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Rickster82

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What I don't understand is why the main character doesn't just change his cell phone number.
 

K5434

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Pay no mind to the simple minded idiots on here
Aha, so insulting everyone like a 5 year old makes you better because of what exactly? The main concern is, that the last updates show us, that our MC is becoming a classic sissy cuckold, who gets a Boner when his relatives are getting banged and im sry for spoiling this.

Thats not NTR, NTR would be when the MC endures pain and humiliation, not getting off from that. The Game claims to be an NTR game, which it cant be at this point, when the MC is a cuckold.

EDIT: The Huge Plotholes or why the MC is so clueless would be something to critices too.
 
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What I don't understand is why the main character doesn't just change his cell phone number.
Cleary they have this mystery hacker who hasn't been revealed yet helping them so changing number wouldn't help especially if they have access to MC's wife's phone autumn's phone and MC's mother's phone
 

Insane One

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I'm interested to see what Autumn could possibly say to retcon the wife literally trying to say, "NO!" (not in just one word, obviously) in her POV sequence before he fucked her. I'm sorry, but the moment she even verbally tried to stop him it qualified as rape (the initial reaction to what's happening is the only one that matters, everything after is influenced by the sensations they're experiencing). Plus she was too damn drunk to see anything (which was a little painful on the eyes, not gonna lie), so when Sammy-boy says she wasn't THAT drunk it's obvious he's full of shit. We literally see just how eye-abusingly smashed she is right before it goes down.
If the dev somehow makes it into a "she was totally willing" scenario, I'm sorry but that ruins it for me (not because I don't like the porn, simply because it'll no longer make even the SMALL bit of sense that it is desperately clinging to). Because it completely retcons EVERYTHING from the Laura POV (rendering the entire sequence a meaningless addition to insert a fuck scene intro), which makes it just as crap as the bits of Dragon Ball Super where they retcon this and that and that and this until it's unintelligible gibberish. (And it's the reason I avoid Dragon Ball Super)
 

1Teddy1

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it just as crap as the bits of Dragon Ball Super where they retcon this and that and that and this until it's unintelligible gibberish. (And it's the reason I avoid Dragon Ball Super)
I think you might be the smartest person in this thread by saying Dragon Ball super-duper crayola edition is shit, it would go double so if you talked shit about Naruto's non-canon son burrito.
 
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Insane One

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I think you might be the smartest person in this thread by saying Dragon Ball super-duper crayola edition is shit, it would go double so if you talked shit about Naruto's non-canon son burrito.
I feel that 100%. I couldn't even bring myself to ATTEMPT to watch Boruto. It just looked too damn corny for me, couldn't do it. I will forever love the originals. Nostalgia, plus satisfying AF main storylines. (personally, I never really minded the filler in the originals simply because it still brought action... and I'm an easy person to please when there are fights and explosions.)
:LOL:
 
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thokai

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Bro several people have pitched good ideas but dev only listens to his top tier patreons
The dev probably took some notes here too, or at least it seemed so to me when "MC visiting a doctor" showed up in the story.
I guess it might evolve into something similar to what i've suggested here.
Even without feminisation/sissification his doctor visits will most likely result in the MC getting ED, and the anti-baby-pills he wants to mix in the wife's breakfasts will turn out to be aphrotisiaca and she gets a dose right before heading to work each morning (maybe it's even the very same drug produced in the camp, to make the doctor's connections more obvious).

Unfortunatly i couldn't find any surprising plottwists so far that might make the story to stand out.
Sexually frustrated single mom that doesn't take much effort to corrupt, and sexually frustrated wife that got blackmailed, and after a short recovery was drunk fucked.
Both of them now got their first taste of BBC, which will repeat a couple more times before it evolves into gangbang parties at the cam and the dev is running out of content and has to bring in new characters to start the cycle again.

Maybe the MC's aunt shows up because she is concerned about her sister's recent changes and start to work at the camp to investigate herself.
Or the MC's older sister that cut ties with her family when she turned 18 and is now in need for money after she got devorced because of cheating, the MC's mother and wife would most likely recommend her to start working at the camp.


That Chris and Rick part is probably the weakest story and i don't feel like any kind of backstory reveal would be able to save its fate of being uninteresting.
I thought of something like: the MC's mother-in-law is a bit on the rich side and wasn't happy about her daughter had married the MC and took her away from her and is now out to ruin the MC's life in hopes to get her daughter back. So she found out where the MC started working and paid Chris for setting him up and compensate him for his finacial losses in the process.
But doesn't work out as planned with her daughter not returning to her after Chris put a debt on the MC, she is also not aware of Chris wanting to have sex with her daughter too.
But nothing of that would make any sense since the wife gave herself to Chris with little to no resistance at the beginning for just a manager promotion and already marked her as someone that doesn't need much to cheat on the MC.


Sidenote: didn't the wife already told her bestie about that she had sex with the MC's boss to not get him fired?
How come she is now so adamant about "I'd never cheat on the MC". :unsure:
 
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Dogorti

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It's so lame that the wife's first time cheating vaginally is with her being drugged, i think what a lot of people like about ntr is the corruption and that the wife becomes willing to cheat on her husband. Blackamail and rape are really lame as NTR and lazy writing imo. But Well, it's what It is.
 

biervampir

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its a good update, about 40 minutes of playing(reading ;)). But there should be some Info that you can press the buttons on the laptop any time its there. I didn't know and was waiting for the mc to open the website the whole time until i notice that i can click it myself haha
 
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