HTML A Prince's Tale [v0.4.0] [tiny-pastry]

[Nineanon]

Removing the silly gifs and making the art consistent is great, but the story is a boring mess now, the hook is gone and it doesn't know what it wants to be.

 

[Reapergod36]

Removing the silly gifs and making the art consistent is great, but the story is a boring mess now, the hook is gone and it doesn't know what it wants to be.

It wants to be a self-insert-zero-consequence-zero-conflict-acceptance-story. So you got it right, a boring mess.