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when the picture is darkened, it can be seen that the rays are more on the background than on Sofia. Therefore, I would shift - either Sofia deeper - or the rays themselves forward.
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Nah, it just looks like the rays are in the background because they only are obvious where the image has shadows. The spots I circled are the most obvious spots that show the rays are in front of Sophia, although there are other spots the rays can be seen on her as well. She's simply in too bright an area for the rays to stand out much.
But yes, if she were moved deeper into the image, like back underneath that shade tree, then she could appear to be more "in the rays."
It's basically like shining a flashlight. Do so outside on a sunny day and you can't even tell if the flashlight is on or off. Go into a relatively dark area and suddenly you see a distinct beam of light. There needs to be contrast. And light shining within light isn't very effective.
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I personally don't think that "GodRays" was a good choice for this picture,maybe in the forest where the lights stream through the tress or indoors would of been better.I also think that maybe the "GodRays"could of been lighter and not so thick.
Nice use of DOF but maybe put more of a shadow on Sophia right side and looking at the camera,nice work and I look forward to seeing more of your work
This is just my opinion as I am not trying to rubbish your work but PS may of helped you with this render
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Sophia turned to the mirror and looked at herself carefully. She liked the woman she saw in the mirror, she liked the face, the curves of the body, large breasts and an almost flat tummy. Looking at herself, Sophia became more and more excited, she wanted to touch herself, bare her breasts and touch her.
Sophia
(What's happening? What does Liam want? Does he want me to tease Harris or something more...?
The anticipation of what will happen in the living room in a few minutes excites me so much...! I am sure this sight will not leave them indifferent!)
Sophia was getting more and more excited thinking about what would happen in the living room in a few minutes. She leaned over to the mirror and started applying makeup.
As she continued to apply makeup, Sophia pondered.
(If I have a desire to touch myself, to bare my breasts looking at myself in the mirror, then how will two drunk men behave?)
Sophia
(Oh Liam, what are you up to? Are you testing me or yourself? I do not know, but it excites me so much...)
After finishing with makeup, Sophia took a bright scarlet lipstick and began to apply it on her lips. She did it slowly and at some point began to imagine that it was not lipstick, but a man's penis. Sophia closed her eyes and bit her lower lip.
Sopha
(Can I really do this in the presence of two men, one of whom is my husband??? Blowjob to her husband in front of Harris?)
Sophia clearly imagined this picture, as she was on her knees giving a blowjob to Liam, and Mr. Harrison looked at it lustfully, clearly and passionately wanting to be in Liam's place! Sophia saw his eyes longing for her and it greatly aroused her. Sophia's imagination then drew her a picture of a large bulge in Harris's pants that was telling Sophia about his boner. Sophia was frightened by the fact that inside her the desire to tease Harris even more strongly grew, but she was more frightened by the desire to satisfy Harris's depraved and dirtiest desires right in front of her husband.
Sopha
(How is it to give a blowjob to another man in the presence of her husband? Will I be able to and why does it excite me so much?)
Sophia opened her eyes and straightened up abruptly.
Sophia
(Why am I so excited? I need to calm down! But how can I? I'm in a sexy outfit now going down to two men and they are clearly set up for something spicy...)
Sophia took a sharp breath in and out.
Sophia
Come what may...
Sophia went to the exit of the room, her agitated state made her gait sluggish and even more sexy. Her hips were swaying sexually, and her steps were uncertain, it seemed that a little more and Sophia would not be able to stay on her feet. Sophia was drunk with excitement.
She walked along the corridor of the second floor and unsuccessfully tried to calm herself, excitement and anticipation of the unknown took over and her excitement only intensified.
When Sofia reached the stairs leading to the first floor, she grabbed the railing with her right hand and stopped. She wondered if she should go? But the unknown beckoned and teased her, invited her to a piquant adventure. And Sofia began to slowly descend the stairs to meet the men.
(The episode of my little story is illustrated by the famous great artist KillJoys. I thank him for such a great render and look forward to new wonderful works.)
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Thankyou my friend,I will be starting on it again as soon as I finish installing the assets.
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Another tip is to check that you have "headlamp off"on every new scene and even when you load a duf file check it is still off as Daz has a habit of turning it on.
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Made the scene look darker and added a 2nd god ray
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The substitute day reaches it's climax. Probably more than once.
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I think if the tights were white or flesh-colored, it would be better.
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You could be right there Bane71 as I did forget to change them DOH
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External scenes work best
Not a lighting effect I have played with as it stretched the limits of my rig but I have tackled this in an other way with blinds by putting spot lights with lumen values at 1.5m outside to simulate sunlight.
