VN Ren'Py A Wife's Life [v0.7.0] [Kerosine_NTR]

[ottovon]

The creator will release the new version today or tomorrow.
I love this game and I'm excited for it, I hope it comes here soon.

 

[AliceLewdell]

Wellllll.... complicated is probably not the right word and none of it was deliberate. Well not completing
what they should have was, at least, a conscious thought. A Wife's Life is as deep as taking a fine watch (aka another
game) and hitting it with a sledgehammer. It's complicated to figure out just what your doing or looking at and
even more complicated to repair. With loads upon loads of frustration and anger at being made to endure all this
for no clear reason other than the writer hates his own main character on some weird personal level.
A Wife's Life isn't even NTR. It's watching a generally likable guy slowly get lobotomized, and pissed on for several
updates. He is LITERALLY unable to do anything but go to work and read his phone. maybe go to a bar to get pass
out drunk when the writer needs him further incapacitated for some reason. The wife stuff is just a side note in a game
called a WIFE'S LIFE. It should be called A Wasted Life. Because any good element or creativity is severely wasted.

Yes I know. I hard simped for this a while ago. That ship sailed. Now I'm helping other people make better stories
while Kerosene continues to dig a ditch he can't get out of.

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I see! though it sounds like not my cup of tea, I bet there are people who likes the plot the way it is.

as for the story - it's sooo complicating. I can't imagine how difficlut it is to write smth. you have to take to consideration so many aspects it's insane x____x the way the game is might be a part of author's preferences too (?)

 

[Anatolij-65]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I see! though it sounds like not my cup of tea, I bet there are people who likes the plot the way it is.

as for the story - it's sooo complicating. I can't imagine how difficlut it is to write smth. you have to take to consideration so many aspects it's insane x____x the way the game is might be a part of author's preferences too (?)

You are right, if the game is still played, then someone needs it. The only mistake is to think that only from your bell tower the whole truth is visible.

 

[Anatolij-65]

And I still don't understand why there are such complaints about the game? When you read a book, you like it, you read it, no, you close it and throw it in the trash. And you don't force the writer to rewrite it anew just for you, as you want.

 

[LUISIL]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I see! though it sounds like not my cup of tea, I bet there are people who likes the plot the way it is.

as for the story - it's sooo complicating. I can't imagine how difficlut it is to write smth. you have to take to consideration so many aspects it's insane x____x the way the game is might be a part of author's preferences too (?)

Write something with depth and details, meaningful, colorful, smart, funny, compelling, thrilling or whatever you want to be that work, is as hard as what you do with the same complexities of depth and details, meaningful, colorful, smart, funny, compelling, thrilling and whatever you want to do with your work.
You know...I totally can see you and Silken TRG collaborating in a Kinetic Novel, not a game, ART, a Visual Novel.
I'm just saying

 

[Anatolij-65]

Well my opinion on this game so far is that you focusing too much on one path when there are multiple paths you said that your base has plateaued its because you aren't listening to your whole fan base and only listening to the sissy cuckolds and staying on that path I see at least 3 different routes FAITHFUL ROUTE where wife leaves camp the one CUCKOLD SISSIFICATION ROUTE and one where the cuckold training videos backfire and makes him want to DOMINATE ALL THE WOMEN in the game you taking a poll clearly it's stopping you from getting more money because you're only focused on one thing Branch out do more and I'm guaranteeing your money flow will raise stop listening to only the people who pay in you high amounts you'll get more subscribers if you take theses other routes into account

A small dollar is better than a big thank you.

 

[Demonius88]

And I still don't understand why there are such complaints about the game? When you read a book, you like it, you read it, no, you close it and throw it in the trash. And you don't force the writer to rewrite it anew just for you, as you want.

So many crybabies out there can't handle the wife straying and the husband just sitting back, not seeking revenge or calling the cops. Sure, it's NTR, but they ignore that! They yearn for the faithful wife and the courageous husband. Honestly, they should be told to hit the road, pals. They picked the wrong game if they wanted love and loyalty.

