It's ok, but it's in need of a huge amount of polish. Nothing overtly WRONG, but a lot of wee things which make the whole experience feel cheap.
The font text is colour coded to the character, but it has a while border, which is kind of odd. No background behind the text either so it can be a bit difficult to read.
There is also an issue where the dev puts the characters emotions in the content which is just not the way to do a story.
I'm used to having 100 percent of the shares, so yes, I am worried. (Angry)
So are you worried or angry? Also this is a visual novel, you've already got the character looking angry, you really don't need to state it. Either trust in your writing and renders, or find a better way. You just lead the player to think the character is saying it and you end up with a Hercules like situation. I appreciate the game is very obviously not written in English so perhaps the emotions in brackets are prompts left behind for translation purposes, but that then suggests there should be more care taken to clean up after it has been done
It's not all bad though, the main lassie looks nice, the renders are actually pretty solid. there was a line where a character said another dressed like a cheap sailor and that made me laugh. Not just a sailor. Oh no, a cheap one.
All in all it's interesting, the game has different threads and they're all doing their wee thing. Translation doesn't help it but it's not the worst thing in the world. Just comes down to a need for polish