VN Ren'Py A Promise Best Left Unkept - Aya Edition [v0.7.6] [Hangover Cat]

[HangoverCat]

I don't know where the "fast corruption" comes from. The game is 330k words long right now, and even if we subtract the 50k words shared with the original, it's still 280k words. By that point, in the original, Laura had at least three endings where she's fully corrupted. If the argument is that she was corrupted with less sex scenes, then I will say you didn't actually read the story.

 

[mda228]

The sequel is still fappable, but... it's not a psychological rollercoaster anymore. Aya's path as sidecharacter in original game was way more touching and amusingly tragic than her path as a main character in her own game. Hangover back then knew how to make your game experience enjoyable through your suffering.
Aya is basically Laura 2 now. Lots of sex scenes and all are the same "fucking in front of oblivious Harry" formula with no character progress whatsoever. Hangover is not even trying to do something different. The definition of insanity as it is. It's not that Aya with each bang becomes more and more corrupted, it's just that she decided to become a whore at random fuck. Aya this game is a bitch who tries to justify her enjoy for Luca's cock with parent's issues. Wonder who does this remind me of?
Still, Laura's fall was deeper and had the defining "no-turn-back" moment when she had an argument with Harry over the phone having sex so she hang up and asked Luca to continue fucking her for her own pleasure. Aya here is already a slut and somehow still loves this dull piece of wood Harry and still acts like she used to? Also - don't care about her backstory. It was all better when it was a mystery.

 

[FoutL]

I don't know where the "fast corruption" comes from. The game is 330k words long right now, and even if we subtract the 50k words shared with the original, it's still 280k words. By that point, in the original, Laura had at least three endings where she's fully corrupted. If the argument is that she was corrupted with less sex scenes, then I will say you didn't actually read the story.

I think it is possible that it feels that way because Aya felt harder to corrupt so her fall seems more rapid than Laura

 

[BL45T]

Ok sex scenes were damn good this update. This man is creative af even with the most cliched scenes. Dope update.....
Narrative wise I guess Aya has successfully taken her position as a reskin of Laura, now she enjoys cheating on her Senpai, and where have I heard that before, oh that's right a blue haired girl from another game. I don't think the points needs to be reiterated anymore, everyone has already said it multiple times. The game is still a banger with the sex scenes, waiting for next update now.

 

[K5434]

Nice Update and overall a good NTR Game. Its just that this Aya isnt the same as in the "original" Game. Maybe you could compare it to Lara Croft as a tough heroine in the Games and a sexdoll in the r34 Genre. They still look the same but serve different purposes. This Aya is designed just for a quick fap, for the oblivious MC, or she had a brain injury that we are not aware of, the difference in Behaviour is too extreme. Thats no Hate, still like the Game, its just different from the origin.

 

[Zasor]

I don't know where the "fast corruption" comes from. The game is 330k words long right now, and even if we subtract the 50k words shared with the original, it's still 280k words. By that point, in the original, Laura had at least three endings where she's fully corrupted. If the argument is that she was corrupted with less sex scenes, then I will say you didn't actually read the story.

These people just have a problem with their own erroneous idea of a strong-willed woman. Aya fans have once again hoped that this character would never go down like Laura, not only because they completely misunderstand Aya as a person, but because they have some weird idea that Aya can easily handle a situation like this. In other words, Aya fans imagine that she's some kind of superhuman because that's the only thing they got from this character in the original game.

By the way, the same completely stale debate has been going on for decades with Rei vs Asuka in Neon Genesis Evangelion. Aya and Asuka fanatics are the same kind of people who have infinitely high expectations of a strong woman that they might find personal redemption in her. It's just as ridiculous as it sounds. Maybe to compensate for their own helplessness or because they would love to be protected by a competent woman, either way they both have way too high emotional attachments and high expectations, and complain about the writing when the cognitive dissonance kicks in and gives them a reality check.

 

[FoutL]

These people just have a problem with their own erroneous idea of a strong-willed woman. Aya fans have once again hoped that this character would never go down like Laura, not only because they completely misunderstand Aya as a person, but because they have some weird idea that Aya can easily handle a situation like this. In other words, Aya fans imagine that she's some kind of superhuman because that's the only thing they got from this character in the original game.

By the way, the same completely stale debate has been going on for decades with Rei vs Asuka in Neon Genesis Evangelion. Aya and Asuka fanatics are the same kind of people who have infinitely high expectations of a strong woman that they might find personal redemption in her. It's just as ridiculous as it sounds. Maybe to compensate for their own helplessness or because they would love to be protected by a competent woman, either way they both have way too high emotional attachments and high expectations, and complain about the writing when the cognitive dissonance kicks in and gives them a reality check.

This has to be cope

 

[HermesBinner]

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These people just have a problem with their own erroneous idea of a strong-willed woman. Aya fans have once again hoped that this character would never go down like Laura, not only because they completely misunderstand Aya as a person, but because they have some weird idea that Aya can easily handle a situation like this. In other words, Aya fans imagine that she's some kind of superhuman because that's the only thing they got from this character in the original game.

By the way, the same completely stale debate has been going on for decades with Rei vs Asuka in Neon Genesis Evangelion. Aya and Asuka fanatics are the same kind of people who have infinitely high expectations of a strong woman that they might find personal redemption in her. It's just as ridiculous as it sounds. Maybe to compensate for their own helplessness or because they would love to be protected by a competent woman, either way they both have way too high emotional attachments and high expectations, and complain about the writing when the cognitive dissonance kicks in and gives them a reality check.

