VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

[Sadowdark]

Jake will not have sex in office...maybe next week storyline...this week will only be tease fest most probably with touching n groping all stuff like hj bj bobjob etc.

That video cam recording will be sent to David then fight btw David/ana will grow...then faithful and corrupt path will go different ways.

Loooooooooong way to go.

If corruption is going with same speed as AWAM them Chris will be the first to get Ana to sex. Most probably on Sunday storyline.

Office sex will happen when Ana fought with David and she already did sex with someone...it's most probably gonna be next week storyline in Hank path and in her cabin with Marvin and Jake. Maybe with Tim n Dale if he kept stretching.

Next week we will see Alexia n all storyline. And Ana David counseling with doctor carol.

Until Sunday it's pure tease fest and he said weekend will be long update... 2026 mid to cover all tease fest including Hank/Ana trip, poker night, Chris/Ana first sex. David might get hint,...David/Ana fight.. appointment with doctor carol..

Catching kendra will be next week storyline when Ana will be fully corrupted and both Ana and David storyline get sign of Kendra involvement behind these things. As of now he's focussed on developing Ana corruption slowly in all paths the same way Awam is doing..main story will move mostly from next week onwards most probably.

There will be no poker, it was a joke that Anna said to her fake friend. Anna will only cheat on an uncertain and corrupt path and if you decide on a faithful one. (and why do I think so, because the creator could have forced the scenes with the fake friend with Anna in the shower on the faithful path, when Anna gives the fake friend a BJ. Why didn't he? He said stick to the choices on the faithful path and nothing bad will happen to Anna.There will be no meeting between Anna and Dr. Carol because why would it prolong the update, if there is, Anna will call her and ask if she can start working out at the gym. But you, my friend, like to create sent stories where there was no mention of it in the game.

 

[Sadowdark]

Would love to see a scene like this in the game, Anna on a boat having drinks with her girlfriends
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The only friends Anna has are Kendra, probably that gossipy Beatsy who always sits at the front desk, and Anna mother. Because Alexa and the receptionist aren't her friends.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

Jake will not have sex in office...maybe next week storyline...this week will only be tease fest most probably with touching n groping all stuff like hj bj bobjob etc.

That video cam recording will be sent to David then fight btw David/ana will grow...then faithful and corrupt path will go different ways.

Loooooooooong way to go.

If corruption is going with same speed as AWAM them Chris will be the first to get Ana to sex. Most probably on Sunday storyline.

Office sex will happen when Ana fought with David and she already did sex with someone...it's most probably gonna be next week storyline in Hank path and in her cabin with Marvin and Jake. Maybe with Tim n Dale if he kept stretching.

Next week we will see Alexia n all storyline. And Ana David counseling with doctor carol.

Until Sunday it's pure tease fest and he said weekend will be long update... 2026 mid to cover all tease fest including Hank/Ana trip, poker night, Chris/Ana first sex. David might get hint,...David/Ana fight.. appointment with doctor carol..

Catching kendra will be next week storyline when Ana will be fully corrupted and both Ana and David storyline get sign of Kendra involvement behind these things. As of now he's focussed on developing Ana corruption slowly in all paths the same way Awam is doing..main story will move mostly from next week onwards most probably.

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Jake will not have sex in office...maybe next week storyline...this week will only be tease fest most probably with touching n groping all stuff like hj bj bobjob etc. I can see your point that there will be no office sex between Anna/Jake. But time wise it seems a little soon since it appears Mr. Palmer is building the tension between the two. From a plot point of view, having Anna thinking about Jake would be the next progression. Right now, Jake is playing the part of a "harmless" guy with girlfriend to off foot Anna. A couple more events and an opportunity to build the relationship with sexual tension seems where MP is taking that route. Of all the path it's the most boring. But the first time between those two would likely be at a restaurant over a business lunch (high end restaurant, not that Kendra/Anna Cafe) would be my guess.

That video cam recording will be sent to David then fight btw David/ana will grow...then faithful and corrupt path will go different ways. Awh back to the spy camera plot.
No matter how it's discussed the whole idea doesn't seem to work. As discussed, blackmail is really weak because the blackmail has to be of such a level that it actually has leverage to work. Here what there is a video of Jake and Anna(?), or Hank and Anna(?) maybe accidently getting Timothy/Dale and Anna(?) and for such a video what can one get for it and by whom?
Then there is the problem of Marvin on two levels. First if a video comes out early in the story, the most likely suspect would be Marvin and Anna really would kill off any future relationship with him. And still, what really is in it for him? Marvin isn't stupid either--thing is Marvin is most likely going to have to get his reward first so how far off in the future is that going to be? And is Marvin just going to be satisfied with one go with Anna? To make the whole Marvin angle work is Marvin is getting some and suddenly gets cutoff thus resorting to some revenge (maybe if he finds out Jake is also tagging Anna is a revenge motivation).

