- Jul 29, 2022
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Welp, wifey is absent and someone is fucking in MY ROOM, in MY HOUSE... better ignore it!any logical answer why mc didnt enter the room at party where was his wife and there was sex moans?
Welp, wifey is absent and someone is fucking in MY ROOM, in MY HOUSE... better ignore it!any logical answer why mc didnt enter the room at party where was his wife and there was sex moans?
Seriously.Why does the dude have to always be such an insufferable clown, the wife such a complete moron under a spell, and the people around them such blatant sociopaths that neither of the primary characters can see? I don't mind the genre before someone tries to strawman me, but even the most beta guy I know, if he heard people fucking in his bedroom at a party he's hosting, would go in and ask why they're fucking in his bed. The camp is a drug den of rapists, and the wife is like "teehee, the contract says i need to stay here for another month, nothing I can do!". The stories have to make sense within the realm of suspension of disbelief to be enjoyable. I think I'm done with this one, too.
Yeah, thats a bit wierd ha-ha.any logical answer why mc didnt enter the room at party where was his wife and there was sex moans?
Do you wanna know why dick is blurred out? Here is the answer:Look, Kerosine. Maybe you change ending in this update to more catching.And event in the room at party, where was his wife and there was sex moans? As guys said up here. That's looks unbelievable. Just an advice. Maybe rework some events? Or you trying to turn your game in another cucking garbage?You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I agree branches and over "choice" is a cancer.. it just break the natural narrative of a story..its going to be garbarage like became Wife phone, when tons of branches and none of them bounded, every branch goes on its own way.
I think, because the door was locked.any logical answer why mc didnt enter the room at party where was his wife and there was sex moans?
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I liked the play, but there are open-ended issues. What happened between his boss and his wife? Did the voices in the bedroom belong to his wife? Will we see the answers to these?You must be registered to see the links![]()
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Dude, I agree with you that excessive number of branches spoil the story (but not this game, actually there are few branches).Do people like it when these porn games add too many unnecessary characters? Now there will be so many paths and those looking for a certain path have to wait ages to get progress. Like we already had the boss's daughter. Now we added another girl. Oh and ofcourse we have to have the mom as well. The mc or wife will probably have a sister as well in a couple of updates.
And the writing is a mess. Oh my wife is missing and someone is fucking in the bedroom. I guess I will just ignore it. Oh my wife wants to quit her job. Wait she can't she has to stay for a month. The wife refusing to tell the husband where she worked in the beginning lol. Oh the camp is full of rapists but my mom is also going to work there for some reason and I can't do anything about it. Guess I will just see her turn into a cum bucket. All the messages Samuel sends mc telling him he will fuck the wife. I guess he can't show it to his wife or mom telling them what kind of people they are dealing with.
It's like a wife's phone where Jenna plots and makes the mc lose his company but the wife is still friends with her even though she helped destroy their life. Also, having too many branches the story makes no cohesive sense at all.
I absoulutly agree with the branches..Do people like it when these porn games add too many unnecessary characters? Now there will be so many paths and those looking for a certain path have to wait ages to get progress. Like we already had the boss's daughter. Now we added another girl. Oh and ofcourse we have to have the mom as well. The mc or wife will probably have a sister as well in a couple of updates.
And the writing is a mess. Oh my wife is missing and someone is fucking in the bedroom. I guess I will just ignore it. Oh my wife wants to quit her job. Wait she can't she has to stay for a month. The wife refusing to tell the husband where she worked in the beginning lol. Oh the camp is full of rapists but my mom is also going to work there for some reason and I can't do anything about it. Guess I will just see her turn into a cum bucket. All the messages Samuel sends mc telling him he will fuck the wife. I guess he can't show it to his wife or mom, telling them what kind of people they are dealing with.
It's like a wife's phone where Jenna plots and makes the MC lose his company, but the wife is still friends with her even though she helped destroy their life. Also, having too many branches, the story makes no cohesive sense at all.
But this is just internet porn, so there's no art or story or... game, really. It's just "well, here's the porn I jack off to + a lot of convoluted crap you have to click through to get to it."Dude, I agree with you that excessive number of branches spoil the story (but not this game, actually there are few branches).
Adding some additional character extend little bit the longevity of the game I guess.
Regarding the sophistication of the plot..... Well it is very difficult to find a good artists and good story tellers all in one...
So I guess you need to take it for what it is... Just porn.
There are very few artists here that are even talented storytellers...(No easy skill to have the ability to understand the REAL adult world and the ability to put in a captivating story)
You can absolutely write a realistic NTR scenario. Not that it needs to be realistic. It simply needs to be plausible to the environment created. Even fantasy/sci-fi stories must follow their own internal logic and can have a plausible, realistic feeling if grounded to that logic, even if dealing in a realm that defies known science. The importance is to follow that internal logic to keep a plausible suspension of disbelief so the viewer/reader can be immersed in the story. Yes. Even in porn games. The reason to play a porn game instead of just watching porn is to have that sense of immersion. The exception is some coomers who will play absolutely anything that fits their fetish & could likely jack off to a stick-figure drawing on the wall by a retarded guy as long as it says NTR or Harem on it, explaining why some games like this still get a following. The rest of us need the game/story to provide good suspension of disbelief. Character actions and plausible reasoning in their environment are a huge part of that.I absoulutly agree with the branches..
I also agree with the writing to a degree, but it's a porn game after all. I don't think you can write the story really realistic and still get to the NTR in that scenario.