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yea so whats the problem with that in corrupt route?? obviously in corrupt route we wanted to see Ana naked...i think you forgot how miserable and poor corrupt route was developed for first 2 chapter or for like 1.5 years when there was no nude scene of Ana and she had sex with david with clothes on and masturbate with clothes on and all we saw is Antagonist jerking all the time...

So hell yes, Ana nudity was 100% requirement at that time and Ana sex is required too now after 3 years of development...there is no point to extend the tease unnecessary and give blue balls all the time...we already know all the background of why Ana and david is acting that way...there is nothing more he can do to provide background of why ana chosing other guys on corrupt route as far as background is concerned...The only thing left for him is whether to take forward as tease fest or show directly which he chose for the time being as a tease fest.

These things will be repetitive in almost all upcoming update for this week story with just different character storyline if it goes in tease fest way. Like David and Ana arguement ...leading to Ana getting pissed off...and ana going further to other character...Only the antagonist will change, rest will remain same...so its on MP how long he can extend and how long these slow corruption lovers keep enjoying it counting one pubic hair per update. Just an example she gave BJ to chris, next Marvin might finger her...I mean these scenes will just remain a tease fest...where we already know why Ana is doing it and what will be David reaction to that. Different types of blueball tease , beacause of same old reasons either she think david cheated or daddy issue...the story will be stuck until she will actually cheat. There is not much left for MP to explain on why Ana will cheat on corrupt route. Now it's just a time game of how many days he will delay it.
I stated after the shower scene that the pacing of a believable story necessitates that they don't stop or pull back and we next got a blowjob.

I have no issue with the pacing and applaud this dev for not being shitty or milky with it. Realistically, and I know from IRL experience, that you can't get to the point of where she is with Chris and suddenly decided to stop or pull back. That's not how humans work. It's how shitty devs and stories work (cough AWAM cough L&P cough) but not a believable story.

They need to fuck soon...and then the story can branch from there with others at whatever pace seem realistic with each. However, it has been written with Chris in a way where there is no going back or stopping in a believable way. Going from the flirting to touching to nude in shower handjob to blowjob has been perfect.

From experience, the flirting phase is the longest and it was in this story. People will spend weeks, months or even years dancing around it all but once physical contact begins it's like a torrent from there. It's not this insane BS that AWAM does where it's two steps forward and a step back, then one step forward and two steps back and then no steps and then back to 2 and then...whatever.
It hits a point where it's just a free fall and this story hit that mark between her and Chris.

The rest can develop at their own pace! No need to necessarily make her a town slut all the sudden but with Chris they need to fuck very soon.to maintain that believability.
 

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I stated after the shower scene that the pacing of a believable story necessitates that they don't stop or pull back and we next got a blowjob.

I have no issue with the pacing and applaud this dev for not being shitty or milky with it. Realistically, and I know from IRL experience, that you can't get to the point of where she is with Chris and suddenly decided to stop or pull back. That's not how humans work. It's how shitty devs and stories work (cough AWAM cough L&P cough) but not a believable story.

They need to fuck soon...and then the story can branch from there with others at whatever pace seem realistic with each. However, it has been written with Chris in a way where there is no going back or stopping in a believable way. Going from the flirting to touching to nude in shower handjob to blowjob has been perfect.

From experience, the flirting phase is the longest and it was in this story. People will spend weeks, months or even years dancing around it all but once physical contact begins it's like a torrent from there. It's not this insane BS that AWAM does where it's two steps forward and a step back, then one step forward and two steps back and then no steps and then back to 2 and then...whatever.
It hits a point where it's just a free fall and this story hit that mark between her and Chris.

The rest can develop at their own pace! No need to necessarily make her a town slut all the sudden but with Chris they need to fuck very soon.to maintain that believability.
Well yeah, the next lewd scene of Chris will surely be a sex scene i don't think she will back off after givin' a BJ, that would make nonsence and just torture for the Chris fans but it will not be in the next update and the update after either
Mr Palmer need to find a good timin' for the event and as you allready know it's time for Hank to get some attention and Marvin to try his attempts.....
 

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yea not corruption but at that time masturbating thinking about others was considered as a part of corruption but no nudity. And we get to see all dick scenes in every update..sometimes of chris then marvin then grant lol...so yup that feedback was required for him to fix the scene properly for straight gamers and not to create scene for gay gamers.
The dialogue where Anna masturbates by herself in the shower is also poorly written. Because on the corruption route she lists everyone she fantasized about, dreamed about. It makes sense. But on the loyalty route she says there's no room for David there, which is clearly a mistake in the dialogue written by MP (Because you have the status "Anna wants to stay faithful to David and wants her marriage to continue to work". There are many mistakes like this in the dialogue in the game. Like when she decides to wear more daring clothes to work. Kendra suggested it to her in Ch1. And then in Ch3 Penguin. And then there's the dialogue that it was just Anna's decision, which is not true.
 