But as a build toward an ending, a video coming out would be the final card played that sets up endings where David is crushed and destroyed with him doing....?

Loooooooooong way to go.

If corruption is going with same speed as AWAM them Chris will be the first to get Ana to sex. Most probably on Sunday storyline. He's the most logical... I'd rather he wasn't but if Anna was willing to get frisky with a BJ (something she doesn't like), assuming Chris finds some game to really seduce Anna, it wouldn't take much for him to plow Anna. The only problem is there is nothing setup for Anna and Chris to get together... pizza night as a plot is getting old. And with David and Anna's relationship disintegrating it'll be harder to have Chris over. Personally I am still betting that the Chris/Anna main event will come after a huge fight between Anna and David and Anna storms out and needs some comforting.

Office sex will happen when Ana fought with David and she already did sex with someone...it's most probably gonna be next week storyline in Hank path and in her cabin with Marvin and Jake. Maybe with Tim n Dale if he kept stretching. The whole office sex thing really does follow the Timothy/Dale angle. Two very important plot points have been laid down. One, Dale/Timothy got lucky and know they can try again with Anna. And second, Anna is vulnerable to their attention (or it seems any man's advances).

Now what I hope Mr. Palmer does (if those Timothy and Dale are in the mix) is have Anna totally aware how dangerous and foolish it is to be alone with those two and it being her own rationalization, fooling herself and inner need for adventure that makes the sheep walk into the wolf's den.

But if Hank is successful with Anna, yah office fool between the two is most likely.

Next week we will see Alexia n all storyline. And Ana David counseling with doctor carol. Really? Love to hear your thoughts on that one.

Until Sunday it's pure tease fest and he said weekend will be long update... 2026 mid to cover all tease fest including Hank/Ana trip, poker night, Chris/Ana first sex. David might get hint,...David/Ana fight.. appointment with doctor carol.. Poke night doesn't strike me as much of an event but an opportunity for someone. But with a house full of men, it would be hard to pull off any serious sex but a lot of teasing. Now a visit with the good doctor can put a lot of issues and subplots in motion as well as set the field for complications.

Catching kendra will be next week storyline when Ana will be fully corrupted and both Ana and David storyline get sign of Kendra involvement behind these things. As of now he's focussed on developing Ana corruption slowly in all paths the same way Awam is doing..main story will move mostly from next week onwards most probably. It does seem a long way off the ending. Now MP can make just one outcome for Kendra (some serious Karma maybe) or more than likely there are two endings both good or bad for Kendra.

 

[Couto25]

There will be no poker, it was a joke that Anna said to her fake friend. Anna will only cheat on an uncertain and corrupt path and if you decide on a faithful one. (and why do I think so, because the creator could have forced the scenes with the fake friend with Anna in the shower on the faithful path, when Anna gives the fake friend a BJ. Why didn't he? He said stick to the choices on the faithful path and nothing bad will happen to Anna.

we will see..who knows jake will be open for romantic route for Ana ...David didnt cheated but Alexia was topless in front of him..Ana will be framed in same way for faithful route somehow. not sure what Jake path will be for faithful route...maybe a friendly hug and a kiss after jake telling kendra plan or opening his feelings for Ana and Ana rejecting Jake same as David rejected Alexia but got framed ....that picture might piss david off who knows? I am just talking about corrupt path..not faithful route.

 

[Sadowdark]

we will see..who knows jake will be open for romantic route for Ana ...David didnt cheated but Alexia was topless in front of him..Ana will be framed in same way for faithful route somehow. not sure what Jake path will be for faithful route...maybe a friendly hug and a kiss after jake telling kendra plan or opening his feelings for Ana and Ana rejecting Jake same as David rejected Alexia but got framed ....that picture might piss david off who knows? I am just talking about corrupt path..not faithful route.

