Very nice update!
At first I was sceptical reading the last few posts of the dev, but the result is enjoyable.
The second job is a nice contrast to it's counterpart and I like where its going. I think it's a shame there is so much else stuff like Bennett and club-guys, that I personally don't care for, instead of focussing more on the core of the story + maybe the side jobs.
But the Sam scene was nice, and so was the Dyla one, even thou I think both should be a bit further ahead since the model-scene by the pool, than just a kiss on the cheek.
The one thing that actually bothers me is adding more students to the class. Like... why?!
I already forgot most of the existing one (and basically all of Ellies dance-friends) so why add even more characters that will take up time and space that we could use for the more important storylines?