanos he's inevitable.
The book your talking about wasn't Chris it was Jake and it was never told who posted the sex online but it is assumed it was Kendra since she recorded the acts.
 
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Sadowdark

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Issue I have is the dialogue to stat in the 3rd chapter. i play the keep the marriage path in all the wife corruption/ntr games first. The stats i made sure was setup at its best points to have a faithful path. heres where my problem comes in. 3 dialogue points in the chapter match the stats we choose. but 3 major ones don't.

dialogue/stats match
1. elbows Chris when he gets touchy
2. David kisses her and she at first resist but then returns the kiss
3. she threatens to tell David if Chris doesn't leave the bathroom.

dialogue/stats don't match
1. when he comes in the room to go to bed she is hostile and rude
2. texting to jake on the phone and texting while in the bed with husband
3. Dreaming of other men and being turned on by it while admitting it wasn't her husband.

These don't help believe that there is a faithful path. Due to the inconsistency of those dialogue, she doesn't talk or act like the stat setup of a wife that doesn't believe her husband possibly didn't cheat.
Just my opinion.
There's another problem with choices, either you have them or you don't, you have to have a minimal interest in the character "statstu Anna has to be insecure", otherwise you have no choice on the faithful path, you get punished. For example, to reject Anna's second long groping of old fish Marvin in the pool when he grabs Anna's ass, you have to go to dinner with him. If you don't go to dinner with him, otherwise you can't interrupt it when Anne grabs her ass. Next example, you have to have status with Pigiwin at insecure and probably have to have surrender points, then at dinner you can reject his repeated offer to become a business partner. Which is unfortunate, because in chapter 2 I already rejected him. If you have a rejected Pigiwin, you have no choice, Anna automatically accepts. Next example, when Chris comes to dinner at Anna's and David is there too, if you probably have rudeness points with Anna and some status with Chris, you can probably say something about Anna's shorts, if I remember correctly. The creator never explained this, but I can tell he read my post because something will probably change.

,,There are other factors to consider, such as Anna's level of naughtiness and submissiveness, and the men that Anna lets get close to her,,
 

Adhdclassic

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There's another problem with choices, either you have them or you don't, you have to have a minimal interest in the character "statstu Anna has to be insecure", otherwise you have no choice on the faithful path, you get punished. For example, to reject Anna's second long groping of old fish Marvin in the pool when he grabs Anna's ass, you have to go to dinner with him. If you don't go to dinner with him, otherwise you can't interrupt it when Anne grabs her ass. Next example, you have to have status with Pigiwin at insecure and probably have to have surrender points, then at dinner you can reject his repeated offer to become a business partner. Which is unfortunate, because in chapter 2 I already rejected him. If you have a rejected Pigiwin, you have no choice, Anna automatically accepts. Next example, when Chris comes to dinner at Anna's and David is there too, if you probably have rudeness points with Anna and some status with Chris, you can probably say something about Anna's shorts, if I remember correctly. The creator never explained this, but I can tell he read my post because something will probably change.

,,There are other factors to consider, such as Anna's level of naughtiness and submissiveness, and the men that Anna lets get close to her,,
True but for me things like the dream you dream of the guys on the list but the list says you have no interest or you turned them down. Doesn't match. Some people would say it's a dream but you don't have sex dreams about people you aren't interested in. All goes to inconsistencies in the writing. Can't tell what is meant to be there or just didn't bother to fix it. Just my opinion.
 
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Adhdclassic

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The author can have Chris tease Anna through text messages. It doesn't hurt for her to send some nudes. With this you captivate the audience to continue playing.
A person on this thread awhile back actually did a sequence of pics depicting what you are talking about was hot.
 

Couto25

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Issue I have is the dialogue to stat in the 3rd chapter. i play the keep the marriage path in all the wife corruption/ntr games first. The stats i made sure was setup at its best points to have a faithful path. heres where my problem comes in. 3 dialogue points in the chapter match the stats we choose. but 3 major ones don't.

dialogue/stats match
1. elbows Chris when he gets touchy
2. David kisses her and she at first resist but then returns the kiss
3. she threatens to tell David if Chris doesn't leave the bathroom.

dialogue/stats don't match
1. when he comes in the room to go to bed she is hostile and rude
2. texting to jake on the phone and texting while in the bed with husband
3. Dreaming of other men and being turned on by it while admitting it wasn't her husband.