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

So many crybabies out there can't handle the wife straying and the husband just sitting back, not seeking revenge or calling the cops. Sure, it's NTR, but they ignore that! They yearn for the faithful wife and the courageous husband. Honestly, they should be told to hit the road, pals. They picked the wrong game if they wanted love and loyalty.

No. What people, including me, want is a well written, well rounded story without a zillion
plot holes, inconsistencies and downright metagaming from the writer. The problem is people
willing to eat shit for the sake of jerk bait. The wife doesn't stray. She gets events dropped on her
that have no real reason for occurring. A rabid badger could fuck her in the camp parking lot and a 3rd
of you would praise the writer for it while the rest of us with functional brains would call it out as stupid
and out of place. It's not NTR, its rape fantasy where every man is a degenerate with no sense of self control.
All but the MC, who has no ability to do jack shit, not because it's his character but because the writer literally
will not allow him to one way or another. And in the end, after mind control and drugs they have to force shit to
happen invasively because a bunch of clapping monkeys are drooling for more MC abuse. You're not reading
this to fap to a wife's adultery, your reading this to fap to the next awful thing to happen to a guy nailed to
a chair. He doesn't have a small dick. We can see it on the damn porn videos. And yet he's being bullied
about having a small dick. What? He can definitely please his wife and yet we're told he was premature
ejaculation... no he doesn't. Plus neither Katherine nor Jenaveve seem to notice this about him.
Because there are so many hands in this that nothing ever makes sense.

It could make sense if Kerosene went back and fixed all the technical issues but he has no plan to.
So I was going to do that. I have since stopped production because it would never end.

No one wants a faithful anything. They want good story telling with meaningful options that WORK.

You can not AT ALL avoid the rape camp. PERIOD. Never intended. That is not infidelity. That is rape fantasy.
Chris blackmailing the wife is broken and incomplete pathing. If fixed it would make sense why this is happening.

A Wife's Life has enormous potential to be good. That's why I supported it. That's why I was working on
a remaster of it. It's why I was in Kerosene's group and why I friended him. I still think it can be better.
But no while his path is driven by morons throwing money at him and actively destroying the story through
Patreon.

Some people just like to eat shit. It's unavoidable. But the majority of us don't. And don't like this story
becoming shit.

 

[LUISIL]

No. What people, including me, want is a well written, well rounded story without a zillion
plot holes, inconsistencies and downright metagaming from the writer. The problem is people
willing to eat shit for the sake of jerk bait. The wife doesn't stray. She gets events dropped on her
that have no real reason for occurring. A rabid badger could fuck her in the camp parking lot and a 3rd
of you would praise the writer for it while the rest of us with functional brains would call it out as stupid
and out of place. It's not NTR, its rape fantasy where every man is a degenerate with no sense of self control.
All but the MC, who has no ability to do jack shit, not because it's his character but because the writer literally
will not allow him to one way or another. And in the end, after mind control and drugs they have to force shit to
happen invasively because a bunch of clapping monkeys are drooling for more MC abuse. You're not reading
this to fap to a wife's adultery, your reading this to fap to the next awful thing to happen to a guy nailed to
a chair. He doesn't have a small dick. We can see it on the damn porn videos. And yet he's being bullied
about having a small dick. What? He can definitely please his wife and yet we're told he was premature
ejaculation... no he doesn't. Plus neither Katherine nor Jenaveve seem to notice this about him.
Because there are so many hands in this that nothing ever makes sense.

It could make sense if Kerosene went back and fixed all the technical issues but he has no plan to.
So I was going to do that. I have since stopped production because it would never end.

No one wants a faithful anything. They want good story telling with meaningful options that WORK.

You can not AT ALL avoid the rape camp. PERIOD. Never intended. That is not infidelity. That is rape fantasy.
Chris blackmailing the wife is broken and incomplete pathing. If fixed it would make sense why this is happening.

