Ren'Py Abandoned A Trainer's Tale [Ch. 2 v0.2] [BlueDelphinus]

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bobdillan

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uhhh why is a slave trainer labelled as a dating sim... and don't really see how romance fits into this. since well is a slave trainer, it goes against the idea of romance and is on the object side of things. Like I get you can have both paths in games but of the desc this one is very much on the train the girls to be slaves that get used side of things. (nothing romantic about that XD )

Also going off one of the preview photos there is a stat called "Meat toilet." so should probably have the sharing and/or prostitution tag.
 
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Rick24

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"The journey won't be easy, but you have to break her before the time runs out!"

Can I also make her fall in love with me instead of breaking her?
 
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-Good concept
-nice art
Yep definetly looking forward to this one
But
"Spicy fetishes"
Hopefully some bestiality or add more options to the slave aspect of the game
 
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Well right from the get go I really like the personal approach to this kind of game. I usually dislike most slave training games because they tend to reduce the slaves to statistics or sex doll (which I feel undermines the the power fantasy of enslaving another sentient being and bending them to your will) and make the player character a blank slate/non-entity for maximum projection (something that I never find as interesting as an actual character), so having one where the slave and slaver are actual characters with motivations and ambitions of their own is a huge plus for me.

For me the best kinds of sex games are the ones where you get exercise power over characters to influence their development and/or changing something of their existing nature into something else. Most slave training games don't really have this element, so the design of your game is the first one of this kind of sub-genre that really grabbed my attention and appealed to me. I am definitely going to look forward to how this game shapes up! I'll be checking out the Discord in my free time so see you there! :D


On a side-note some feedback and suggestions:

If there's something I wish for this game, it's to have meaningful options to influence not just the slave but also the slaver, how their relationship with each other develops, and have their relationship influence their character. Since "A leash can be pulled from either end", I hope that there would be some ways for the girl to influence the main character just as he influences her through character moments and story developments, so we as a player can decide how he responds to that influence, customizing him and allow us to experience the game different ways. For player agency and replayability.
 
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This appears to be a promising attempt on the genre. The artworks looks excellent and the rest looks well enough. Maybe this will be the naughty version of Princess Maker I have always hoped for. Best so far is the work of Akabur. But his games are full of grinding and meaningless dialogues. Please don't make the same mistakes.
 
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Everything apart from few tags(which afaik were not put by the dev) points towards slave trainer and not lovey dovey dating sim.
Hopefully dev doesnt dilute the content by trying to implement romance route.
Also i agree with the guy above - dont go crazy with grinding. Cryptic puzzles or annoying minigames are a waste of time as well imo.
 
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What other spicy fetishes will be part of the game? That wasn't already mentioned, of course.
 
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tigerdiamond said:
I'd suggest putting a list of "planned tags" in the OP, cause right now that "Looking for some 'spicy' fetishes? Oh yeah, you'll love this one." line in the summery is like
*sees line*
*checks tags*
"Ah yes the spiciest of fetishes... 'romance'"
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Yes, I was planned to do that. Unfortunately, someone already put this up before me.
So, I'm currently processing the ownership transfer of this thread and will edit it later.
 
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Depressingbro said:
-Good concept
-nice art
Yep definetly looking forward to this one
But
"Spicy fetishes"
Hopefully some bestiality or add more options to the slave aspect of the game
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You know what, I have interest in bestiality as well. But I don't think it's allowed in Patreon, so I gotta work around it a bit.
 
BlueDelphinus

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NiftyLit said:
Well right from the get go I really like the personal approach to this kind of game. I usually dislike most slave training games because they tend to reduce the slaves to statistics or sex doll (which I feel undermines the the power fantasy of enslaving another sentient being and bending them to your will) and make the player character a blank slate/non-entity for maximum projection (something that I never find as interesting as an actual character), so having one where the slave and slaver are actual characters with motivations and ambitions of their own is a huge plus for me.

For me the best kinds of sex games are the ones where you get exercise power over characters to influence their development and/or changing something of their existing nature into something else. Most slave training games don't really have this element, so the design of your game is the first one of this kind of sub-genre that really grabbed my attention and appealed to me. I am definitely going to look forward to how this game shapes up! I'll be checking out the Discord in my free time so see you there! :D


On a side-note some feedback and suggestions:

If there's something I wish for this game, it's to have meaningful options to influence not just the slave but also the slaver, how their relationship with each other develops, and have their relationship influence their character. Since "A leash can be pulled from either end", I hope that there would be some ways for the girl to influence the main character just as he influences her through character moments and story developments, so we as a player can decide how he responds to that influence, customizing him and allow us to experience the game different ways. For player agency and replayability.
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Thank you, this is such a moral boost to me. I'll try my best to meet up your expectations.
See you in Discord :D

Feedback and suggestions:
Yes, the 2 protagonists will influence each other and develop their relationship as the story progress. And don't forget about the NPC's, they have their roles in the story as well. There will be relationships other than the slave and the slaver in there.
As for the different experience and replayability, I already have my own plan on it. But to make it complex and more interesting, there will be a LOT of works to do.
I have to focus on the canon story first. After that, we can talk more about this :)
 
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BlueDelphinus

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wursti said:
This appears to be a promising attempt on the genre. The artworks looks excellent and the rest looks well enough. Maybe this will be the naughty version of Princess Maker I have always hoped for. Best so far is the work of Akabur. But his games are full of grinding and meaningless dialogues. Please don't make the same mistakes.
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I love Princess Trainer from Akabur. And you must have seen it as well, this work inspired from it. As for Princess Maker, unfortunately I haven't tried it yet.
I will be honest with you, there will be some grinding for money and stats. But I will try to make it less boring and time consuming.
Feel free to give me some advice to make it better :)
 
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AlisaB said:
Everything apart from few tags(which afaik were not put by the dev) points towards slave trainer and not lovey dovey dating sim.
Hopefully dev doesnt dilute the content by trying to implement romance route.
Also i agree with the guy above - dont go crazy with grinding. Cryptic puzzles or annoying minigames are a waste of time as well imo.
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Well, I did put romance tag on the itch page, so the uploader took it as the way it is.
And yes, there will be romance, but it won't be vanilla. I will focus on the nasty stuffs :D
IKR, doing minigames over and over again made me crazy as well. If there will be grinding, I should make it as fast and less boring it can be.
 
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