VN Ren'Py Completed A Promise Best Left Unkept [Bonus S2 Ep 9-11] [Hangover Cat]

[Deleted member 4937290]

Either way, I can only imagine this path being like:

1. Aya flees because of Luca's blackmail, that's something she has already done before. Harry doesn't love Laura anymore, so eventually things will go south between them. Either Laura will be in a state of denial where she can't accept that she deserves it and she will go back to Luca, or she will learn to hate Luca once again and she will end it all to leave the mess. No one will have the happy ending.

2. Aya somehow has a brain the size of a pea and she learns to enjoy Luca's touch (when it's clearly stated that she hates it) and she will choose Luca over Harry, of course there must be some coercion there but the end goal is the same. When Harry realizes he can't pursue Aya anymore, he will try to go back to Laura but after losing the competition Laura will realize that she didn't want Harry that badly and she will start being jealous again but this time because of Aya x Luca.

Share your thoughts on where may this path lead

 

[Deleted member 4937290]

It was always nasty and abrupt. His method is always the same. He let Laura make some dumb rules and probably let Aya make some dumb rules too.

Maybe I'm biased because this will be a shorter path than Laura's and I can't understand why it would be a good idea to corrupt her so fast before her real path, but I think there is a huge difference between blackmail and straight up rape, even if they are both forms of rape.

 

[GiGiGus ニクヤセベ!]

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and screams in the end of this update are kinda pointing that it is, in fact, a rape, isn't it?

 

[Nifferman]

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and screams in the end of this update are kinda pointing that it is, in fact, a rape, isn't it?

Yes she is clearly crying. Laura's a disappointment in yet another update cuz she also was raped by this guy and now she is helping him continue his habits

 

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and screams in the end of this update are kinda pointing that it is, in fact, a rape, isn't it?

Yeah, I didn't sign up for this. If this is romantized or sexualized somehow then I yield. If I wanted to see some magical cock rape that turns girls into mindless sluts I would be in a fantasy rpg. I can't see how any amount of manipulation or coercion can lead this to full corruption. This is a traumatic experience, so excuse me for not wanting to see these kind of scenes in a NTR. Maybe it's my fault since what I want to see more is the corruption/betrayal and I don't care much for the NTR point of view, but this is just sad :/

 

[GiGiGus ニクヤセベ!]

giorgilukaks Nah. This is sad because it's a case of a lost opportunity to make some unique corruption path. I mean, Aya's is a very lovable (by my preferances) character, somewhat in-depth and several-sided. She's even been made to be corrupted on her own conditions (push Harry and all that). Seeing her doing Luca would hit like a freight train already. There's no point do describe it, if you played update, you kinda get that vibe that I'm talking about. It's just that I don't understand, why, of all ways to make her be corrupted (her pressing Harry or, hell, even boredom), HC have chosen this. AGAIN.

P.S.: Fuck Laura.

 

[Deleted member 5972358]

This is sad because it's a case of a lost opportunity to make some unique corruption path.

It's been established that Aya doesn't equal love to sex and will try to make Harry jealous. It was the perfect setup for "I'm gonna go further and further with Luca to make Harry fall for me, but will lose myself in the process". So far it looks like it's gonna be partially the case, but those rape vibes are totally not needed. We'll see next update what this is all about.

Also I really hope this route features Luca fucking both Laura and Aya and doing pervy shit with them around the office - like the main keyart for the game suggests.

 

[ZUBiDAM]

I'm not sure where are you guys getting this bullshit that luca corrupts all the girls because of his big dick, that may have only been partially the case for sandra, but she is known to be a nympho.
Laura corrution has mainly been psychological and manipulation, i dare say his big dick played a small part of it.
it was never the case that after right sex laura suddenly became a different person, Laura's betrayal amd change in behavior was thanks to the blackmail, manipulation, and Harry's lack of help and understanding.

It was the perfect setup for "I'm gonna go further and further with Luca to make Harry fall for me, but will lose myself in the process". So far it looks like it's gonna be partially the case, but those rape vibes are totally not needed. We'll see next update what this is all about

the rape is not needed is your opinion, i personally was waiting for a scene like this that felt lacking in Laura routes so far.
it might also be needed to push her for the setup you describe, in the scene before where she kiss him, she hesitated before and it seemed she chose not to go through with it, but then luca kissed her by force.