I'm sorry, my friend

 

[Couto25]

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Jake will not have sex in office...maybe next week storyline...this week will only be tease fest most probably with touching n groping all stuff like hj bj bobjob etc. I can see your point that there will be no office sex between Anna/Jake. But time wise it seems a little soon since it appears Mr. Palmer is building the tension between the two. From a plot point of view, having Anna thinking about Jake would be the next progression. Right now, Jake is playing the part of a "harmless" guy with girlfriend to off foot Anna. A couple more events and an opportunity to build the relationship with sexual tension seems where MP is taking that route. Of all the path it's the most boring. But the first time between those two would likely be at a restaurant over a business lunch (high end restaurant, not that Kendra/Anna Cafe) would be my guess.

That video cam recording will be sent to David then fight btw David/ana will grow...then faithful and corrupt path will go different ways. Awh back to the spy camera plot.
No matter how it's discussed the whole idea doesn't seem to work. As discussed, blackmail is really weak because the blackmail has to be of such a level that it actually has leverage to work. Here what there is a video of Jake and Anna(?), or Hank and Anna(?) maybe accidently getting Timothy/Dale and Anna(?) and for such a video what can one get for it and by whom?
Then there is the problem of Marvin on two levels. First if a video comes out early in the story, the most likely suspect would be Marvin and Anna really would kill off any future relationship with him. And still, what really is in it for him? Marvin isn't stupid either--thing is Marvin is most likely going to have to get his reward first so how far off in the future is that going to be? And is Marvin just going to be satisfied with one go with Anna? To make the whole Marvin angle work is Marvin is getting some and suddenly gets cutoff thus resorting to some revenge (maybe if he finds out Jake is also tagging Anna is a revenge motivation).

But as a build toward an ending, a video coming out would be the final card played that sets up endings where David is crushed and destroyed with him doing....?

Loooooooooong way to go.

If corruption is going with same speed as AWAM them Chris will be the first to get Ana to sex. Most probably on Sunday storyline. He's the most logical... I'd rather he wasn't but if Anna was willing to get frisky with a BJ (something she doesn't like), assuming Chris finds some game to really seduce Anna, it wouldn't take much for him to plow Anna. The only problem is there is nothing setup for Anna and Chris to get together... pizza night as a plot is getting old. And with David and Anna's relationship disintegrating it'll be harder to have Chris over. Personally I am still betting that the Chris/Anna main event will come after a huge fight between Anna and David and Anna storms out and needs some comforting.

Office sex will happen when Ana fought with David and she already did sex with someone...it's most probably gonna be next week storyline in Hank path and in her cabin with Marvin and Jake. Maybe with Tim n Dale if he kept stretching. The whole office sex thing really does follow the Timothy/Dale angle. Two very important plot points have been laid down. One, Dale/Timothy got lucky and know they can try again with Anna. And second, Anna is vulnerable to their attention (or it seems any man's advances).

Now what I hope Mr. Palmer does (if those Timothy and Dale are in the mix) is have Anna totally aware how dangerous and foolish it is to be alone with those two and it being her own rationalization, fooling herself and inner need for adventure that makes the sheep walk into the wolf's den.

But if Hank is successful with Anna, yah office fool between the two is most likely.

Next week we will see Alexia n all storyline. And Ana David counseling with doctor carol. Really? Love to hear your thoughts on that one.

Until Sunday it's pure tease fest and he said weekend will be long update... 2026 mid to cover all tease fest including Hank/Ana trip, poker night, Chris/Ana first sex. David might get hint,...David/Ana fight.. appointment with doctor carol.. Poke night doesn't strike me as much of an event but an opportunity for someone. But with a house full of men, it would be hard to pull off any serious sex but a lot of teasing. Now a visit with the good doctor can put a lot of issues and subplots in motion as well as set the field for complications.

Catching kendra will be next week storyline when Ana will be fully corrupted and both Ana and David storyline get sign of Kendra involvement behind these things. As of now he's focussed on developing Ana corruption slowly in all paths the same way Awam is doing..main story will move mostly from next week onwards most probably. It does seem a long way off the ending. Now MP can make just one outcome for Kendra (some serious Karma maybe) or more than likely there are two endings both good or bad for Kendra.

No there will be no blackmail path in office cam video. The whole point of Kendra is to take a clip and show it to David that she was better choice for him than Ana to get him back...There will be no blackmail...Kendra will give that to David via someone or from an unknown number to increase distance between Ana and David.....David will somehow find out it's Kendra that's what my guess is after getting that hint.

