VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.215f] [Lust & Passion]

[OppaG]

allfather pls give me sex

 

[victor659]

I don't care about sex content or the slow progression for now. People that don't like the slow progress this game is not for them and must look for somewhere else. The only thing that i want for this game is the dev to remain to the original concept and continue working on it. And if a site with more freedom comes out it would be better to get this game out of Patreon.

The only thing that i don't like in this game is the point system and how the different routes/paths are separated.
First of all how the lesbian route is compatible with "good wife"? It doesn't make sense. And what is the reward/ending of the "good wife" path? To have sex with her hasband after 5 years ? This is ridiculus.
If you want to seperate the point system to 2 basic categories such us "good wife" and "filthy" at least make the "good wife" compatible with Dylan and Ellie as well and you can rename it to "faithfull to the family". Or make at least Dylan and Ellie paths independable to filthy points. For example why Sophia have to fuck the gym boy (to get some filthy points) to be able to progress the story with Dylan?

 

[arifarfi]

A wife and mother is my favourite game.This update is the best one.
if he can make updates quicker , this game is going to be number one or two

 

[Olivia_V]

His pacing has certainly improved, which is a good thing. What I fear though is that, since this update features some major branching, it may increase the necessary intervals between releases. Also, this game may need a walkthrough if the the choices become more consequential. Is it true that you'll be locked out of Alyssa content if

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[penmaster]

allfather pls give me sex

Amen

 

[Otyi]

Here you go
Save Slot 1 : Bad Wife Route, Nursing old gramps 2nd job, Taken after shower Before the decision to take a shower in a school
Save Slot 2 : Good Wife Route, Lecture Helper 2nd job, Taken after shower Before the decision to take a shower in a school
Save Slot 3 : Bad Wife Route, Lecture Helper 2nd job, Taken after shower Before the decision to take a shower in a school


Thank you!

 

[baka]

the progress is very slow, and this time the slut mother is showing half of her pubes to her son and do a strip-to-lingerie-show to son's friend. the end, see u in 1½ months or so.

 

[Miðgarðsormr]

Well to put things in perspective. If me and my wife does not have sex in more the 2 weeks (16 days) especially if either of us is extremely horny during that time, something seriously would be wrong, that is not normal IMO. Being coy only works for a couple of days, then you straight out ask "Honey, I was so frigging horny last night, why did you come to bed so late? come to bed earlier so the we can have some sex."

I do not understand going 2 weeks without having sex while being sexually frustrated. Even if you're tired, you just fucking spoon and put it in. No effort and viola, both feel some release.

I think this frustrates me the most in this game. I initially played as a good wife with some light flirtation in between, but damn. With such a bum of a husband, her "Filthy" rout is not filthy at all. She's a prude on the filthy route!? What frustrates me, is that you have the premise of a marriage, there is no reason to keep the audience without sex scenes while the husband is around.

What normal wife would still not walk around horny with her husband not paying any attention to her? The Good wife route for me is totally unrealistic. The hornier you get, the more everything that moves make you horny. I mean seriously, after the mishap with the sexy clothes, he just returns to ignoring her straight out?

The way that Our Fate does it is more realistic. You bang your girlfriend while starting to develop feelings for someone else.
Once you feel that your feelings for the new girl is too much you cheat or break it up. etc. etc.

Sorry about rambling.
TLDR: The premise of a marriage makes it unnecessary to blue ball the player to this extreme. One sex scene somewhere in the game could have given player a sex scene without changing the overall dynamic of the game. The premise of the game is an adult game after all? This frustrates a lot of people playing the game.

As a writer that works for a living i told this many times and will keep telling it. This is due bad writing and not having a clue how the story is revealing in a short concept before making the game. 70% of whats happening ingame could be shorter and explained trough dialouge instead of 1800 renders that show stuff you dont need for narration nor character development.

No women married or not would behave like this in a relationship. It would turn out that when the husband is home she would forcefully if needed be engage in sex. Either the dev is a virgin which i doubt or didnt have a long term relationship to not know the behaving of women once they are horny and their boyfriend/husband isnt putting out.

And its exactly this bad writing which makes blue balling the audience more and more irrelevant as the mother is behaving like catholic nun that has seen hell and thats why she never gets horny in the slightest.

Any women in a relationship that didn't have sex for 14 days will either start a fight for nothing due her sexual frustration or she becomes so very charming that you hardly make it trough the front door before half your clothes are already gone.

And i still cant believe how anyone would support such a dev. Even DS didnt blue ball that hard and he was a master in it.

 

[JinXXX]

Ok its official this game is a cock fest, let's count together how many dicks we saw till now
Husband✔
Son✔
3 guys in sauna✔
Janitor✔
Neighbour✔
Almost see her brother in law pipi when he jumped in the pool naked
Feel free to complete if i omitted someone... so if dicks are your thing this game is perfect
Now lets's count how many tities we saw...hmm

 

[roro]

His pacing has certainly improved, which is a good thing. What I fear though is that, since this update features some major branching, it may increase the necessary intervals between releases. Also, this game may need a walkthrough if the the choices become more consequential. Is it true that you'll be locked out of Alyssa content if

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This game already has an official walkthrough...

