VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.4c] [Mr Palmer]

[Jakers15@]

The author can have Chris tease Anna through text messages. It doesn't hurt for her to send some nudes. With this you captivate the audience to continue playing.

 

[Adhdclassic]

The author can have Chris tease Anna through text messages. It doesn't hurt for her to send some nudes. With this you captivate the audience to continue playing.

A person on this thread awhile back actually did a sequence of pics depicting what you are talking about was hot.

 

[Couto25]

Issue I have is the dialogue to stat in the 3rd chapter. i play the keep the marriage path in all the wife corruption/ntr games first. The stats i made sure was setup at its best points to have a faithful path. heres where my problem comes in. 3 dialogue points in the chapter match the stats we choose. but 3 major ones don't.

dialogue/stats match
1. elbows Chris when he gets touchy
2. David kisses her and she at first resist but then returns the kiss
3. she threatens to tell David if Chris doesn't leave the bathroom.

dialogue/stats don't match
1. when he comes in the room to go to bed she is hostile and rude
2. texting to jake on the phone and texting while in the bed with husband
3. Dreaming of other men and being turned on by it while admitting it wasn't her husband.

These don't help believe that there is a faithful path. Due to the inconsistency of those dialogue, she doesn't talk or act like the stat setup of a wife that doesn't believe her husband possibly didn't cheat.
Just my opinion.

Hmm .... this dialogue don't match .. think of it this way even in faithful path, Ana doubt her husband as of now And gave David an opportunity to prove his innocence. Her heart is already broken of whatever she heard from others about David. She doesn't trust David but she gave an opportunity to him to prove his innocence in front of Ana as she already saw pics. So until David provide any proof, she'll be rude. Take it this way if Alexia said that she is being approached by David to Ana, David will be untrustworthy until he prove that whatever Alexia told is wrong. In real world guys has to go through that even when they're framed for false accusations. They're being punished for the crimes they didn't do for years. That's how laws are. Guilty until proven right. Alexia bf doesn't just told Ana, he gave proof to Ana, that's how David was framed. If David give some proof besides whatever he say, he'll be faithful then.

About Jake and other guys well it's her personal perspective about other guys beside David storyline. They're in confusing part from Ana's perspective until Ana deny them going ahead. They can/cannot be the person of interest for Ana. So that's why dialogues are that way for the time being. Just an example if I ask a gamer personally don't like Marvin, Ana will still be given an option to masturbate thinking about Marvin because of his approach towards Ana. But going ahead Ana might get an option to turn him down if she don't like Marvin.

 

[Sadowdark]

True but for me things like the dream you dream of the guys on the list but the list says you have no interest or you turned them down. Doesn't match. Some people would say it's a dream but you don't have sex dreams about people you aren't interested in. All goes to inconsistencies in the writing. Can't tell what is meant to be there or just didn't bother to fix it. Just my opinion.

I agree with you my friend 100%

There is still no dialogue when Anna masturbates in the shower on the faithful path, no mention of David which should be logical. I think the creator forgot to add dialogue. The next example when Anna decides to wear more daring clothes to work, she says it's her decision. Which is not true because at the beginning of the game it was Kendra who suggested it to her and Anna started dressing a bit more daringly, and then Penguin at dinner. The creator should fix this dialogue.
It still pisses me off that I can't choose to hit a fake friend or an old fish. The creator deprives me of that satisfaction. Because Anna does it automatically.

 

[Sadowdark]

What he was trying to say was, Chris will be the first one to fuck Anna, right?
It's not just chatting on Messenger, right?

The creator said how Anna's corruption works: 1. Anna sees a penis, some time passes in the game. 2. touches a penis, some time passes in the game. 3. Anna has the consequences of point 2, some time passes in the game. So in this update Anna will be at point 3 - that is, she will face what happened in the shower. The fake friend will appear in some form, maybe via text message, or call Anna.

 

[Sadowdark]

Well this game/VN is based off a story from Literotica, and in it Chris does bag the wife. If I'm remembering rite they have a FWB relationship up until the husband comes over and sees Chris leaving. Then walks into their bedroom and can tell that by the bed that they were fucking, then she stops seeing Chris then he posts a bunch of pictures of the two them every where.

So the story I imagine will follow a similar way. But in story I don't think all the other people are in it,like the janitor or her dad's friend. Just trying to prepare this for the more sensitive players out there that Chris is like Thanos he's inevitable.

The topic came back like a boomerang

 

[Couto25]

Why everyone playing this VN as a reverse porn /NTR game? Just a happy husband wife story?

 

[Rabonixxx]

Why everyone playing this VN as a reverse porn /NTR game? Just a happy husband wife story?

Yeah I like NTR, but in this case I want a happy ending first, family succeding and getting a 2º child maybe . But after that, yeah, let Anna banged .

