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Not just to directly quote your comment but this entire idea that the dev has. I didn't mention it in the comment before but its easy to be sarcastic with "oh those cucks on the piracy forum gives me "constructive criticism"". I get it, it doesn't sound good that people shit on your game(you as in hangover, not you). And yes people will return to the game next month, I did. I didn't like the last few updates yet I liked this one because of its porn aspects. What I don't understand is this idea of vilifying people because they are disappointed in you. The "constructive criticism" was very clear and very evident. It will not sound meaningful if he don't listen to it. These people who comment are not his enemies but people who has a high opinion of him after the really good game he created with the first one. But yeah I think the message is not getting across so the best thing for all of us is to enjoy the updates for what they are and like I said before the H scenes are damn good. There is no point in repeating the same criticism if its not getting across, it just sours the mood.
Eeew, what the fuck was this update with gay shit? Aya and Luca tricks Harry into eating Luca's cum filled lasgna? Sheesh, looks like people complaining about Luca being gay and obsessed with Harry got to the dev's head and he made that theory real
Luca is gay. For some reason he has a hard on the idea of having Harry consuming his cum like some femboy.Eeew, what the fuck was this update with gay shit? Aya and Luca tricks Harry into eating Luca's cum filled lasgna? Sheesh, looks like people complaining about Luca being gay and obsessed with Harry got to the dev's head and he made that theory real
People telling me that Aya is not the same as the original and that I should write a completely different game because she would never be corrupted by the current story is not constructive at all. The fact of the matter is that if Aya cannot be corrupted by the current story, then she would never be corrupted period. And if she cannot be corrupted, then what's the point of writing a game for her? This is not an easy story to write and anyone who makes it seem otherwise knows nothing about storytelling.
Some people think Aya is not the same, fair enough. But I think she is the same. And since I'm the writer, I guess people will just have to deal with that fact.
ItsNotUs
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I'm the writer
A writer who can’t come up with anything new, the game about Aya practically repeats Laura, the other games are almost similar to each other! Is this writer's block? Or have you outlived as a writer? Because there is nothing new in your scribbles and games - everything is the same, just in different wrappers!
ItsNotUs
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Same characters, same story!
- Laura - cum sendwich
- Aya - cum lozainya
Storytelling or "copy-pasting"?
How constructive. Thank you.I'm the writer
A writer who can’t come up with anything new, the game about Aya practically repeats Laura, the other games are almost similar to each other! Is this writer's block? Or have you outlived as a writer? Because there is nothing new in your scribbles and games - everything is the same, just in different wrappers!
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True, it would have been much better if Aya had been abducted by aliens. But without any penetration, as that would be too close to the original. A 800k word slow burn genjutsu, everything is an illusion. The game ends with it being just a dream, last scene is a mirror revealing the reader has been a clown all along.
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i gotta have hard agree i don't know if this is storytelling or "copy-pasting"
- laura - has sex
- aya - has sex
there's even a character named harry in both stories who looks similar
no originality at all. there's even netorare in both...
- laura - has sex
- aya - has sex
there's even a character named harry in both stories who looks similar
no originality at all. there's even netorare in both...
Better add a unicorn that makes people into willing cucks by stabbing them, much more appealing plot and would def make it more realistic.
good guy wins in the end?
yes so that's the majority of any fiction, it's pretty much a rule.
in ntr the Heroine gets corrupted, that's a rule.
in 99% of the games here there is mc pushing his dick between a girl's cheeks, are they all the same?
just giving one example of something similar between two seperate works doesn't make them exactly the same.
would be a funny ass bonus scene if he ntr'd harry so he could turn bro into his bitch LMAOOOOOOOOOO
xcalibar4
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So there's gonna be 2 ending at-least!!
I hated this variant of Harry more than Laure variant but in this update at-least he is coming around.
Maybe this time Aya will understand that Harry is human like everyone else with flaws and faults.
And Luca will be dealt with this time for sure!! I know wishful thinking, then when will he corrupt Sara & Laura with Aya's help?
I hated this variant of Harry more than Laure variant but in this update at-least he is coming around.
Maybe this time Aya will understand that Harry is human like everyone else with flaws and faults.
And Luca will be dealt with this time for sure!! I know wishful thinking
, then when will he corrupt Sara & Laura with Aya's help? i dont think theres gonna be that much of a changeSo there's gonna be 2 ending at-least!!
I hated this variant of Harry more than Laure variant but in this update at-least he is coming around.
Maybe this time Aya will understand that Harry is human like everyone else with flaws and faults.
And Luca will be dealt with this time for sure!! I know wishful thinking
Ending A. Harry goes into the infirmary mentions laura as Aya gets fully corrupted threesome scene with laura and aya whatever happens to harry happens either be it his death or abandonment
Ending B. Harry doesnt go into the infirmary Aya prob doesnt get fully corrupted (i doubt it though) either she doesnt kills Luca and/or her father after Luca tries to make her have a threesome with Laura or she fails gets corrupted and we have a oblivious cuck ending for Harry since it would be likely that harry doesnt chase after Aya when shes going to sneak out if he doesnt enter the infirmary
aya already understands that at this part of the story, that's the reason she starts to have other feelings and impulses towards him(of the sadistic kind)So there's gonna be 2 ending at-least!!
I hated this variant of Harry more than Laure variant but in this update at-least he is coming around.
Maybe this time Aya will understand that Harry is human like everyone else with flaws and faults.
And Luca will be dealt with this time for sure!! I know wishful thinking
i definitely think aya will help luca corrupt laura, maybe the short relationship between luca and Laura will be one of the cards to use against her as a blackmail and in order to torment harry- that's what this game is about
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My most truthful and honest to God reaction to this update(that's a joke):
Parsing the feedback on the internet is always hard.
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If I were to be useful - and have to put aside my personal preferences, just summarizing the comments that I read - I'd say:
- "Aya that doesn't fight back is not really interesting."
Hence, people - emotionally - write that "she is different" => means "she feels different".
Because it really is different - the composition of her scenes when she meaningfully fights back and when she just 'talks' about fighting back is completely different.
Just compare how the sex scenes with Aya were constructed in the first game - when people got so hyped about her character - with how they are now.
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Now, can you even 'corrupt' a girl who is still fighting back?
Of course you can. 'Corruption' doesn't mean removing every bone in her soul. You can get her addicted to exhibitionism, BDSM sex, daddy issues - addicted so hard that she never would want to give it up.
But if you say 'corruption' is about submitting to every Luca's word without ever fighting back - then yes, of course she'll become just a reskin of Laura from the last game.
They walked different roads to this point, they have different thoughts even by the end - but the way you construct their sex scenes is completely interchangeable.
You can swap Aya for Laura in any sex scene - and they will work perfectly, without needing any major changes.
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Just remember: you are one of the best writers on this site - if not the best. There's some stuff in this game that no other game has. And the criticism comes from the people who care. I, for one, would never write so many words for a game I don't give a fuck about.
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You literally proved his point you just don't want Aya to be corrupted lol newsflash any girl harry pulls can see stolen as dude is just a loser holier then thou cuck