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I stated after the shower scene that the pacing of a believable story necessitates that they don't stop or pull back and we next got a blowjob.

I have no issue with the pacing and applaud this dev for not being shitty or milky with it. Realistically, and I know from IRL experience, that you can't get to the point of where she is with Chris and suddenly decided to stop or pull back. That's not how humans work. It's how shitty devs and stories work (cough AWAM cough L&P cough) but not a believable story.

They need to fuck soon...and then the story can branch from there with others at whatever pace seem realistic with each. However, it has been written with Chris in a way where there is no going back or stopping in a believable way. Going from the flirting to touching to nude in shower handjob to blowjob has been perfect.

From experience, the flirting phase is the longest and it was in this story. People will spend weeks, months or even years dancing around it all but once physical contact begins it's like a torrent from there. It's not this insane BS that AWAM does where it's two steps forward and a step back, then one step forward and two steps back and then no steps and then back to 2 and then...whatever.
It hits a point where it's just a free fall and this story hit that mark between her and Chris.

The rest can develop at their own pace! No need to necessarily make her a town slut all the sudden but with Chris they need to fuck very soon.to maintain that believability.
The point that AWAM managed to dance step forward and step back is because of so many characters storyline. Where he jump from school to dylan to sam to ellie to patricia all the time and keep the corruption of sophia upto the flirting for next generation ....There are total 25 antagonist in AWAM lol...Imagine the time that he will take to create scenes with all 25 individuals upto the level of sex with tease fest...He's currently going with the pace of 3 handjobs per year in Sophia storyline. I dont even want to consider Dylan and Ellie as MC yet lol.

Here Chris got BJ agreed but the next meeting of Chris if we exclude mobile sex with him that will happen somewhere in this week probably ...because Chris needs to collect nude for leonard. So if we remove that short virtual meet of Ana/Chris as per storyline and look forward for real and physical meet of Chris/Ana storyline. It might be not earlier than Sunday night. Give it after 4 updates Thursday, Friday, Saturday and the upcoming wednesday update. Next year Sept/Oct with normal speed.

I guess that time we will see sex...so soon is not that soon...And Sunday, i am just predicting as the earliest...as of now Ana has 9 antagonist storyline going on. Who knows MP has different plan for sunday story and Ana will go to Rob or jake that day lol...then sunday will also end up as tease fest. It's still hard to guess when she will have her first penetration scene yet. And how he plan for corruption whether individually or as a whole for example if Ana gave BJ to Chris, will she be giving BJ directly to say Marcel or in Marcel storyline the corruption will start from zero with groping scene for the first day (The AWAM stepdance technique) lol...so it depends on alot of factors...But i guess most probably, at the earliest mid next year Ana will have sex scene. If not then 2027 it is lol.
 
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The point that AWAM managed to dance step forward and step back is because of so many characters storyline. Where he jump from school to dylan to sam to ellie to patricia all the time and keep the corruption of sophia upto the flirting for next generation ....There are total 25 antagonist in AWAM lol...Imagine the time that he will take to create scenes with all 25 individuals upto the level of sex with tease fest...He's currently going with the pace of 3 handjobs per year in Sophia storyline. I dont even want to consider Dylan and Ellie as MC yet lol.

Here Chris got BJ agreed but the next meeting of Chris if we exclude mobile sex with him that will happen somewhere in this week probably ...because Chris needs to collect nude for leonard. So if we remove that short virtual meet of Ana/Chris as per storyline and look forward for real and physical meet of Chris/Ana storyline. It might be not earlier than Sunday night. Give it after 4 updates Thursday, Friday, Saturday and the upcoming wednesday update. Next year April with normal speed.