I suppose it´s because IRL this would be sad, someone so obnovious to trap a family and destroy it, making all miserable there. And in the same way, that´s why this game is so good hahahaha.

 

[Couto25]

Yeah I like NTR, but in this case I want a happy ending first, family succeding and getting a 2º child maybe . But after that, yeah, let Anna banged .

I suppose it´s because IRL this would be sad, someone so obnovious to trap a family and destroy it, making all miserable there. And in the same way, that´s why this game is so good hahahaha.

There are genres ..I can understand people have different taste like romantic, horror, adventure, NTR etc....different genre movies and VN....Suppose I like romantic games or movies....I dont go to a movie like Diana lane's unfaithful and curse Diana Lane for cheating and say how can she cheat like a whore on poor richard gere...Or if I like horror / action goblin kind of movie/game..I will not play a human game and curse developer for not putting a ghost or goblin in that VN lol. Or if I like cheating wife/NTR, I will not go to a romantic movie and curse developer why cant that woman cheat on her husband with his friends lol what a boring game.

Few comments I find weird/Funny after watching the tag

I mean look at these tags corruption, netorare, teasing ...yea romance is also there but mostly everyone get an idea from the tags that it's gonna be cheating / corrupt game even developer said it like don't play if someone don't like netorare. Maybe romance will be for some other character than David that's what I thought.

Now everyone is cursing the developer for not making Ana faithful lol...it's a VN about corruption lol but still MP gave an option to save the marriage but that is not the main theme of this story. Main theme might be how Ana will get corrupted and by whom. And how she is going to end. Obviously she'll get corrupted in all direction but where she will end after sleeping with every possible corrupted characters. Like if Ana doesn't end up with David and get a divorce, with whom she will end up with? Will there be a miserable ending for Ana after divorce/ she will find some corrupted character that will actually love her after getting her?

 

[Gicoo]

Now everyone is cursing the developer for not making Ana faithful lol

I curse that they let David be faithful even though the tags suggest corruption, cheating, ntr etc.
Man can fuck people behind their partners back and getting seduced as well! The premise 1 minute into the game even is that a bad girl is trying to steal the husband from the nice girl.

 

[Sadowdark]

Now everyone is cursing the developer for not making Ana faithful lol...it's a VN about corruption lol but still MP gave an option to save the marriage but that is not the main theme of this story. Main theme might be how Ana will get corrupted and by whom. And how she is going to end. Obviously she'll get corrupted in all direction but where she will end after sleeping with every possible corrupted characters. Like if Ana doesn't end up with David and get a divorce, with whom she will end up with? Will there be a miserable ending for Ana after divorce/ she will find some corrupted character that will actually love her after getting her?

The creator clearly said here what the married. path will be.
,,Generally speaking, I want the reader to have three experiences depending on choices: 1) A marriage that has a chance to succeed, with a wife who fights to remain faithful, 2) A marriage on unsteady ground, leaving the wife confused and vulnerable to other men, or 3) A marriage on the rocks, which has the wife scorned and angry. There are other factors to consider, such as Anna's level of naughtiness and submissiveness, and the men that Anna lets get close to her.,,

 

[Rabonixxx]

There are genres ..I can understand people have different taste like romantic, horror, adventure, NTR etc....different genre movies and VN....Suppose I like romantic games or movies....I dont go to a movie like Diana lane's unfaithful and curse Diana Lane for cheating and say how can she cheat like a whore on poor richard gere...Or if I like horror / action goblin kind of movie/game..I will not play a human game and curse developer for not putting a ghost or goblin in that VN lol. Or if I like cheating wife/NTR, I will not go to a romantic movie and curse developer why cant that woman cheat on her husband with his friends lol what a boring game.

Few comments I find weird/Funny after watching the tag
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I mean look at these tags corruption, netorare, teasing ...yea romance is also there but mostly everyone get an idea from the tags that it's gonna be cheating / corrupt game even developer said it like don't play if someone don't like netorare. Maybe romance will be for some other character than David that's what I thought.

Now everyone is cursing the developer for not making Ana faithful lol...it's a VN about corruption lol but still MP gave an option to save the marriage but that is not the main theme of this story. Main theme might be how Ana will get corrupted and by whom. And how she is going to end. Obviously she'll get corrupted in all direction but where she will end after sleeping with every possible corrupted characters. Like if Ana doesn't end up with David and get a divorce, with whom she will end up with? Will there be a miserable ending for Ana after divorce/ she will find some corrupted character that will actually love her after getting her?

You could go to the movie, but probably you would be a masochist hahahaha; I don´t understand neither people who complain about a game when they know the tags, maybe it´s because they would like to be avoidable such as NTR or futa, and enjoy the game too, but when the main theme is that it´s impossible. The thing here is; this game is focused on NTR/Corruption or Romance? That´s what MP should make clear. If he did and it´s NTR/Corrption then yeah, you can play faithful but won´t be content, maybe 1 or 2 scenes, happens, as all NTR games or Futa games that give you options, avoidable? Yeah, but no content for you.

