DawnCry
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Personally about that I meant kurndorf, his old enemy, as a rival in the thirst of knowledge, but in what I wrote mr Beasley truly tries to kill sir Ronald with a gun and he can succeed or fail depending on your actions.I really like this story however I would like to add some details first Sir Ronald believes that mr. Beasley (old rival?) wishes to have him killed so I would say that at the end of day two he should die, this will make it possible to charm Sarah, second Davy should be driven by jealousy and the idea that those he charms should be SLAVES that he uses a lot of mana and he is consumed with lust when it comes to Kate Granger, whereas the MC should wish that those the MC charms should be friends AND lovers that he uses less mana and should have the benefit of a teacher (at first) that actually had the original tome of control, which the MC gains after his death.
-If he succeeds he doesn't get the book but the Aftane and he will try to summon Kurndorf as a mean to obtain power while being protected with it.
-If he fails sir Ronald will end up in the hospital in the intensive care unit and you can visit him, but he will be quite weak. Mr Beasley then will be captured by the police and put in jail, but if you didn't charm the police then he will escape thanks to his hypnotism ability. I didn't decide what I would write after he escapes.
About Davy... it's more complex than that. Being quite direct was -> discovers magic -> ask mr Beasley about magic -> uses his mother as a trial -> after he succeeds he gains confidence to try it with Kate.
After he conquers Kate it would be when the player notices something strange and in fact one of the "indicators" would be your sister talking about how could Kate end up going out with that idiot. Here it would start the "rivalry".
I may release a few alternative scenes if people are interested (in the sense that they are kind of fan-fiction not related to the game).