VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept - Aya Edition [v1.0.0s] [Hangover Cat]

[Tatsugaya]

Corruption/NTR in original felt different/unique cause of the rule system and storywise it was Aya path that was fun to read. She was kind of badass. I don't like Harry as a MC in this or previous version, did liked Felix from Turning the Page little bit but for some reason never liked Harry. The bet system in this one felt kind of meh to me. Most NTR has porn logic but storywise problem starts when Bull gets too much plot armor; he gets overpowered and become Gary Stu. Like any other story Gary Stu/Mary Sue makes the story too bland, too tasteless. In the original Aya was there to balance Luca's Gary Stu status though not much in main plot but in the Aya path I think that balance made the story fun.
I don't hate NTR but don't like it much also, I only play to enjoy the corruption of fmc when it's done there's nothing left for me storywise/kinkwise as most NTR don't go into conflict when MC finds out, the final arc in most western NTR is there for only to humiliate the MMC more.

You spit out facts, man, and that's totally right. Aya was the perfect counterpoint to the first game. Her route focused more on her and her relationship with Harry, while the antagonist barely appeared, making me forget he was even there. Which was fine because Laura already served that purpose of being a corruptible and annoying slut, Aya was a breath of fresh air amid the chaos, I myself don't like Harry, he's a generic MC we see in other games of the same theme. This "DLC" version completely misrepresented Aya, undermining her previous personality. It seems that this was done just to please the creator's fans in a role reversal between Laura and Aya.

 

[Kudoko]

I wonder since version 1.0 got released on steam right away does the android apk 1.0 even exist or is nobody bothering leaking that?

 

[Tatsugaya]

I wonder since version 1.0 got released on steam right away does the android apk 1.0 even exist or is nobody bothering leaking that?

Man, it exists, but you'll have to search for websites. They're usually not very good, I don't know if it's because the author doesn't care about the Android version.

 

[Anskil]

Yea, this version is really hit or miss. I would prefer original.
Even if writing is good and plot makes sense (overall) i cant shake the feeling that its forced by nature of NTR. The more plot needs to speed up the more MC being stupid and FMC degradated

 

[Tatsugaya]

Yea, this version is really hit or miss. I would prefer original.
Even if writing is good and plot makes sense (overall) i cant shake the feeling that its forced by nature of NTR. The more plot needs to speed up the more MC being stupid and FMC degradated

This version only serves to transform Aya, who was confident, playful, and strong-willed, into a dumb and weak idiot, stripping her of almost all the qualities that made the audience who played the original game like her. They've switched places.

 

[bramaker234]

do ya'll recommend other games from hungover cat except these two titles APBLU main and aya

 

[John Hentai1102]

do ya'll recommend other games from hungover cat except these two titles APBLU main and aya

lowkey in my opinon


APBLU OG was good mostly cause it had tons of scenes and endings

Aya was moreso just fanservice to see aya get ntr'd so if you dont care about logical ntr and just want to see the act of it then yeah this is your game

In terms of other games

NTR'd by clumsiness is a good game if you like comedy in your ntr

He maid her fall is a very heavy slow burn that REALLY should pick up considering how close to the end we are by now but considering how it hasnt (plus its a linear storyline with no choices avaliable and 1 ending which means even less scenes)

I say just wait for that to end
His bet her loss is in a similar vein but its less story relevent and more ntr relevant so if you just want a quick ntr I say similarly wait for the game to end and binge


As for the edge of thats your call its aight

 

[master_i]

There are 2 endings in the original were Luka goes on the run from criminals that are bigger then him and Harry ends up in a relationship with both Laura and Aya and there is a shorter version that ends before the time skips that shows them together. There are also two endings were Aya kills Luca one ending that ends at Harry planning on killing Luka one ending has Laura kills Luca one ending has Luca getting getting so grossed out from both Harry and Laura that he leaves and Harry and Laura gets married. The Final 4 endings are the endings were Luca wins. I was hoping their was endings were Luca in this version lost as well.

 

[Meow king]

There are 2 endings in the original were Luka goes on the run from criminals that are bigger then him and Harry ends up in a relationship with both Laura and Aya and there is a shorter version that ends before the time skips that shows them together. There are also two endings were Aya kills Luca one ending that ends at Harry planning on killing Luka one ending has Laura kills Luca one ending has Luca getting getting so grossed out from both Harry and Laura that he leaves and Harry and Laura gets married. The Final 4 endings are the endings were Luca wins. I was hoping their was endings were Luca in this version lost as well.

Definitely needed a luca losing end ngl