I guess that time we will see sex...so soon is not that soon...And Sunday, i am just predicting as the earliest...as of now Ana has 9 antagonist storyline going on. Who knows MP has different plan for sunday story and Ana will go to Rob or jake that day lol...then sunday will also end up as tease fest. It's still hard to guess when she will have her first penetration scene yet. And how he plan for corruption whether individually or as a whole for example if Ana gave BJ to Chris, will she be giving BJ directly to say Marcel or in Marcel storyline the corruption will start from zero with groping scene for the first day (The AWAM stepdance technique) lol...so it depends on alot of factors...But i guess most probably, at the earliest mid next year Ana will have sex scene. If not then 2027 it is lol.
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The point that AWAM managed to dance step forward and step back is because of so many characters storyline. Where he jump from school to dylan to sam to ellie to patricia all the time and keep the corruption of sophia upto the flirting for next generation ....There are total 25 antagonist in AWAM lol...Imagine the time that he will take to create scenes with all 25 individuals upto the level of sex with tease fest...He's currently going with the pace of 3 handjobs per year in Sophia storyline. I dont even want to consider Dylan and Ellie as MC yet lol. Yep, you are onto L&P with AWAM. I guess L&P is going to pick up from Dylan/Sophia date night which was a critical change in their relationship dynamic AFTER ABOUT A YEAR OF 5 SIDE STORIES THAT HAS NO RELAVANCE TO ANY OF THE MAIN PLOTS. That means that major Dylan/Sophia even that is part of the main plots is dimmed to memories of players.

Here Chris got BJ agreed but the next meeting of Chris if we exclude mobile sex with him that will happen somewhere in this week probably ...because Chris needs to collect nude for leonard. So if we remove that short virtual meet of Ana/Chris as per storyline and look forward for real and physical meet of Chris/Ana storyline. It might be not earlier than Sunday night. Give it after 4 updates Thursday, Friday, Saturday and the upcoming wednesday update. Next year April with normal speed. That requires a pretext that brings Chris and Anna together... something has to happen. Take your pick as to an event that does get Chris and Anna together that sets the mood and setting for it to happen--just about any writing device MP uses would be plausible. It just comes down to how well the scene is written to make it creditable.

I guess that time we will see sex...so soon is not that soon...And Sunday, i am just predicting as the earliest...as of now Ana has 9 antagonist storyline going on. Who knows MP has different plan for sunday story and Ana will go to Rob or jake that day lol...then sunday will also end up as tease fest. It's still hard to guess when she will have her first penetration scene yet. And how he plan for corruption whether individually or as a whole for example if Ana gave BJ to Chris, will she be giving BJ directly to say Marcel or in Marcel storyline the corruption will start from zero with groping scene for the first day (The AWAM stepdance technique) lol...so it depends on alot of factors...But i guess most probably, at the earliest mid next year Ana will have sex scene. If not then 2027 it is lol. I been wonder about a chicken and egg argument how MP ought to introduce sex to the story. Your guess about "Sunday" is as good as anyone else's guess. But what I been wondering is the BREAKING OF THE ICE moment for Anna. Someone is going to be first. I suspect everyone thinks so and so should be first with the only problem being keeping Anna in character.

Anna as a character is very well defined as to who she is, how she thinks, and what her reactions are. Safe to say Anna isn't going to get out of character and just walk over to Robinson's house and say, "take me." So, when Anna takes a lover(s) that will be a breaking of the ice moment for Anna. With the question in my mind of Chicken and an egg should that moment be with the most obvious antagonist or someone like Timothy/Dale, or that an event goes way farther than it should that sets Anna up to take a lover (just as an example Marvin gets a little too much from Anna that lowers her inhibitions that her own corruption makes it possible to take the next step with X, Y, or Z).
 

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The point that AWAM managed to dance step forward and step back is because of so many characters storyline. Where he jump from school to dylan to sam to ellie to patricia all the time and keep the corruption of sophia upto the flirting for next generation ....There are total 25 antagonist in AWAM lol...Imagine the time that he will take to create scenes with all 25 individuals upto the level of sex with tease fest...He's currently going with the pace of 3 handjobs per year in Sophia storyline. I dont even want to consider Dylan and Ellie as MC yet lol. Yep, you are onto L&P with AWAM. I guess L&P is going to pick up from Dylan/Sophia date night which was a critical change in their relationship dynamic AFTER ABOUT A YEAR OF 5 SIDE STORIES THAT HAS NO RELAVANCE TO ANY OF THE MAIN PLOTS. That means that major Dylan/Sophia even that is part of the main plots is dimmed to memories of players.

Here Chris got BJ agreed but the next meeting of Chris if we exclude mobile sex with him that will happen somewhere in this week probably ...because Chris needs to collect nude for leonard. So if we remove that short virtual meet of Ana/Chris as per storyline and look forward for real and physical meet of Chris/Ana storyline. It might be not earlier than Sunday night. Give it after 4 updates Thursday, Friday, Saturday and the upcoming wednesday update. Next year April with normal speed. That requires a pretext that brings Chris and Anna together... something has to happen. Take your pick as to an event that does get Chris and Anna together that sets the mood and setting for it to happen--just about any writing device MP uses would be plausible. It just comes down to how well the scene is written to make it creditable.