 

[HBKTheIcon69]

For day 16 the walkthrough mentions nothing for evening to start/trigger Sophia/ellie/patricia...a bit of a description for getting to that route would be helpful.

 

[lockerxx]

His pacing has certainly improved, which is a good thing. What I fear though is that, since this update features some major branching, it may increase the necessary intervals between releases. Also, this game may need a walkthrough if the the choices become more consequential. Is it true that you'll be locked out of Alyssa content if

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yes.but only task 1 when we guess we can send him to hell

 

[SeriouslyPanda]

damn, this game is bestttt

 

[Alfius]

I don't care about sex content or the slow progression for now. People that don't like the slow progress this game is not for them and must look for somewhere else. The only thing that i want for this game is the dev to remain to the original concept and continue working on it. And if a site with more freedom comes out it would be better to get this game out of Patreon.

The only thing that i don't like in this game is the point system and how the different routes/paths are separated.
First of all how the lesbian route is compatible with "good wife"? It doesn't make sense. And what is the reward/ending of the "good wife" path? To have sex with her hasband after 5 years ? This is ridiculus.
If you want to seperate the point system to 2 basic categories such us "good wife" and "filthy" at least make the "good wife" compatible with Dylan and Ellie as well and you can rename it to "faithfull to the family". Or make at least Dylan and Ellie paths independable to filthy points. For example why Sophia have to fuck the gym boy (to get some filthy points) to be able to progress the story with Dylan?

Slow progress is one thing, but no sex for a married couple is, as you say, unrealistic, unless they are heading for divorce or if both partners have low libido.

As you say here:
And what is the reward/ending of the "good wife" path? To have sex with her hasband after 5 years ? This is ridiculus.

That's my complain, the whole scenario is unrealistic. There is plenty of slow burn games I enjoy. Our Fate is one of them. Melody is another. But the scenario and premise is more realistic. Love it or hate it, but that's what makes incest a "good" tool for slow burn adult games. The Taboo puts the brakes on the sex side of such a relationship, where none exits for a married couple.

 

[penmaster]

the progress is very slow, and this time the slut mother is showing half of her pubes to her son and do a strip-to-lingerie-show to son's friend. the end, see u in 1½ months or so.

Lol

 

[NeptuneLAS]

a wife and how to take money from your patrons.. the last update was about february 2x.. this one 11 of april... and got half a day.. may if you play this in 2040 you can get to patch 0.85 with 18 days of story. great potential to the trash can..
stop giving money for nothing

 

[erasernew]

The author of the game does not know how to get more money. He is doing bad decision by slowing down tempo of the game. At some point patreons will punish him for this and i think the game will abandoned to the end of the year....

If he start doing more frequent updates more patreons will come,but with this tempo more will go away...

For the husband, why they don't make sex... he has an afair... In good wife path, she has done 2 times sex in her life, and it is enough for her. In the filthy path she does not know that she is nymphomaniac yet!

 

[kktt252]

lust passion my german friend the game is briliant i like that you r not speeding seual things to much but its still to slow you mby might speed up a little or release more updates per month like once per 2 weeks that vould be enough due my country problems i cant support ou on patreon so i hoope that you will try to listen to me or mby you want to make too much money but after whille your patreons gets tired of waiting or long story to some sex

 

[pthug76]

The AWAM Cycle Theory:
* Almost everyone playing this game for the first time: "holy Jesus! Best game everrr!! Im gonna pledge to the dev's patreon right away!!"
* Then you start waiting for the updates every 1.5 months only to get 50 different renders of the MC driving/walking to somewhere, 50 different renders of every single conversation no matter how trivial or pointless, and a grand total of 5 renders of MC's cleavage or pubes from weird angles and with bad lighting but enough to tease you & keep you excited to wait for the next update 1.5 month from now. The story barely moves forward. The characters barely develop. But, the renders are beautiful, story's good enough and there's barely any other games in this female protag/slow corruption/incest genre.
* You'd go on Patreon & F95 to see other people's opinions and you see a mixed bag of criticisms from those who only play these games for the sex-scenes + those with genuine constructive criticisms, as well as L&P loyalists who'd gang up on those who criticize the dev & the game + high praises from those who just started playing the game & have no clue where the criticisms come from or what the arguments are about.
* 3 weeks or so passes by and dev's barely communicating on Patreon, only posting a preview pic every week and barely answering the comments. You start to think maybe you should stop pledging to the dev for a while.
* Dev's patreon numbers go down through the month as ppl get tired of waiting and he'd very subtly hint in a random comment that he might drop the project cuz he has classes & don't make enough $ blah blah blah. The loyalists panic & feel threatened so they up their pledges to keep the numbers steady while the dev & everyone else start building hype about the next update in the weeks leading up to release.
* A few days before release, hype is to the max. Even those who constantly criticize the game & hate everything about it are suddenly on board and waiting for the "big" event that's going to take place in this update, hoping that it's THE event lol.
* Update releases to a mixed reception. The cycle continues. L&P keeps earning his $5k/month while refusing to hire anyone to help him with the renders (or any other stage of development for that matter) to speed up the process.

 

[penmaster]

Very critical analysis by some players. Maybe they can make their own game.