VN Ren'Py A Perfect Marriage [v0.7.3b] [Mr Palmer]

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Couto25

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Sadowdark said:
It's not even about the corruption path. It should show Anne naked doing normal bathroom activities, changing clothes, and having sex with David.
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yea not corruption but at that time masturbating thinking about others was considered as a part of corruption but no nudity. And we get to see all dick scenes in every update..sometimes of chris then marvin then grant lol...so yup that feedback was required for him to fix the scene properly for straight gamers and not to create scene for gay gamers.
 
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yea so whats the problem with that in corrupt route?? obviously in corrupt route we wanted to see Ana naked...i think you forgot how miserable and poor corrupt route was developed for first 2 chapter or for like 1.5 years when there was no nude scene of Ana and she had sex with david with clothes on and masturbate with clothes on and all we saw is Antagonist jerking all the time...

So hell yes, Ana nudity was 100% requirement at that time and Ana sex is required too now after 3 years of development...there is no point to extend the tease unnecessary and give blue balls all the time...we already know all the background of why Ana and david is acting that way...there is nothing more he can do to provide background of why ana chosing other guys on corrupt route as far as background is concerned...The only thing left for him is whether to take forward as tease fest or show directly which he chose for the time being as a tease fest.

These things will be repetitive in almost all upcoming update for this week story with just different character storyline if it goes in tease fest way. Like David and Ana arguement ...leading to Ana getting pissed off...and ana going further to other character...Only the antagonist will change, rest will remain same...so its on MP how long he can extend and how long these slow corruption lovers keep enjoying it counting one pubic hair per update. Just an example she gave BJ to chris, next Marvin might finger her...I mean these scenes will just remain a tease fest...where we already know why Ana is doing it and what will be David reaction to that. Different types of blueball tease , beacause of same old reasons either she think david cheated or daddy issue...the story will be stuck until she will actually cheat. There is not much left for MP to explain on why Ana will cheat on corrupt route. Now it's just a time game of how many days he will delay it.
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I stated after the shower scene that the pacing of a believable story necessitates that they don't stop or pull back and we next got a blowjob.

I have no issue with the pacing and applaud this dev for not being shitty or milky with it. Realistically, and I know from IRL experience, that you can't get to the point of where she is with Chris and suddenly decided to stop or pull back. That's not how humans work. It's how shitty devs and stories work (cough AWAM cough L&P cough) but not a believable story.

They need to fuck soon...and then the story can branch from there with others at whatever pace seem realistic with each. However, it has been written with Chris in a way where there is no going back or stopping in a believable way. Going from the flirting to touching to nude in shower handjob to blowjob has been perfect.

From experience, the flirting phase is the longest and it was in this story. People will spend weeks, months or even years dancing around it all but once physical contact begins it's like a torrent from there. It's not this insane BS that AWAM does where it's two steps forward and a step back, then one step forward and two steps back and then no steps and then back to 2 and then...whatever.
It hits a point where it's just a free fall and this story hit that mark between her and Chris.

The rest can develop at their own pace! No need to necessarily make her a town slut all the sudden but with Chris they need to fuck very soon.to maintain that believability.
 
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AlfredBundy4 said:
I stated after the shower scene that the pacing of a believable story necessitates that they don't stop or pull back and we next got a blowjob.

I have no issue with the pacing and applaud this dev for not being shitty or milky with it. Realistically, and I know from IRL experience, that you can't get to the point of where she is with Chris and suddenly decided to stop or pull back. That's not how humans work. It's how shitty devs and stories work (cough AWAM cough L&P cough) but not a believable story.

They need to fuck soon...and then the story can branch from there with others at whatever pace seem realistic with each. However, it has been written with Chris in a way where there is no going back or stopping in a believable way. Going from the flirting to touching to nude in shower handjob to blowjob has been perfect.

From experience, the flirting phase is the longest and it was in this story. People will spend weeks, months or even years dancing around it all but once physical contact begins it's like a torrent from there. It's not this insane BS that AWAM does where it's two steps forward and a step back, then one step forward and two steps back and then no steps and then back to 2 and then...whatever.
It hits a point where it's just a free fall and this story hit that mark between her and Chris.

The rest can develop at their own pace! No need to necessarily make her a town slut all the sudden but with Chris they need to fuck very soon.to maintain that believability.
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Well yeah, the next lewd scene of Chris will surely be a sex scene i don't think she will back off after givin' a BJ, that would make nonsence and just torture for the Chris fans but it will not be in the next update and the update after either
Mr Palmer need to find a good timin' for the event and as you allready know it's time for Hank to get some attention and Marvin to try his attempts.....
 
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Couto25 said:
yea not corruption but at that time masturbating thinking about others was considered as a part of corruption but no nudity. And we get to see all dick scenes in every update..sometimes of chris then marvin then grant lol...so yup that feedback was required for him to fix the scene properly for straight gamers and not to create scene for gay gamers.
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The dialogue where Anna masturbates by herself in the shower is also poorly written. Because on the corruption route she lists everyone she fantasized about, dreamed about. It makes sense. But on the loyalty route she says there's no room for David there, which is clearly a mistake in the dialogue written by MP (Because you have the status "Anna wants to stay faithful to David and wants her marriage to continue to work". There are many mistakes like this in the dialogue in the game. Like when she decides to wear more daring clothes to work. Kendra suggested it to her in Ch1. And then in Ch3 Penguin. And then there's the dialogue that it was just Anna's decision, which is not true.
 
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