I guess that time we will see sex...so soon is not that soon...And Sunday, i am just predicting as the earliest...as of now Ana has 9 antagonist storyline going on. Who knows MP has different plan for sunday story and Ana will go to Rob or jake that day lol...then sunday will also end up as tease fest. It's still hard to guess when she will have her first penetration scene yet. And how he plan for corruption whether individually or as a whole for example if Ana gave BJ to Chris, will she be giving BJ directly to say Marcel or in Marcel storyline the corruption will start from zero with groping scene for the first day (The AWAM stepdance technique) lol...so it depends on alot of factors...But i guess most probably, at the earliest mid next year Ana will have sex scene. If not then 2027 it is lol. I been wonder about a chicken and egg argument how MP ought to introduce sex to the story. Your guess about "Sunday" is as good as anyone else's guess. But what I been wondering is the BREAKING OF THE ICE moment for Anna. Someone is going to be first. I suspect everyone thinks so and so should be first with the only problem being keeping Anna in character.

Anna as a character is very well defined as to who she is, how she thinks, and what her reactions are. Safe to say Anna isn't going to get out of character and just walk over to Robinson's house and say, "take me." So, when Anna takes a lover(s) that will be a breaking of the ice moment for Anna. With the question in my mind of Chicken and an egg should that moment be with the most obvious antagonist or someone like Timothy/Dale, or that an event goes way farther than it should that sets Anna up to take a lover (just as an example Marvin gets a little too much from Anna that lowers her inhibitions that her own corruption makes it possible to take the next step with X, Y, or Z).
Breaking of Ice will happen anytime ...Lets consider the last update..with ongoing story with everyone..MP does manage to introduce many reasons for it Ana/David argument that piss Ana off. Now maybe its out of jealousy or David trying to control Ana or Ana find some evidence about Alexia from Rob or Leonard...Leonard didn't told anything yet but he has evidence right that Alexia was showing boobs to David..beside that there was another girl who paid Alexia...so until he get what he wants he will not tell them that. Second is her daddy issues of pleasing old people. And third is she's not getting satisfied sexually ...and She's getting wet which Dr Carol told her to take care of her sexual needs herself if things with David is not going well....Now a combination of these 3 can spark with any antagonist path...like Rob was massaging but obviously it was tease fest so david phone call interruption was there else it could have continued to sex...because just before Rob meeting she had an argument with David, She liked Rob as he relaxed her tension and she thinks that he can be potential guy to date unlike other perverts from David friend and She was getting wet all day.....and she already gave HJ to chris in the morning so she could have gone beyond that too because Rob also told her that Leonard has evidence of David cheating, and she needed someone like Rob to please her at that very moment ...so Breaking of Ice could have happened.. But in the end it's on MP...like even if all mental and emotional parameters supports Ana to go for sex.....MP added one more parameter to check her with vaginal touch first....so that's what marvin will do in the upcoming update...we will see.
 

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Breaking of Ice will happen anytime ...Lets consider the last update..with ongoing story with everyone..MP does manage to introduce many reasons for it Ana/David argument that piss Ana off. Now maybe its out of jealousy or David trying to control Ana or Ana find some evidence about Alexia from Rob or Leonard...Leonard didn't told anything yet but he has evidence right that Alexia was showing boobs to David..beside that there was another girl who paid Alexia...so until he get what he wants he will not tell them that. Second is her daddy issues of pleasing old people. And third is she's not getting satisfied sexually ...and She's getting wet which Dr Carol told her to take care of her sexual needs herself if things with David is not going well....Now a combination of these 3 can spark with any antagonist path...like Rob was massaging but obviously it was tease fest so david phone call interruption was there else it could have continued to sex...because just before Rob meeting she had an argument with David, She liked Rob as he relaxed her tension and she thinks that he can be potential guy to date unlike other perverts from David friend and She was getting wet all day.....and she already gave HJ to chris in the morning so she could have gone beyond that too because Rob also told her that Leonard has evidence of David cheating, and she needed someone like Rob to please her at that very moment ...so Breaking of Ice could have happened.. But in the end it's on MP...like even if all mental and emotional parameters supports Ana to go for sex.....MP added one more parameter to check her with vaginal touch first....so that's what marvin will do in the upcoming update...we will see.

Rob Cobra repeated the same rumor to Anna that Anna had heard from his fake friend, he said he didn't know anything more, but if he knew anything he would let Anna know. Not that Leonard had evidence of betrayal. That touch you speak of, "touch of the pussy", by the old fish. You know MP can't go too far on the faithful path. Because he will alienate his patrons who also support him on the faithful path. Besides he would contradict himself because he keeps saying that there is a faithful path, if he sticks to it Anna won't betray,
 
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