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specific suggestions?How about VIP flight!
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specific suggestions?How about VIP flight!
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The biggest reason why it looks odd is because the scene does not match a real-world setup that is likely to create such "ray" artifacts. The light is too uniform and too bright. Individual rays are more likely to "appear" in a shadowed environment rather than a brightly lit field. And the likelihood is increased if there is some small zone whereby a relatively intense light breaks through into the darkness. The "ray" shows up because more light is shining through that space then its immediate neighbor.View attachment 1461815
First time trying to use god rays I feel like it looks really odd so constructive criticism is welcome.
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First time trying to use god rays I feel like it looks really odd so constructive criticism is welcome.
when the picture is darkened, it can be seen that the rays are more on the background than on Sofia. Therefore, I would shift - either Sofia deeper - or the rays themselves forward.The biggest reason why it looks odd is because the scene does not match a real-world setup that is likely to create such "ray" artifacts. The light is too uniform and too bright. Individual rays are more likely to "appear" in a shadowed environment rather than a brightly lit field. And the likelihood is increased if there is some small zone whereby a relatively intense light breaks through into the darkness. The "ray" shows up because more light is shining through that space then its immediate neighbor.
It would work better if she were deeper in the forest. All the trees create a solid canopy and shadow everything. But then there is a solitary fallen tree lying nearby and creating a break in the canopy through which the sun can shine. She happens to lie down in this small sun spot in the middle of a field of shadow and the god rays appear.
Go to google images and type "crepuscular rays" and look at the various images that show up. You'll notice a trend that they are all "mostly blocked" light that has some gaps to shine through.
when the picture is darkened, it can be seen that the rays are more on the background than on Sofia. Therefore, I would shift - either Sofia deeper - or the rays themselves forward. View attachment 1463245 View attachment 1463244
I personally don't think that "GodRays" was a good choice for this picture,maybe in the forest where the lights stream through the tress or indoors would of been better.I also think that maybe the "GodRays"could of been lighter and not so thick.View attachment 1461815
First time trying to use god rays I feel like it looks really odd so constructive criticism is welcome.
Sophia turned to the mirror and looked at herself carefully. She liked the woman she saw in the mirror, she liked the face, the curves of the body, large breasts and an almost flat tummy. Looking at herself, Sophia became more and more excited, she wanted to touch herself, bare her breasts and touch her.Liam came home in the evening with his boss.
Liam
Good evening, dear! I decided to invite Mr. Harris to visit us, to celebrate a little the great deal that I managed to make today! I hope you don't mind?
Mr. Harris
Good evening, Miss Parker! (Mr. Harris said with a strange smile)
Sophia
Good evening gentlemen! I don't mind, but it's so late, the kids are sleeping and you have to go to work tomorrow!? (Sophia greeted the men with some bewilderment)
Liam
Honey, don't worry, we're not going to make too much noise! Let's drink some wine and chat!
Mr. Harris
Don't worry about your spouse's work, Miss Parker, he may come to work later tomorrow.
And I hope you will keep us company?
Sophia
Thank you, Mr. Harris, with pleasure! Especially since my morning is completely free tomorrow.
Come into the living room, Mr. Harris, and I'll steal my husband from you for a few minutes.
Mr. Harris
Thank you, Sofia! Yes, of course, I'll wait for you and Liam here.
Mr. Harris sat down on the sofa in front of the coffee table, and Sophia and Liam went up to their bedroom.
(In the bedroom)
Sophia
Darling, don't you think it's late enough for the reception and it seems to me that you've already had a little drink, don't you?
Liam
Darling, don't be angry! Yes, we've already had some whiskey, I really pulled off a great deal at work and deserve some rest!
Besides, Mr. Harris has been talking all evening, talking only about you! After he saw you undressed in my office, he expressed a desire to see you again many times. I cannot refuse him, he is going to hand over the management of the company to me in the near future.
Sophia
What? Do you want me to pose for Harris as well as for you in your office?!
Liam
Darling, don't be angry! This is important for me, for you and me and for the future of our whole family. Think about it.
You probably shouldn't dress the same way as then, but I'm asking you to try! You have a lot of all sorts of chic things in which you are simply stunning. I love you, darling! You will succeed!
Sophia
Liam, you're crazy! And if this old fart gets excited and wants even more? What do you want me to do then?
Liam
Don't worry, we'll figure something out.
I'll go downstairs to him, and you put on something to make his jaw drop and drool! (Liam, smiling broadly, headed into the living room to Mr. Harris, picking up another bottle of whiskey on the way)
Sophia looked after her departing husband with some bewilderment. When he disappeared into the doorway, she thought for a while, what should she do and what should she wear?
After a minute, Sophia began to pick up a suitable outfit. She changed several outfits to more open and sexy ones, and imagining that Mr. Harris would see her in this form, and even in the presence of her husband, began to experience increasingly strong sexual arousal.
Sophia
(Maybe this outfit is quite revealing for them, but if Liam demands something more, then I'll wear this one) Sofia put aside the sexy outfit that she recently bought in a sex shop, wanting to make a surprise for Liam.
*Perhaps it should be continued, but I'm not sure.)
Very nice nexerThey both want to see the same thing
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Another tip is to check that you have "headlamp off"on every new scene and even when you load a duf file check it is still off as Daz has a habit of turning it on.View attachment 1461815
First time trying to use god rays I feel like it looks really odd so constructive criticism is welcome.
a little brighter, I guess, and it'll be perfect
try to blur the rays a bit more
This is the bright scene that I have but I didn't like it but here you go laszlot34a little brighter, I guess, and it'll be perfect
a strange order of the imagesThe substitute day reaches it's climax. Probably more than once.
I think if the tights were white or flesh-colored, it would be better.This is the bright scene that I have but I didn't like it but here you go laszlot34
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