VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [P2 v0.225 + P1 v0.152] [Lust & Passion]

[Talcum Powder]

Sex-Ed was a bad place to start in the first place. It is very challenging to jump out of that into a relationship feeling with M/S. I'm not a fan of Sex-Ed theme period.

As I see it the sex-ed theme works better if Dylan is pursuing Emma or Marie, or even Nathalie, as his love interest. It would actually be very interesting, and possibly quite funny/ironic, if Dylan was only getting sex-ed from his mom and wasn't really interested in it but Sophia did get attracted to Dylan through those events. That would be something different - desparate son want's mom's help learning sex is a classic trope if his real motivation is nookie with mommy, mommy is reluctant because she thinks her son is pursuing her. If his real motivation is with someone else then it creates a situation where Sophia wants to push things further with Dylan but he distances from her in favor of his true love interest. It would be interesting if he was the one that ended up thinking "Ew, gross. You're my mom."

As a side benefit, this adds a lot to Sophia's sexual frustration and might make her throwing herself at the next male with a pulse - postman, janitor, movers, whatever - even more plausible.
[edit] Maybe plausible is too strong a word...[/edit]
My opinion, that sounds better than what the sex-ed route is going to turn into.

 

[Bishop Robert]

As I see it the sex-ed theme works better if Dylan is pursuing Emma or Marie, or even Nathalie, as his love interest. It would actually be very interesting, and possibly quite funny/ironic, if Dylan was only getting sex-ed from his mom and wasn't really interested in it but Sophia did get attracted to Dylan through those events. That would be something different - desparate son want's mom's help learning sex is a classic trope if his real motivation is nookie with mommy, mommy is reluctant because she thinks her son is pursuing her. If his real motivation is with someone else then it creates a situation where Sophia wants to push things further with Dylan but he distances from her in favor of his true love interest. It would be interesting if he was the one that ended up thinking "Ew, gross. You're my mom."

As a side benefit, this adds a lot to Sophia's sexual frustration and might make her throwing herself at the next male with a pulse - postman, janitor, movers, whatever - even more plausible.
[edit] Maybe plausible is too strong a word...[/edit]
My opinion, that sounds better than what the sex-ed route is going to turn into.

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[PaxHadrian17]

What you just explained is the format L&P, IMO, intentionally had for the twist before and after its removal. Sophia/Dylan's story was tied into the others because the corruption would bend her will to allow Sophia and Dylan to have their moment eventually. But for some reason, I think he is trying to shift out of that format now from Sophia and Dylan's conversation before and after the hobo fight scene. The problem is the original story format from the beginning doesn't fit this new format. So Part of me wonders if he will change some of the dialog and some scenes to provide this new narrative in the Part I revamp he's doing.

I agree with you - he has written himself into a bit of a corner with the Sophia/Dylan relationship. The writing and story should give us, with both introspection (Sophia) and action (Sophia and Dylan) the ability to advance the relationship 'realistically.' It should be more difficult for Dylan to achieve some of what Sam did due to the fact that he is Sophia's son.

I don't see a way for Dylan to 'catch up' to Sam (regarding sexual progression) by the end of the PD.

It would be a shame if the below was what happens.

 

[neronxx]

the 0.180 update will definitely the most boring update

 

[tee31]

the 0.180 update will definitely the most boring update

I agree, a bunch of talking and just introducing her new hair style.

 

[Chucked_Sandwich]

Definitely not boring what with all the fabric touching going on.....

 

[Alley_Cat]

Definitely not boring what with all the fabric touching going on.....

Isn't this event about levelling up to hair touching?

 

[Apexpredator47]

Are we getting a sophia/julia storyline?

 

[Lord_Xanatos]

Progress Report Ver. 0.180

65% - 65%
0% - 0%

 

[lockerxx]

Are we getting a sophia/julia storyline?

No sorry.Julia is a love interest for Ellie.maybe a Sophie/Ellie/julia like the pool event buy only L&P knows.

 

[neronxx]

While our dick He has been waiting to see Patricia again for more than a year and the story is moving slowly
Why should an update be developed on two boring and unpopular characters who are also lesbians?

 

[Lord_Xanatos]

Progress Report Ver. 0.180.

70% - 65%
0% - 0%

 

[Zacko man]

Sex-Ed was a bad place to start in the first place. It is very challenging to jump out of that into a relationship feeling with M/S. I'm not a fan of Sex-Ed theme period.

Reading the story's context up to this point would be best. At no moment before this scene did she express any feelings or thoughts that made her feel this way. There was no build-up to this point. It was nothing but "Sex-Ed." Now all of a sudden, after one fight with drinking hobos, She expresses interest in Dylan. L&P should have established a build-up point around the bikini event to show that she could have acknowledged that Dylan started making her feel different and was conflicted with her feelings toward Dylan.

If you compare some of the other stories, like Ellie and Sam, you can see a build-up; although it's quick, it has a sequence you can follow. At the same time, Dylan doesn't have that. So is Dylan going to catch up? Yes, but is it going to be a flip of the switch? This is highly likely because now, per L&P, there is a cool-down period that has to ramp back up again, and he can't build the story up anymore, So he will have to make it hot.