Poker night will happen where Chris will share nudes and panty of Ana to Leonard on David storyline not Ana storyline. Maybe in the background story but it will happen. Like last weekend where Chris stayed at David's home after poker night. By poker night, I meant David use to hangout with his friends on Sunday and Chris end up staying at David's house. Same way.

Well Alexia story has to come up somewhere in next week storyline that's my guess is...because the main story is not about Kendra trying to get Ana to cheat and collect evidence that's the first part of it on David's story. The second part of David story is his business is going down..so either he will get a loan for his company or Alexia will show up in Ana's or David's storyline. Alexia is important link because of 2 point ...first to reveal Kendra plot and second to prove that David is innocent and maybe one more to get David's business money back on track....i dont know how it will happen..Maybe via Marcel storyline who is waiting to do sex with Ana in exchange of Alexia information .....somewhere Ana / David will have to catch her because in faithful route she is the only person who can tell it was Kendra. So either faithful/corrupt route Alexia has important role. But how they will catch her we will see next week storyline.

 

[DarthSpitz717]

No there will be no blackmail path in office cam video. The whole point of Kendra is to take a clip and show it to David that she was better choice for him than Ana to get him back...There will be no blackmail...Kendra will give that to David via someone or from an unknown number to increase distance between Ana and David.....David will somehow find out it's Kendra that's what my guess is after getting that hint.

Poker night will happen where Chris will share nudes and panty of Ana to Leonard on David storyline not Ana storyline. Maybe in the background story but it will happen. Like last weekend where Chris stayed at David's home after poker night. By poker night, I meant David use to hangout with his friends on Sunday and Chris end up staying at David's house. Same way.

Well Alexia story has to come up somewhere in next week storyline that's my guess is...because the main story is not about Kendra trying to get Ana to cheat and collect evidence that's the first part of it on David's story. The second part of David story is his business is going down..so either he will get a loan for his company or Alexia will show up in Ana's or David's storyline. via Marcel storyline who is waiting to do sex with Ana in exchange of Alexia information .....somewhere Ana / David will have to catch her because in faithful route she is the only person who can tell it was Kendra. So either faithful/corrupt route Alexia has important role. But how they will catch her we will see next week storyline.

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All these thought lines track and do work... Story plot with pacing and tempo seems like it will be a year or so before all unfolds

A lot of potential plot holes pop up but plenty of time to lay down the groundwork that they shouldn't appear as the story plays out.

No there will be no blackmail path in office cam video. glad someone else sees the weakness of the whole blackmail thing and happy another can see taking secret videos has a more devastating effect that suits Kendra's purposes.

The second part of David story is his business is going down.. maybe you or someone else can tell me if this plot twist is some random act of God or was its part of Kendra's whole scheme. We know David's business problems are a major part of the game because it adds a level of stress on David and Anna. On one hand it would seem something Kendra would do and perhaps she has the tech ability to pull it off--but on the other it just seems to be some bad luck that the company got hacked. Oh and ya I can really make it a point just how stupid David and his father are especially when it comes to wire fraud crimes in todays' world.

Alexia is important link because of 2 point ...first to reveal Kendra plot and second to prove that David is innocent and maybe one more to get David's business money back on track....i dont know how it will happen Question is why? I can't recall but isn't Alexia a stripper? Now not to make over generalized statements, but that is often a very ugly world (stripping) and not a lot of people who have remorse or guilt... yes I've seen the good, the bad and the ugly side of that industry and the odds are not good.

...somewhere Ana / David will have to catch her because in faithful route she is the only person who can tell it was Kendra. So either faithful/corrupt route Alexia has important role. But how they will catch her we will see next week storyline. There are many other ways to save the marriage. I thought Alexia left town? But that aside the easy "fix" is have Leonard just confess to Anna... or Jake or Marvin betrays Kendra (either Jake or Marvin just get pissed at her... want a measure of revenge...etc.). Kendra could get too clever and pull something off and she gets caught in her own web. The time she pulled a gun on Marcel--was there camera's that caught Kendra on video? Now I don't really think that will be in the story at all--just using it as an example of Kendra being stupid {Kendra already ran Alexia off so that loose end was already taken care of not to go out of her way to whack Marcel}