About the second part, it´s what I said, if this game was about David being a cuck or treating bad Anna and leaving her alone all the time then probably nobody would like that happy ending, only her leaving David and get the first guy she can.

This game is different in that aspect and the plot makes the husband if you are a good guy at first likeable, anyway, MP is doing a good job, maybe he could improve some details but overall game is fantastic, numbers are there and this section always has comments; and it´s only starting the game.

 

[Gicoo]

I don´t understand neither people who complain about a game when they know the tags

Because the tags aren't clear enough.

 

[Rabonixxx]

Because the tags aren't clear enough.

The moment you see Romance and NTR you can expect both, you play the game or ask here and see which is most predominant. In this case both are correct, there is romance (even if it´s a drama right now) and NTR too.

 

[Adhdclassic]

I am curious what Anna is going to do next to Chris. She's yelled at him, hit him and now threatened him. Think she will crush his balls next.

 

[Couto25]

You could go to the movie, but probably you would be a masochist hahahaha; I don´t understand neither people who complain about a game when they know the tags, maybe it´s because they would like to be avoidable such as NTR or futa, and enjoy the game too, but when the main theme is that it´s impossible. The thing here is; this game is focused on NTR/Corruption or Romance? That´s what MP should make clear. If he did and it´s NTR/Corrption then yeah, you can play faithful but won´t be content, maybe 1 or 2 scenes, happens, as all NTR games or Futa games that give you options, avoidable? Yeah, but no content for you.

About the second part, it´s what I said, if this game was about David being a cuck or treating bad Anna and leaving her alone all the time then probably nobody would like that happy ending, only her leaving David and get the first guy she can.

This game is different in that aspect and the plot makes the husband if you are a good guy at first likeable, anyway, MP is doing a good job, maybe he could improve some details but overall game is fantastic, numbers are there and this section always has comments; and it´s only starting the game.

It's pretty clear by now that the game is about NTR/corruption but yea you can avoid paths with some characters that you don't like. The game is not about staying in faithful path n avoid all corruption because there will hardly be any content on that path...the best you'll get is save marriage by avoiding everyone moves.

But that's not the game is about. There will not be any content on faithful path maybe during the end, but it will mostly be avoid everyone's moves...The game is mostly to corrupt Ana, and enjoy whatever fantasies one has in any path.

It will mostly like making a wife forcefully staying faithful if whole theme is built to cheat. More like if you're playing unfaithful movie as Diane lane and rejecting all phone calls and rejecting meeting with the guy who cheat lol..what's the point in that? When developer/writer build a content for Diane lane/Ana in this case to cheat.. what's the point to force her from not doing that lol.

 

[Couto25]

I am curious what Anna is going to do next to Chris. She's yelled at him, hit him and now threatened him. Think she will crush his balls next.

There will not be any content if someone denied Chris. That's what he said. Update will be short if someone rejected Chris. Probably like Ana taking shower alone or sleep alone something like that.

 

[Adhdclassic]

There will not be any content if someone denied Chris. That's what he said. Update will be short if someone rejected Chris. Probably like Ana taking shower alone or sleep alone something like that.

I mean future wise.

 

[Sadowdark]

It's pretty clear by now that the game is about NTR/corruption but yea you can avoid paths with some characters that you don't like. The game is not about staying in faithful path n avoid all corruption because there will hardly be any content on that path...the best you'll get is save marriage by avoiding everyone moves.

But that's not the game is about. There will not be any content on faithful path maybe during the end, but it will mostly be avoid everyone's moves...The game is mostly to corrupt Ana, and enjoy whatever fantasies one has in any path.

It will mostly like making a wife forcefully staying faithful if whole theme is built to cheat. More like if you're playing unfaithful movie as Diane lane and rejecting all phone calls and rejecting meeting with the guy who cheat lol..what's the point in that? When developer/writer build a content for Diane lane/Ana in this case to cheat.. what's the point to force her from not doing that lol.

You can always play on all the paths

 

[Couto25]

I don't think story wise Chris will be the naughtiest cheating story for Ana in this VN. Yea Chris is one of the guys with whom she can easily be corrupted due to his role as a best friend. Same with Marvin who might get sex because of sympathy.

I think most seductive/dominating one might be with Hank / Leonard / Jake because of roles and power of info that they have in this VN and how they can use it that will be interesting to know. Irrespective of how they look lol..they will be dominating over her. Grant and Rob are kinda so so....Grant can take advantage of her in a worse way. Marciel maybe if someone has interracial bbc fantasy, they can enjoy..plus he also have Alexia info..as of now we didnt saw much of Marciel so idk what kind of role he will have over Ana.