So it's not about her seeing him as a strong protector; her feelings about Dylan are changing. It's how Sophia arrived here with Dylan that is the issue. So that's my problem with the Sophia/Dylan story atm. Also, Dylan is supposed to cruise past Sam in the evening event.

l&p should get Sophia/Dylan out of that Sex-Ed as much as possible. Otherwise the Sophia/Dylan storyline will surely be an epic fail in the game. Dylan doesn't need Sex-Ed to progress with Sophia. we hope l&p get Sophia/Dylan out of that sex-ed stuff.

Let's see next Sophia/Dylan events, we'll have to wait and see if L&p will continue the sex-ed thing or if Sophia/Dylan will come out of the sex-ed.

I agree with you, I think sex-ed is like a dumb weird and lifeless doll game. There are no feelings, attraction, love and thoughts in sex-ed. The Sophia/Dylan realashship in the game is similarly flat at the moment. Those 3 devil kids of 2nd side job need sex-ed. Sex-ed makes sense for that storyline. But It doesn't make sense for the Sophia/Dylan storyline. I don't think Dylan needs sex-ed. It also doesn't require sex-ed for Dylan to progress after the Soohia/Dylan last jogging event.

 

[Vigeous]

As I see it Sex-ed was implanted so that the story makes more sense at the start. But now when Sophia sees Dylan more as a man the idea will be put aside and their relationship will improve more on feelings just like it happens with Sam

 

[Hlextor]

I agree with you, I think sex-ed is like a dumb weird and lifeless doll game. There are no feelings, attraction, love and thoughts in sex-ed. The Sophia/Dylan realashship in the game is similarly flat at the moment. Those 3 devil kids of 2nd side job need sex-ed. Sex-ed makes sense for that storyline. But It doesn't make sense for the Sophia/Dylan storyline. I don't think Dylan needs sex-ed. It also doesn't require sex-ed for Dylan to progress after the Soohia/Dylan last jogging event.

In L&P view, mother and son can come closer only through them sex-Ed and lust. Everything else (love, affection, romance) is excluded in the long run. Unfortunately!

 

[Ntsoomnkuabtuag]

Hehehehe the story will end soon and who still hope or think she will fuck by other dick? You wait part 3, part 4 or 5. Go watch porn better? Most of time after she fuck by other dick she will be no more interesting like before she still not take any other dick, this why NTR suck sometime.

 

[Bahraini]

I agree with you, I think sex-ed is like a dumb weird and lifeless doll game. There are no feelings, attraction, love and thoughts in sex-ed. The Sophia/Dylan realashship in the game is similarly flat at the moment. Those 3 devil kids of 2nd side job need sex-ed. Sex-ed makes sense for that storyline. But It doesn't make sense for the Sophia/Dylan storyline. I don't think Dylan needs sex-ed. It also doesn't require sex-ed for Dylan to progress after the Soohia/Dylan last jogging event.

But he is her son for fuck sake, this game is supposed to be a realistic game about a prude mother getting corrupted slowly, how can she have a romantic relationship with her son? That's not possible, i like the sex ed story and the way he will pursuad his mother to do sexual things.

 

[Dr.SigmundFap]

But he is her son for fuck sake, this game is supposed to be a realistic game about a prude mother getting corrupted slowly, how can she have a romantic relationship with her son? That's not possible, i like the sex ed story and the way he will pursuad his mother to do sexual things.

And Ellie is her daughter, and look what happened there? Plus, you have the 2nd-second side job that went way beyond realism in two PDs. Most of the story doesn't follow the "realistic" sense that L&P describes in his novel. The only path you could call realistic, or close to it, is the good wife side. So, IMO, we are out of the realm of "That's not possible."

 

[hzjujk]

Let's put it this way, sex education classes are a normal thing. It would also be possible for Sophia to teach her own son at school. In that respect I have no problem with the idea of sex education taking place privately between Sophia and Dylan. But a sexual escalation between the two just wouldn't be possible without the other events Sophia has experienced so far.
Only if you let the SexEd story stand on its own does it make no sense.
The last event with Sam should also be seen in this context.
Sophia has been subjected to constant sexual temptation and stimulation over the past few days. The fact that the event escalated to such an extent, Sophia masturbating while Sam sucks her breasts, would be totally unbelievable without the other events of the past few days.
Only embedded in the other events of the last few days can I follow L&P's thought that SexEd is the starting point for a sexual mother/son relationship (increasing horniness and moral degeneration of the MC).
From this starting point you can certainly tinker the cuckold route in which Dylan can take advantage of the fact that Sophia is becoming more and more of a sexual predator and loses all scruples.
But for a romantic route... it takes a lot more than that, and SexEd isn't a good place to start. And then, by definition, the romantic path is first and foremost a monogamous path. Especially since there's Liam, husband and father, and he's not an asshole like in many other games. Also, unlike Sam, Dylan isn't gifted with talent. How Dylan is supposed to emancipate himself from his father via the SexEd path, how it is supposed to become a real alternative for Sophia, I can't see.
Incidentally, this is also shown in many other games in which there is a mother/son relationship, which is completely unbelievable, even if the father is a total asshole or is dead.

 

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