A Wife's Life has enormous potential to be good. That's why I supported it. That's why I was working on
a remaster of it. It's why I was in Kerosene's group and why I friended him. I still think it can be better.
But no while his path is driven by morons throwing money at him and actively destroying the story through
Patreon.

Some people just like to eat shit. It's unavoidable. But the majority of us don't. And don't like this story
becoming shit.

What about the rights of this? I mean...anybody has ownership of this? legally speaking
Because, otherwise, Can someone take this and make her/his own version? Seriously
Silken, my sweet (not so) Innocent girl, you said before you were working on your vision...Is still on? Cause I'm really waiting for it

 

[Kieron1998]

What about the rights of this? I mean...anybody has ownership of this? legally speaking
Because, otherwise, Can someone take this and make her/his own version? Seriously
Silken, my sweet (not so) Innocent girl, you said before you were working on your vision...Is still on? Cause I'm really waiting for it

I won't dare to say that I have a better version of this but my version has alot more for mc to loose and there is alot at stake for him. I won't talk too much about it here because of the thread rules and stuff but my version sees mc's wife and a couple of daughters going through alot of shit but...but mc will have all the power to make decisions, meaning he won't be a sitting duck and just let other men use his family. For instance players can choose between(netorare, netorase, netori(where mc can go berserk and just fuck the people tryna mess with his family) , swinging, cheating , cuckolding) different paths to play which will obviously have a huge impact on storyline depending upon paths chosen or choices made. The main problem is I'm not a programmer(I'm trying my hardest to understand renpy but I'm failing) and for the past week or so I'm surfing all over the internet to find some resources to make a phone game like this in renpy but I haven't found any such resources to help me. Even chatgpt isn't being of any help. If I find someone who could help me in programming I would love to present this storyline that I have written and ready. The main selling points of visual novels are in general player agency so any game which has that would be a success in my opinion.

 

[LUISIL]

I won't dare to say that I have a better version of this but my version has alot more for mc to loose and there is alot at stake for him. I won't talk too much about it here because of the thread rules and stuff but my version sees mc's wife and a couple of daughters going through alot of shit but...but mc will have all the power to make decisions, meaning he won't be a sitting duck and just let other men use his family. For instance players can choose between(netorare, netorase, netori(where mc can go berserk and just fuck the people tryna mess with his family) , swinging, cheating , cuckolding) different paths to play which will obviously have a huge impact on storyline depending upon paths chosen or choices made. The main problem is I'm not a programmer(I'm trying my hardest to understand renpy but I'm failing) and for the past week or so I'm surfing all over the internet to find some resources to make a phone game like this in renpy but I haven't found any such resources to help me. Even chatgpt isn't being of any help. If I find someone who could help me in programming I would love to present this storyline that I have written and ready. The main selling points of visual novels are in general player agency so any game which has that would be a success in my opinion.

...And here is a good place to ask for help. Fingers crossed

 

[AliceLewdell]

You know...I totally can see you and Silken TRG collaborating in a Kinetic Novel, not a game, ART, a Visual Novel.
I'm just saying

ACTUALLY I have already received an offer of that kind! :3 (not from Silken)
but I am still thinking it through. Through the years I wasn't consitent with my art. So doing a big project might be quite challenging for me And I don't want to let anyone down in case me struggling mentally.
On the other hand I am very responsible when the things are connected to other people. So cooperating with someone might give me a boost.
Don't know. It's really complicated

I suggest not conitue this talk here tho! I am sure it doesn't belong to this A Wife's life thread ^^''"" Just wanted ti share it with you.

 

[Ericsdadismyhero]

If they are actively throwing all this money at him, why is he trying to implement a subscriber 'verification' process to the game?
I'd be amazed if this brings in more subscribers for the game.
Dude goes hard to try and stop the leaks yet wont go as hard to put actual Vanna Bardot scenes in the game.

