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Now I have to admit I have done a serious amount of study on this subject, but I have come to one main conclusion.. Nothing say's MILF better than a G string and heels.......
First of all - thank you for your constructive criticism. I wrote the story in 1/12 hours, the idea came to me earlier. I wrote it in German and then had it translated paragraph by paragraph using DeepL. My English is nowhere near good enough for that.
The story is too "dark" for them. This is exactly the reaction I was hoping for. Not necessarily from you, but that was the goal. Just sex and a power play. No eroticism. There are three reasons for this. A blackmail like this is not a pony court but a game of life and death (figuratively speaking). And I have a diabolic pleasure in showing some here in this forum again and again the consequences of this power game. This has nothing to do with eroticism. On the contrary, I have deleted some passages that seemed too erotic to me. I also wanted to avoid the impression that I am a fan of such fantasies. There are some here in F95zone who know no sense of shame what concerns their preferences.
Now, as for your opinion on how the blackmail story should go, I agree - Sophia needs to be able to defend herself and trick Aiden a little bit at a time.
I will make a couple of corrections to the story. But it's my first story ever and I don't think this is going to be a passion of mine.
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That was Sophia's whole reason for my 'surprise' this week. We are selecting names now so, in about 9 months...! But. She may be unwilling to pose for that. She can be shy at times.
And it's time for the second and final part of the Aiden saga.
Enjoy!
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Guys take a look at this
https://f95zone.to/threads/blender-daz-studio-pro.104502/
https://f95zone.to/threads/blender-daz-studio-pro.104502/
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Hello! A new character enters the scene!
Characters: Sophia and Janitor Clarke
"Well equipped"
ANNND another part of the series...
"Who is Watching? Part 3"
Characters: Sophia and Janitor Clarke
"Well equipped"
ANNND another part of the series...
"Who is Watching? Part 3"
At least he is looking but, he is looking for knowledge not an assistant. Ergo he is still running solo! If it was a request for an artist skilled in making this happen I would be more encouraged. However, it is quite clear that is not the request. Whatever the need this indicates something is awry and he is still solo (Not Han).
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more pleaseHello! A new character enters the scene!
Characters: Sophia and Janitor Clarke
"Well equipped"
View attachment 1584048
ANNND another part of the series...
"Who is Watching? Part 3"
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So adding further complexity to already long gaps between updates.... mmmm I think he should stick to what he,she,they are good at.... my two cents
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