These don't help believe that there is a faithful path. Due to the inconsistency of those dialogue, she doesn't talk or act like the stat setup of a wife that doesn't believe her husband possibly didn't cheat.
Just my opinion.
Hmm .... this dialogue don't match .. think of it this way even in faithful path, Ana doubt her husband as of now And gave David an opportunity to prove his innocence. Her heart is already broken of whatever she heard from others about David. She doesn't trust David but she gave an opportunity to him to prove his innocence in front of Ana as she already saw pics. So until David provide any proof, she'll be rude. Take it this way if Alexia said that she is being approached by David to Ana, David will be untrustworthy until he prove that whatever Alexia told is wrong. In real world guys has to go through that even when they're framed for false accusations. They're being punished for the crimes they didn't do for years. That's how laws are. Guilty until proven right. Alexia bf doesn't just told Ana, he gave proof to Ana, that's how David was framed. If David give some proof besides whatever he say, he'll be faithful then.

About Jake and other guys well it's her personal perspective about other guys beside David storyline. They're in confusing part from Ana's perspective until Ana deny them going ahead. They can/cannot be the person of interest for Ana. So that's why dialogues are that way for the time being. Just an example if I ask a gamer personally don't like Marvin, Ana will still be given an option to masturbate thinking about Marvin because of his approach towards Ana. But going ahead Ana might get an option to turn him down if she don't like Marvin.
 

Sadowdark

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True but for me things like the dream you dream of the guys on the list but the list says you have no interest or you turned them down. Doesn't match. Some people would say it's a dream but you don't have sex dreams about people you aren't interested in. All goes to inconsistencies in the writing. Can't tell what is meant to be there or just didn't bother to fix it. Just my opinion.
I agree with you my friend 100%

There is still no dialogue when Anna masturbates in the shower on the faithful path, no mention of David which should be logical. I think the creator forgot to add dialogue. The next example when Anna decides to wear more daring clothes to work, she says it's her decision. Which is not true because at the beginning of the game it was Kendra who suggested it to her and Anna started dressing a bit more daringly, and then Penguin at dinner. The creator should fix this dialogue.
It still pisses me off that I can't choose to hit a fake friend or an old fish. The creator deprives me of that satisfaction. Because Anna does it automatically.
 

Sadowdark

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What he was trying to say was, Chris will be the first one to fuck Anna, right?:oops:
It's not just chatting on Messenger, right?
The creator said how Anna's corruption works: 1. Anna sees a penis, some time passes in the game. 2. touches a penis, some time passes in the game. 3. Anna has the consequences of point 2, some time passes in the game. So in this update Anna will be at point 3 - that is, she will face what happened in the shower. The fake friend will appear in some form, maybe via text message, or call Anna.
 

Sadowdark

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Well this game/VN is based off a story from Literotica, and in it Chris does bag the wife. If I'm remembering rite they have a FWB relationship up until the husband comes over and sees Chris leaving. Then walks into their bedroom and can tell that by the bed that they were fucking, then she stops seeing Chris then he posts a bunch of pictures of the two them every where.

So the story I imagine will follow a similar way. But in story I don't think all the other people are in it,like the janitor or her dad's friend. Just trying to prepare this for the more sensitive players out there that Chris is like Thanos he's inevitable.
:ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:The topic came back like a boomerang:ROFLMAO::eek:
 

Rabonixxx

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Why everyone playing this VN as a reverse porn /NTR game? Just a happy husband wife story?
Yeah I like NTR, but in this case I want a happy ending first, family succeding and getting a 2º child maybe :D. But after that, yeah, let Anna banged :ROFLMAO:.

I suppose it´s because IRL this would be sad, someone so obnovious to trap a family and destroy it, making all miserable there. And in the same way, that´s why this game is so good hahahaha.
 

Couto25

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Yeah I like NTR, but in this case I want a happy ending first, family succeding and getting a 2º child maybe :D. But after that, yeah, let Anna banged :ROFLMAO:.

I suppose it´s because IRL this would be sad, someone so obnovious to trap a family and destroy it, making all miserable there. And in the same way, that´s why this game is so good hahahaha.
There are genres ..I can understand people have different taste like romantic, horror, adventure, NTR etc....different genre movies and VN....Suppose I like romantic games or movies....I dont go to a movie like Diana lane's unfaithful and curse Diana Lane for cheating and say how can she cheat like a whore on poor richard gere...Or if I like horror / action goblin kind of movie/game..I will not play a human game and curse developer for not putting a ghost or goblin in that VN lol. Or if I like cheating wife/NTR, I will not go to a romantic movie and curse developer why cant that woman cheat on her husband with his friends lol what a boring game.