Bro psychoanalyzing an entire forum ☠☠☠. Seriously the audacity of some people lmao

 

[mickster101]

Quick question: in this and the original game, how many women can Luca hook up with?

 

[Requiem1102]

All these people complaining yet acting like they're not just gonna be back next month lol.

 

[Tyyyr]

People complain because they care. People that have given up no longer comment here.
The opposite of love isn't hate but indifference.

 

[BL45T]

All these people complaining yet acting like they're not just gonna be back next month lol.

Not just to directly quote your comment but this entire idea that the dev has. I didn't mention it in the comment before but its easy to be sarcastic with "oh those cucks on the piracy forum gives me "constructive criticism"". I get it, it doesn't sound good that people shit on your game(you as in hangover, not you). And yes people will return to the game next month, I did. I didn't like the last few updates yet I liked this one because of its porn aspects. What I don't understand is this idea of vilifying people because they are disappointed in you. The "constructive criticism" was very clear and very evident. It will not sound meaningful if he don't listen to it. These people who comment are not his enemies but people who has a high opinion of him after the really good game he created with the first one. But yeah I think the message is not getting across so the best thing for all of us is to enjoy the updates for what they are and like I said before the H scenes are damn good. There is no point in repeating the same criticism if its not getting across, it just sours the mood.

 

[NovaBlast@99]

Eeew, what the fuck was this update with gay shit? Aya and Luca tricks Harry into eating Luca's cum filled lasgna? Sheesh, looks like people complaining about Luca being gay and obsessed with Harry got to the dev's head and he made that theory real

 

[Chinel]

Eeew, what the fuck was this update with gay shit? Aya and Luca tricks Harry into eating Luca's cum filled lasgna? Sheesh, looks like people complaining about Luca being gay and obsessed with Harry got to the dev's head and he made that theory real

Luca is gay. For some reason he has a hard on the idea of having Harry consuming his cum like some femboy.

 

[HangoverCat]

Not just to directly quote your comment but this entire idea that the dev has. I didn't mention it in the comment before but its easy to be sarcastic with "oh those cucks on the piracy forum gives me "constructive criticism"". I get it, it doesn't sound good that people shit on your game(you as in hangover, not you). And yes people will return to the game next month, I did. I didn't like the last few updates yet I liked this one because of its porn aspects. What I don't understand is this idea of vilifying people because they are disappointed in you. The "constructive criticism" was very clear and very evident. It will not sound meaningful if he don't listen to it. These people who comment are not his enemies but people who has a high opinion of him after the really good game he created with the first one. But yeah I think the message is not getting across so the best thing for all of us is to enjoy the updates for what they are and like I said before the H scenes are damn good. There is no point in repeating the same criticism if its not getting across, it just sours the mood.

People telling me that Aya is not the same as the original and that I should write a completely different game because she would never be corrupted by the current story is not constructive at all. The fact of the matter is that if Aya cannot be corrupted by the current story, then she would never be corrupted period. And if she cannot be corrupted, then what's the point of writing a game for her? This is not an easy story to write and anyone who makes it seem otherwise knows nothing about storytelling.

Some people think Aya is not the same, fair enough. But I think she is the same. And since I'm the writer, I guess people will just have to deal with that fact.

 

[ItsNotUs]

People telling me that Aya is not the same as the original and that I should write a completely different game because she would never be corrupted by the current story is not constructive at all. The fact of the matter is that if Aya cannot be corrupted by the current story, then she would never be corrupted period. And if she cannot be corrupted, then what's the point of writing a game for her? This is not an easy story to write and anyone who makes it seem otherwise knows nothing about storytelling.

Some people think Aya is not the same, fair enough. But I think she is the same. And since I'm the writer, I guess people will just have to deal with that fact.

I'm the writer
A writer who can’t come up with anything new, the game about Aya practically repeats Laura, the other games are almost similar to each other! Is this writer's block? Or have you outlived as a writer? Because there is nothing new in your scribbles and games - everything is the same, just in different wrappers!

 

[FoutL]

Discussion got very heated very quickly

 

[ItsNotUs]

This is exactly what he means by not knowing anything about storytelling lol. If you've read the game and think that it's a repeat of Laura or that there is nothing new then you're proving his point exactly. I don't really even understand how someone could read this game and think it's a copy of the first game

Same characters, same story!
- Laura - cum sendwich
- Aya - cum lozainya
Storytelling or "copy-pasting"?

 

[HangoverCat]

I'm the writer
A writer who can’t come up with anything new, the game about Aya practically repeats Laura, the other games are almost similar to each other! Is this writer's block? Or have you outlived as a writer? Because there is nothing new in your scribbles and games - everything is the same, just in different wrappers!

How constructive. Thank you.

 

[Zasor]

Same characters, same story!
- Laura - cum sendwich
- Aya - cum lozainya
Storytelling or "copy-pasting"?

True, it would have been much better if Aya had been abducted by aliens. But without any penetration, as that would be too close to the original. A 800k word slow burn genjutsu, everything is an illusion. The game ends with it being just a dream, last scene is a mirror revealing the reader has been a clown all along.