Poker night will happen where Chris will share nudes and panty of Ana to Leonard on David storyline not Ana storyline. Maybe in the background story but it will happen. Like last weekend where Chris stayed at David's home after poker night. By poker night, I meant David use to hangout with his friends on Sunday and Chris end up staying at David's house. Same way. I can see Chris bragging to Leonard and showing Anna's pictures, but not Robinson... but you do bring up a very, VERY good plot line...that of David somehow discovering Anna's pictures on Chris' phone

The whole thing about David is he is a total yutz. David knows what the worst possibility can be at this point and yet he isn't making plans like Anna is. Going back to his business who doesn't firewall and protect their company's accounts...sigh. See one of my hobbies is to go gold prospecting but I know enough never to return to a dry hole...and David keeps going to that gym looking for Alexia. And WTF, even IF Alexia did return to the gym and David does find her there what makes it that Alexia would agree to come clean and confess...what the Hell could David do about that then? And still even though David suspects every man hitting on Anna, the one man he knows is a womanizer is Chris, but Chris gets a pass...nor has David hidden cameras of his own just in case of the worst. The only clue David has is he knows he's been setup, and he do....what?

 

[Couto25]

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All these thought lines track and do work... Story plot with pacing and tempo seems like it will be a year or so before all unfolds

A lot of potential plot holes pop up but plenty of time to lay down the groundwork that they shouldn't appear as the story plays out.

No there will be no blackmail path in office cam video. glad someone else sees the weakness of the whole blackmail thing and happy another can see taking secret videos has a more devastating effect that suits Kendra's purposes.

The second part of David story is his business is going down.. maybe you or someone else can tell me if this plot twist is some random act of God or was its part of Kendra's whole scheme. We know David's business problems are a major part of the game because it adds a level of stress on David and Anna. On one hand it would seem something Kendra would do and perhaps she has the tech ability to pull it off--but on the other it just seems to be some bad luck that the company got hacked. Oh and ya I can really make it a point just how stupid David and his father are especially when it comes to wire fraud crimes in todays' world.

Alexia is important link because of 2 point ...first to reveal Kendra plot and second to prove that David is innocent and maybe one more to get David's business money back on track....i dont know how it will happen Question is why? I can't recall but isn't Alexia a stripper? Now not to make over generalized statements, but that is often a very ugly world (stripping) and not a lot of people who have remorse or guilt... yes I've seen the good, the bad and the ugly side of that industry and the odds are not good.

...somewhere Ana / David will have to catch her because in faithful route she is the only person who can tell it was Kendra. So either faithful/corrupt route Alexia has important role. But how they will catch her we will see next week storyline. There are many other ways to save the marriage. I thought Alexia left town? But that aside the easy "fix" is have Leonard just confess to Anna... or Jake or Marvin betrays Kendra (either Jake or Marvin just get pissed at her... want a measure of revenge...etc.). Kendra could get too clever and pull something off and she gets caught in her own web. The time she pulled a gun on Marcel--was there camera's that caught Kendra on video? Now I don't really think that will be in the story at all--just using it as an example of Kendra being stupid {Kendra already ran Alexia off so that loose end was already taken care of not to go out of her way to whack Marcel}


Poker night will happen where Chris will share nudes and panty of Ana to Leonard on David storyline not Ana storyline. Maybe in the background story but it will happen. Like last weekend where Chris stayed at David's home after poker night. By poker night, I meant David use to hangout with his friends on Sunday and Chris end up staying at David's house. Same way. I can see Chris bragging to Leonard and showing Anna's pictures, but not Robinson... but you do bring up a very, VERY good plot line...that of David somehow discovering Anna's pictures on Chris' phone

The whole thing about David is he is a total yutz. David knows what the worst possibility can be at this point and yet he isn't making plans like Anna is. Going back to his business who doesn't firewall and protect their company's accounts...sigh. See one of my hobbies is to go gold prospecting but I know enough never to return to a dry hole...and David keeps going to that gym looking for Alexia. And WTF, even IF Alexia did return to the gym and David does find her there what makes it that Alexia would agree to come clean and confess...what the Hell could David do about that then? And still even though David suspects every man hitting on Anna, the one man he knows is a womanizer is Chris, but Chris gets a pass...nor has David hidden cameras of his own just in case of the worst. The only clue David has is he knows he's been setup, and he do....what?

Alexia being a stripper has nothing to do with it...The whole point of Alexia comeback is to prove David is innocent that's why he's not getting respect from Ana. She's the only one who can prove it. Leonard cannot confess to Ana/David...he just know there was third woman that's all. He doesn't know that it's Kendra. Neither he knows that David is innocent. Leonard didn't caught them in car bj photo.

