@DrDougal
With all respect for your work and effort, I would like once more to point out some small details. No offense intended, once again.
1. Sophia's smile when she climax, looks rather like a grimace. Something's wrong there, probably from some morph or... I don't know.
2. Though she looks sexy overall, won't argue that, her tits look different from the game model. A bit saggy I'd say. And the nipples are kinda big... like too big actually?
3. I think you overdid it with the museum environment. First of all because it wont be appreciated for its true value.
And second, for such an environment to have an impact the scene should be a lot larger. You know, like in a museum not a living room. Which in turn, would put the characters on secondary level lol.
4. The scene flow it's a bit rushed
Jumping from Patricia whispering to getting naked it's a big leap. Maybe a bit of groping and touching would've helped. You know how they say... it's not the destination that matters, but the journey to get there.
You're doing this work for free unlike the dev, so you can't be pressured by anyone in anyway. Take your time expressing yourself and testing your 3d art skills, since it will help on your own projects as well.
Hope you won't get upset, it was just a friendly chat