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thokai

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Bro several people have pitched good ideas but dev only listens to his top tier patreons
The dev probably took some notes here too, or at least it seemed so to me when "MC visiting a doctor" showed up in the story.
I guess it might evolve into something similar to what i've suggested here.
Even without feminisation/sissification his doctor visits will most likely result in the MC getting ED, and the anti-baby-pills he wants to mix in the wife's breakfasts will turn out to be aphrotisiaca and she gets a dose right before heading to work each morning (maybe it's even the very same drug produced in the camp, to make the doctor's connections more obvious).

Unfortunatly i couldn't find any surprising plottwists so far that might make the story to stand out.
Sexually frustrated single mom that doesn't take much effort to corrupt, and sexually frustrated wife that got blackmailed, and after a short recovery was drunk fucked.
Both of them now got their first taste of BBC, which will repeat a couple more times before it evolves into gangbang parties at the cam and the dev is running out of content and has to bring in new characters to start the cycle again.

Maybe the MC's aunt shows up because she is concerned about her sister's recent changes and start to work at the camp to investigate herself.
Or the MC's older sister that cut ties with her family when she turned 18 and is now in need for money after she got devorced because of cheating, the MC's mother and wife would most likely recommend her to start working at the camp.


That Chris and Rick part is probably the weakest story and i don't feel like any kind of backstory reveal would be able to save its fate of being uninteresting.
I thought of something like: the MC's mother-in-law is a bit on the rich side and wasn't happy about her daughter had married the MC and took her away from her and is now out to ruin the MC's life in hopes to get her daughter back. So she found out where the MC started working and paid Chris for setting him up and compensate him for his finacial losses in the process.
But doesn't work out as planned with her daughter not returning to her after Chris put a debt on the MC, she is also not aware of Chris wanting to have sex with her daughter too.
But nothing of that would make any sense since the wife gave herself to Chris with little to no resistance at the beginning for just a manager promotion and already marked her as someone that doesn't need much to cheat on the MC.


Sidenote: didn't the wife already told her bestie about that she had sex with the MC's boss to not get him fired?
How come she is now so adamant about "I'd never cheat on the MC". :unsure:
 
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Dogorti

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Jan 23, 2021
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It's so lame that the wife's first time cheating vaginally is with her being drugged, i think what a lot of people like about ntr is the corruption and that the wife becomes willing to cheat on her husband. Blackamail and rape are really lame as NTR and lazy writing imo. But Well, it's what It is.
 

biervampir

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its a good update, about 40 minutes of playing(reading ;)). But there should be some Info that you can press the buttons on the laptop any time its there. I didn't know and was waiting for the mc to open the website the whole time until i notice that i can click it myself haha
 

Diconica

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Game definitely isn't for me. My wife takes a job and won't tell me about it. That tells me enough right there.
First, if she can't tell me about it she doesn't need to be doing it. Second the fact she took it means I want not a damn thing to do with her again. Before she gets home the divorce papers will be waiting for her to sign.
You aren't a man if you accept that crap.
 

sandyknees34

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Game definitely isn't for me. My wife takes a job and won't tell me about it. That tells me enough right there.
First, if she can't tell me about it she doesn't need to be doing it. Second the fact she took it means I want not a damn thing to do with her again. Before she gets home the divorce papers will be waiting for her to sign.
You aren't a man if you accept that crap.

sir this is a porn game pirate forum, not your macho man fantasy blog
 
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I don't know where they're going with the NC but from what I read something starting to happen more than just edging I still think they need a branch it out a little bit
 
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