Marcel didn't saw kendra too. No cam were there..But Marcel knows Alexia address and where she lives/gone.

David won't catch Chris phone. David will catch Ana when she already did sex with someone. It's as per original VN...David came to know about Ana and Jake when she already cheated on him. After that this marriage counseling will happen. So Ana will be caught after sex not before sex and then divorce/forgiveness will happen in uncertain/corrupt path.

Kendra is smart ...even if Jake and Marvin betray kendra, they don't know that kendra was behind David's business takedown and David cheating plot. Kendra just gave them platform to fulfill their desire. Kendra didn't asked Marvin/Jake to fuck Ana. Neither she asked tim/dale...She is just supporting them on how and when they can fuck Ana.. Kendra didn't ask them to do sex with Ana..its their own desire, she's just helping them to achieve it..Rest part they don't know. Or why kendra's doing it they don't know reason behind it that she wants David/Ana separated. Only Alexia knows that motive of Kendra.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Agree Alexia is going to make a return in the faithful path. believe David is going to find her.

 

[Sadowdark]

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The only clue David has is he knows he's been setup, and he do....what?

David I am considering hiring a private investigator, but I am concerned that it could devastate the company's already strained finances.

 

[Sadowdark]

Alexia being a stripper has nothing to do with it...The whole point of Alexia comeback is to prove David is innocent that's why he's not getting respect from Ana. She's the only one who can prove it. Leonard cannot confess to Ana/David...he just know there was third woman that's all. He doesn't know that it's Kendra. Neither he knows that David is innocent. Leonard didn't caught them in car bj photo.

Marcel didn't saw kendra too. No cam were there..But Marcel knows Alexia address and where she lives/gone.

David won't catch Chris phone. David will catch Ana when she already did sex with someone. It's as per original VN...David came to know about Ana and Jake when she already cheated on him. After that this marriage counseling will happen. So Ana will be caught after sex not before sex and then divorce/forgiveness will happen in uncertain/corrupt path.

Kendra is smart ...even if Jake and Marvin betray kendra, they don't know that kendra was behind David's business takedown and David cheating plot. Kendra just gave them platform to fulfill their desire. Kendra didn't asked Marvin/Jake to fuck Ana. Neither she asked tim/dale...She is just supporting them on how and when they can fuck Ana.. Kendra didn't ask them to do sex with Ana..its their own desire, she's just helping them to achieve it..Rest part they don't know. Or why kendra's doing it they don't know reason behind it that she wants David/Ana separated. Only Alexia knows that motive of Kendra.

When David gets the tape from Anna's office of Jake hugging Anna. She'll be framed for fake infidelity. That'll be enough evidence for Kendra. And isn't Alexa an exclusive escort? Even Kendra says how much I have to pay her. The story won't be the same as in the game, the creator has said that many times. I think Kendra is too stupid to organize all this herself? But she did say that when she doesn't need the old fish anymore, she'll send her for carats, just like the penguin.

 

[Couto25]

When David gets the tape from Anna's office of Jake hugging Anna. She'll be framed for fake infidelity. That'll be enough evidence for Kendra. And isn't Alexa an exclusive escort? Even Kendra says how much I have to pay her. The story won't be the same as in the game, the creator has said that many times. I think Kendra is too stupid to organize all this herself? But she did say that when she doesn't need the old fish anymore, she'll send her for carats, just like the penguin.

The original story is about uncertain path... offcourse he's developing full faithful and corrupt path... that'll be different from original. But as of now I can see same trend. Whenever Ana will be framed that'll create a distance and that's when counseling with Dr Carol will come in place. Since it's a tease fest week hence Ana will not do sex with Jake even in corrupt path..so she will not cheat completely. It maybe because of her sexual desire and go with the flow thingy...but kendra will not get caught just because of that. There will be heated argument where David doubting will increase on Ana to last anger level. He will catch Ana in corrupt path after telling her off or pissing her more to go for Jake And after she does sex with few people.

Alexia is required.... Kendra'll not expose herself..I am sure she will use her pawn to do that for this week to create more distance between them. In the end of original VN David and Ana get together after forgiveness and they both decided to get disconnected from social media accounts...so something might happen via her social media account. Not sure what but we'll see.