Few comments I find weird/Funny after watching the tag
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I mean look at these tags corruption, netorare, teasing ...yea romance is also there but mostly everyone get an idea from the tags that it's gonna be cheating / corrupt game even developer said it like don't play if someone don't like netorare. Maybe romance will be for some other character than David that's what I thought.

Now everyone is cursing the developer for not making Ana faithful lol...it's a VN about corruption lol but still MP gave an option to save the marriage but that is not the main theme of this story. Main theme might be how Ana will get corrupted and by whom. And how she is going to end. Obviously she'll get corrupted in all direction but where she will end after sleeping with every possible corrupted characters. Like if Ana doesn't end up with David and get a divorce, with whom she will end up with? Will there be a miserable ending for Ana after divorce/ she will find some corrupted character that will actually love her after getting her?
 

Gicoo

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Now everyone is cursing the developer for not making Ana faithful lol
I curse that they let David be faithful even though the tags suggest corruption, cheating, ntr etc.
Man can fuck people behind their partners back and getting seduced as well! The premise 1 minute into the game even is that a bad girl is trying to steal the husband from the nice girl.
 

Sadowdark

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Now everyone is cursing the developer for not making Ana faithful lol...it's a VN about corruption lol but still MP gave an option to save the marriage but that is not the main theme of this story. Main theme might be how Ana will get corrupted and by whom. And how she is going to end. Obviously she'll get corrupted in all direction but where she will end after sleeping with every possible corrupted characters. Like if Ana doesn't end up with David and get a divorce, with whom she will end up with? Will there be a miserable ending for Ana after divorce/ she will find some corrupted character that will actually love her after getting her?
The creator clearly said here what the married. path will be.
,,Generally speaking, I want the reader to have three experiences depending on choices: 1) A marriage that has a chance to succeed, with a wife who fights to remain faithful, 2) A marriage on unsteady ground, leaving the wife confused and vulnerable to other men, or 3) A marriage on the rocks, which has the wife scorned and angry. There are other factors to consider, such as Anna's level of naughtiness and submissiveness, and the men that Anna lets get close to her.,,
 

Rabonixxx

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There are genres ..I can understand people have different taste like romantic, horror, adventure, NTR etc....different genre movies and VN....Suppose I like romantic games or movies....I dont go to a movie like Diana lane's unfaithful and curse Diana Lane for cheating and say how can she cheat like a whore on poor richard gere...Or if I like horror / action goblin kind of movie/game..I will not play a human game and curse developer for not putting a ghost or goblin in that VN lol. Or if I like cheating wife/NTR, I will not go to a romantic movie and curse developer why cant that woman cheat on her husband with his friends lol what a boring game.

Few comments I find weird/Funny after watching the tag
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I mean look at these tags corruption, netorare, teasing ...yea romance is also there but mostly everyone get an idea from the tags that it's gonna be cheating / corrupt game even developer said it like don't play if someone don't like netorare. Maybe romance will be for some other character than David that's what I thought.

Now everyone is cursing the developer for not making Ana faithful lol...it's a VN about corruption lol but still MP gave an option to save the marriage but that is not the main theme of this story. Main theme might be how Ana will get corrupted and by whom. And how she is going to end. Obviously she'll get corrupted in all direction but where she will end after sleeping with every possible corrupted characters. Like if Ana doesn't end up with David and get a divorce, with whom she will end up with? Will there be a miserable ending for Ana after divorce/ she will find some corrupted character that will actually love her after getting her?
You could go to the movie, but probably you would be a masochist hahahaha; I don´t understand neither people who complain about a game when they know the tags, maybe it´s because they would like to be avoidable such as NTR or futa, and enjoy the game too, but when the main theme is that it´s impossible. The thing here is; this game is focused on NTR/Corruption or Romance? That´s what MP should make clear. If he did and it´s NTR/Corrption then yeah, you can play faithful but won´t be content, maybe 1 or 2 scenes, happens, as all NTR games or Futa games that give you options, avoidable? Yeah, but no content for you.

About the second part, it´s what I said, if this game was about David being a cuck or treating bad Anna and leaving her alone all the time then probably nobody would like that happy ending, only her leaving David and get the first guy she can.

This game is different in that aspect and the plot makes the husband if you are a good guy at first likeable, anyway, MP is doing a good job, maybe he could improve some details but overall game is fantastic, numbers are there and this section always has comments; and it´s only starting the game.
 
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