 

[huddlestonkeith33]

So what it sounds like is the Dev is trying to restrict the game it just paying subscribers

 

[Anatolij-65]

Again the same old song about the main thing. You are discussing a game that you cannot understand because it is not like other games. Where are the same balls only in profile? That is why she has fallen for you all so much? We live in a time when a clock is not for time and a breast is not for a baby. Do you want to make it better? Well, well, (With a good artist you look at a beauty, with a genius - she looks at you) But there is a golden rule even if you walk on water someone from the crowd will still scream look and he can't even swim. And everything in this world is relative. For example, the length of a minute depends on which side of the toilet door you are on.

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

What about the rights of this? I mean...anybody has ownership of this? legally speaking
Because, otherwise, Can someone take this and make her/his own version? Seriously
Silken, my sweet (not so) Innocent girl, you said before you were working on your vision...Is still on? Cause I'm really waiting for it

This is actually an amazing question. The answer is... the person(s) or people with rights here are Vanna Bardot,
Jason Luv, Jax Slayher, Autumn Falls, Blacked, POV Life and every other channel and actor actress illegally used to
produce this. You can't claim ownership or Rights to a thing full of someone else's likeness or IP. That's the problem
with all these porn filled stories. The characters images and porn videos are the property of someone else.
Unless you have showable express permission and rights of use you are subject to every trademark and copyright
law as well as infringement laws globally. That's why I said I was changing some art in my remaster. I like not
being sued. And so far in my professional life I've only made friends and not enemies. Though I have been borderline
with Drake at least once and Rhianna twice haha I used to be a music producer before going full time Youtube content
creator. My deets are on my Profile.

Kerosene only has rights over the written parts of A Wife's Life. Those parts he didn't copy and paste from
other stories that is. Those elements belong to those people.

Too often people get on the internet and think they can just do anything, but you can't. It's like me making a story
and using the images and videos ripped from a popular Insta influencer... oh RIIIIGHT.... the step sister... hahaha

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

As for the rest, to answer my claim of working on a remaster, Kerosene in great wisdom announced
that any one is welcome to take his story and do anything they want with it right here on the forum.
Waving all rights he didn't actually have.

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

Like I said. Kerosene only has rights to the written elements of A Wife's Life and any ORIGINAL art.

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

I won't dare to say that I have a better version of this but my version has alot more for mc to loose and there is alot at stake for him. I won't talk too much about it here because of the thread rules and stuff but my version sees mc's wife and a couple of daughters going through alot of shit but...but mc will have all the power to make decisions, meaning he won't be a sitting duck and just let other men use his family. For instance players can choose between(netorare, netorase, netori(where mc can go berserk and just fuck the people tryna mess with his family) , swinging, cheating , cuckolding) different paths to play which will obviously have a huge impact on storyline depending upon paths chosen or choices made. The main problem is I'm not a programmer(I'm trying my hardest to understand renpy but I'm failing) and for the past week or so I'm surfing all over the internet to find some resources to make a phone game like this in renpy but I haven't found any such resources to help me. Even chatgpt isn't being of any help. If I find someone who could help me in programming I would love to present this storyline that I have written and ready. The main selling points of visual novels are in general player agency so any game which has that would be a success in my opinion.

I hope you find the help you need. I would love to see your story and support it

 

[Silken the Rocket Girl]

Write something with depth and details, meaningful, colorful, smart, funny, compelling, thrilling or whatever you want to be that work, is as hard as what you do with the same complexities of depth and details, meaningful, colorful, smart, funny, compelling, thrilling and whatever you want to do with your work.
You know...I totally can see you and Silken TRG collaborating in a Kinetic Novel, not a game, ART, a Visual Novel.
I'm just saying

I'm already in pre production of some stuff including a side story for The Higher Society. So I'm more than willing
to help where I can or give advice. But my plate is pretty full. Anyone that wants to follow my Insta is more than
welcome and I'll happily talk to you when I can