Alexia doesn't matter if she's stripper or escort...but the only way to prove David innocence is Alexia before kendra get caught. And that's where Marcel path might be needed in the story. Ana will only listen to David and David will forgive Ana if he will be proven innocent....els why Ana will need David's forgiveness if in her mind David is still a cheater? Why she'll listen to David? That's why David needed to prove his innocence first then Kendra will be caught then forgiveness/divorce will happen.

No matter what MP say the VN will not follow the original story but events are same as of now. VN is just a Lil variation of output in faithful and corrupt path but same event is lined up. Orginal story is more about uncertain path. So basically what MP is doing is ... he's taking all these events from main story and giving it a little variation in outcomes of faithful and corrupt path

 

[Sadowdark]

The original story is about uncertain path... offcourse he's developing full faithful and corrupt path... that'll be different from original. But as of now I can see same trend. Whenever Ana will be framed that'll create a distance and that's when counseling with Dr Carol will come in place. Since it's a tease fest week hence Ana will not do sex with Jake even in corrupt path..so she will not cheat completely. It maybe because of her sexual desire and go with the flow thingy...but kendra will not get caught just because of that. There will be heated argument where David doubting will increase on Ana to last anger level. He will catch Ana in corrupt path after telling her off or pissing her more to go for Jake And after she does sex with few people.

Alexia is required.... Kendra'll not expose herself..I am sure she will use her pawn to do that for this week to create more distance between them. In the end of original VN David and Ana get together after forgiveness and they both decided to get disconnected from social media accounts...so something might happen via her social media account. Not sure what but we'll see.

Alexia doesn't matter if she's stripper or escort...but the only way to prove David innocence is Alexia before kendra get caught. And that's where Marcel path might be needed in the story. Ana will only listen to David and David will forgive Ana if he will be proven innocent....els why Ana will need David's forgiveness if in her mind David is still a cheater? Why she'll listen to David? That's why David needed to prove his innocence first then Kendra will be caught then forgiveness/divorce will happen.

No matter what MP say the VN will not follow the original story but events are same as of now. VN is just a Lil variation of output in faithful and corrupt path but same event is lined up. Orginal story is more about uncertain path. So basically what MP is doing is ... he's taking all these events from main story and giving it a little variation in outcomes of faithful and corrupt path

Surely when David gets fake proof of Anna's cheating from the hidden camera that she's cuddling up to Jake, won't he go talk to Anna? Anna will tell him where she got the footage from and he'll say welcome to the same club. Will he then guess that someone is recording her in the office? She won't go talk to Jake and in time they'll get to Kendra. But the creator said that Marcel is a touch character like that (BBC fetish) and won't have a big role in the plot. Anna will ask Dr. Cartol if she can work out now and she'll let her. Anna will go to Marcel to be her personal trainer. Kendra will continue to corrupt Anna through Marcel's hands. I didn't read the whole story, just the first few chapters so as not to compare it to the game. Even one of the users posted the ending of the whole story here. Which pissed off the creator himself. He said there won't be such an ending. So let's see.

 

[Couto25]

Surely when David gets fake proof of Anna's cheating from the hidden camera that she's cuddling up to Jake, won't he go talk to Anna? Anna will tell him where she got the footage from and he'll say welcome to the same club. Will he then guess that someone is recording her in the office? She won't go talk to Jake and in time they'll get to Kendra. But the creator said that Marcel is a touch character like that (BBC fetish) and won't have a big role in the plot. Anna will ask Dr. Cartol if she can work out now and she'll let her. Anna will go to Marcel to be her personal trainer. Kendra will continue to corrupt Anna through Marcel's hands. I didn't read the whole story, just the first few chapters so as not to compare it to the game. Even one of the users posted the ending of the whole story here. Which pissed off the creator himself. He said there won't be such an ending. So let's see.

Nope Kendra will not show it to David right away...Whenever Ana will do sex with Jake, that's the time Kendra will tell David. Thats how David will find where Ana is and with whom Ana is gone in the hotel..by getting those hints given by Kendra pawn or herself. She will keep it as an evidence for now. I think for the time being Marvin will enjoy for himself watching those videos from Ana's office..his job is at stake so he will take advantage of Ana and jerk on Ana activity with Jake or TIm/Dale. As of now we just know Kendra wants cam in her office. we will see later on what's her plan is..whether to snoop her password or what...it can be more beside just sex tape lol..she can snoop her password and message David from Ana's account herself when the time comes...