 

[CaoCao1]

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and screams in the end of this update are kinda pointing that it is, in fact, a rape, isn't it?

how you got that picture uncensored? and also something i wonder why do i always see in preview image both aya and laura have their breast out but in game aya still dosent? Is there any other place art is released?

sorry for stupid question btw if it obvious xD

 

[ZUBiDAM]

how you got that picture uncensored? and also something i wonder why do i always see in preview image both aya and laura have their breast out but in game aya still dosent? Is there any other place art is released?

sorry for stupid question btw if it obvious xD

before you finish any of laura route's, her breast is covered, after you finish it changes, it will be the same for aya

 

[CaoCao1]

before you finish any of laura route's, her breast is covered, after you finish it changes, it will be the same for aya

Yes but why does aya have art that her breast is out when it hasnt happened in game yet?

 

[SiriusBlack]

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and screams in the end of this update are kinda pointing that it is, in fact, a rape, isn't it?

Thanks for the info, i really missed those tears in the blurried CG. Screaming could be both for pleasure or horror, i didn't want to assume things, so i left the benefit of the doubt.
If you're right, well, i guess it will be another missed opportunity, at least for my tastes.

 

[Flojerazul20]

When the author finishes this game, it would be interesting if he creates another game, one that is more balanced, I mean karma must arrive, add collateral damage to that, regardless of the character in the story

 

[NewTricks]

Laura's been a disappointment to me from the very first update. I think that I might be disappointed if she didn't continue to disappoint me. Aya will disappoint us and crush Harry too because that's the kind of game we are playing.

 

[rangabang]

Laura's been a disappointment to me from the very first update. I think that I might be disappointed if she didn't continue to disappoint me. Aya will disappoint us and crush Harry too because that's the kind of game we are playing.

Curious, what exactly did you expect to happen? How are you disappointed with Laura?

 

[Flojerazul20]

Laura's been a disappointment to me from the very first update. I think that I might be disappointed if she didn't continue to disappoint me. Aya will disappoint us and crush Harry too because that's the kind of game we are playing.

If Laura falls, it doesn't matter and if Aya falls, well, since it's a game focused on that, but what I would like to happen is that Aya beats and humiliates Laura, and when she falls, the antagonist and villain Luca karma arrives Yes everyone takes damage, it's the best thing that can happen at this point

 

[darchrow98]

0.8.3 is the best update by far in recent months, Aya is a much more interesting character than I anticipated. The buildup was great, but I think it would've been better if HC started Aya route instead of the path. If she falls completely in this path then it would dilute the corruption impact in her main route.

 

[Shatteredstar]

Laura's been a disappointment to me from the very first update. I think that I might be disappointed if she didn't continue to disappoint me. Aya will disappoint us and crush Harry too because that's the kind of game we are playing.

Dagoth Ur is that you? Is anyone else reading that post in Dagoth Ur's voice?

I at least want Aya to somehow be treated differently. She went from very smart about people, to extreme empath. It needs to be better than magic rape dick strikes again. The hint we get is Aya says she will hate Harry if he keeps trying to have it both ways. Which he thinks about trying, but he's too late to stop that update ending scene.

I never really liked Laura, nothing about her is above mid tier. Anything she had going for her is destroyed by Luca very early on, due in part to her own ego. By the time we get to the v8.3 sex scene, I'm in complete revulsion. If not for Aya moaning in the background I don't think it would've qualified as porn to me. Before, mostly, she was activity crushing Harry, for a better thicker sex haze. The tiny flake of gold in the emulsified diarrhea that is Laura is, at least in the beginning, to a degree, she did this to save Harry. Now she is crushing Harry, anyone he loves, including herself, anyway she can, with little care or even passive concern for who she is destroying, just so she can control Harry, while pretending to be his Lover. Truly a vile character. There is only one thing she can/does do that can 'slightly' redeem herself, kill Luca. At least making her worth a single sigh of disappointment. That's part of the fun though.

But at least something besides Luca plugs Laura the song 10 hour edition, on repeat happened.

If Laura falls, it doesn't matter and if Aya falls, well, since it's a game focused on that, but what I would like to happen is that Aya beats and humiliates Laura, and when she falls, the antagonist and villain Luca karma arrives Yes everyone takes damage, it's the best thing that can happen at this point

That is similar to the clumsy hero ending. Everything is damaged probably beyond repair, but at least Luca gets his. I liked it. It's a grand and intoxicating ending, most fitting for what Laura set out to do. Aya should have a ending on that level. It'd be waste of a great character if not.

 

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I really like the "top" of her outfit or what we see of it, wondering how it looks further down

 

[Terix3]

Keep in mind that the path is still about Laura and Aya is only obstacle here, so that is why corruption aspect may be lacking. Hell there may even be none (just rape) with simple intention to not spoil her routes.

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I really like the "top" of her outfit or what we see of it, wondering how it looks further down

I'm looking at it and wondering if that looks like Laura. It really shows here the issue of having multiple artists. While the character keeps regular look (hair, clothes) its okish but when you want to disguise the character it all falls apart.