Finally it got ending so I could give it a go, starting with Harry pov and oh boy it is a lot of reading. It was quite nice, I think you can fool yourself about what is happening for quite a while.
For the purpose of mystery “Misumi” should wear shades at least on MC pov. We shouldn’t be able to tell her pupil color. Additionally/alternatively she could have some body mark – mole, scar , tattoo that she would cover/paint on when dressing as Misumi to throw us off. Also Harry is too observant to not at least question that she looks similar and try to get some confirmation. Probably the excuse is that he is mentally blocking the very idea she could be Aya but still it is something that reader needs to believe right away rather than needing to think to find justification.
Minor other hiccups would like fact that Aya dress doesn’t look skimpier than her default look, or that Harry fails to notice their faces are way too close during VR but then notices a bit of fluid on the floor. I guess this kind of inconsistency is expected with separate pov selection, the MC pov needs some contet but then if he realizes it its all over...
The story had two high points for me, one was Maya section, relatively lighthearted and I had some good laughts. I’m really curious if she was in league with Luca or just used by him, it would be nice to have option to save her. Especially since my guess is that Aya was betting on Harry doing just that.
The other one was when Sara shows up, I think this is the most in sync with Harry the reader is /especially if you didn’t read the other VN/ You really don’t know what to make of her, is allying with her father the right choice? Or maybe reveal it all to Aya? Real shame the choices we get here are : go to infirmary or not , go to conveniance store or subway … WTF? I hope those choices redeem themselves on Aya pov...
I didn’t play the very end of route tho, I think it just doesn’t make sense to play it with only Harry pov, especially given how he acts. He doesn’t even ask why she told everyone to call herself Aya ? No idea if he realized she has split personality but regardless, she
killed bunch of people in cold blood, set dad on fire and laughed, kidnapped him and his ex, plays fap to his ex getting raped with him and he has some fucking doubts? Like fuck if he was fearing for his life that she kills him If he doesn’t prove his love that would be sensible…
Is it an error that Laura has necklace with key when she
gets kiddnapped ? Unless there is another reason she shouldn’t have it because her corruption never progressed on this path. If it's not error don't explain why, I will get to it