And obviously Kendra want David back so she will confront David..She will not hide from him...but she will do it after proving to him that she was better choice for David then Ana after corrupting Ana completely upto the point of sex. Rather than Kendra getting caught by David...She will confront David herself or give videos to David whenever she will be ready to confront him with cheating evidence.

Kendra is not asking Jake or Marvin to fuck Ana... it's their own desire...kendra is just building a path to achieve that. Like Marvin want to fuck Ana...Kendra told him she'll platter Ana to him when the time comes and then he can do whatever he wants. So kendra is just kind of bridge who's pushing Ana towards sex like a wingman for Jake or Marvin. Marvin and Jake cannot blame kendra in corrupt path that they fuck Ana because kendra asked to do it...they will fuck Ana because they want to do it....kendra is just telling them when and how. In return kendra ask for favour for her wingman service that's all.

 

[Sadowdark]

Kendra is not asking Jake or Marvin to fuck Ana... it's their own desire...kendra is just building a path to achieve that. Like Marvin want to fuck Ana...Kendra told him she'll platter Ana to him when the time comes and then he can do whatever he wants. So kendra is just kind of bridge who's pushing Ana towards sex like a wingman for Jake or Marvin. Marvin and Jake cannot blame kendra in corrupt path that they fuck Ana because kendra asked to do it...they will fuck Ana because they want to do it....kendra is just telling them when and how. In return kendra ask for favour for her wingman service that's all.

I disagree here. Jake asks during Happy Hour if he can fuck Anna when he wants to get her off. Kendra tells him if she's up for it then yes. When the old fish is upset after the pool Kendra tells him he was too pushy. So Kendra has the power over him and she'll decide when they can have sex with Anna. She doesn't forget that they still have to provide her with proof that they'll have sex with Anna.

 

[NewTricks]

Personally, I believe that there will be a blackmail path if the player gives in too early just to extend the length of the VN to match the length of the path that sees Anna being reluctant. Naturally, if she isn't cooperating with Kendra's machinations she will not have the evidence she wants to convince David to end the marriage. However, if she does give it up fairly easily the show must go on, so to speak. Keep in mind that David is her obsession, but not the only thing she wants. Another driving motivation that she has is the success that Anna has enjoyed at her expense. There may be other concessions that she desires to extract from her. Or she may just want to humiliate her further because she is a mean bitch.

 

[Couto25]

I disagree here. Jake asks during Happy Hour if he can fuck Anna when he wants to get her off. Kendra tells him if she's up for it then yes. When the old fish is upset after the pool Kendra tells him he was too pushy. So Kendra has the power over him and she'll decide when they can have sex with Anna. She doesn't forget that they still have to provide her with proof that they'll have sex with Anna.

Obviously Kendra want Ana to cheat but she knows when Ana will reject them..plus she has her own plan going around....so obviously kendra is controlling them but she is giving them what they want in return of what she want back and that's evidence....she tells the reason every time why she doesn't want them to do it at that particular time...because Ana is not corrupted up to that time and they will blew it up or there is no way for her to collect evidence if they go for it...so she's playing smartly at the moment. But it's their own choice.

 

[Sadowdark]

Obviously Kendra want Ana to cheat but she knows when Ana will reject them..plus she has her own plan going around....so obviously kendra is controlling them but she is giving them what they want in return of what she want back and that's evidence....she tells the reason every time why she doesn't want them to do it at that particular time...because Ana is not corrupted up to that time and they will blew it up or there is no way for her to collect evidence if they go for it...so she's playing smartly at the moment. But it's their own choice.

It's not their own choice. Because if they fuck Anna too quickly and without informing Kendra and not providing her with evidence, her plan doesn't make sense and the whiners along the way can ruin it if they want to fuck Anna on their own.

 

[Couto25]

It's not their own choice. Because if they fuck Anna too quickly and without informing Kendra and not providing her with evidence, her plan doesn't make sense and the whiners along the way can ruin it if they want to fuck Anna on their own.

What I meant was it's their choice to fuck Ana , it;s their own fantasy...They don't want to fuck ana because Kendra asking them to fuck Ana...they just dont know how...Kendra is providing them path from which will benefit both of them...like win win strategy. They did tried individually ....Jake already said Ana is giving blue balls to him for 2 years lol.

 

[Bane71]

Guys, don’t slander Anna, she’ll just start getting interested in music.
Perhaps even David will like it if, after training, she plays his flute too.