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I guess you have never seen the memes about the dyed hair weirdos who constantly screech all about them ists and phobes.
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Or, ya know, they've encountered enough racists to know the difference in how they choose their words. Because I can second that there absolutely is a difference and it's not hard to notice.
- Feb 6, 2020
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Without seeing her face I can't be 100% sure but I think it's Sofa Weber
- Nov 16, 2019
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We plan to continue making the game the way we do now. So no sandboxes
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- Nov 15, 2020
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Look, I wanted to believe in this game, the whole phone hack trope is nothing new but I'm still waiting for one with decent storytelling, one that would be coherent.
But instead of that, you're playing some dude with a lot of prejudice and insecurities, who of course projects all of them onto his wife; gets paranoid to the point he hacks his wife's phone and laptop, but on the side he will bang the first chick he meets within 2 days or something.
There's just too many things that are borderline insufferable, like the MC being the cheater while the wife is faithful (for now) in a supposedly NTR oriented game.
The wife's job being kept secret for so long and the MC's reaction to it.
The one-dimensional characters, you've got the slutty best friend and the dumbass sexual harasser, there's nothing else to them.
The way some important part of storytelling are just skipped as mentioned previously, when it's already established that conversation can happen outside the phone and laptop, like at the garage or at the park. But nah, let's be lazy instead and just wake up after the important stuff that could've been talked about and give the reader a good old "welp, that didn't go as planned".
The way the wife is ready to accept full-fledged sexual harassment despite warnings and concerns. I get it, she already has an interest in BBC early on, but if the corruption doesn't follow it just doesn't make much sense.
Idk man, make it make sense, too many times I've wondered "who tf acts / thinks like that?". A lot of it doesn't seem grounded in reality.
But instead of that, you're playing some dude with a lot of prejudice and insecurities, who of course projects all of them onto his wife; gets paranoid to the point he hacks his wife's phone and laptop, but on the side he will bang the first chick he meets within 2 days or something.
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There's just too many things that are borderline insufferable, like the MC being the cheater while the wife is faithful (for now) in a supposedly NTR oriented game.
The wife's job being kept secret for so long and the MC's reaction to it.
The one-dimensional characters, you've got the slutty best friend and the dumbass sexual harasser, there's nothing else to them.
The way some important part of storytelling are just skipped as mentioned previously, when it's already established that conversation can happen outside the phone and laptop, like at the garage or at the park. But nah, let's be lazy instead and just wake up after the important stuff that could've been talked about and give the reader a good old "welp, that didn't go as planned".
The way the wife is ready to accept full-fledged sexual harassment despite warnings and concerns. I get it, she already has an interest in BBC early on, but if the corruption doesn't follow it just doesn't make much sense.
Idk man, make it make sense, too many times I've wondered "who tf acts / thinks like that?". A lot of it doesn't seem grounded in reality.
- Nov 16, 2019
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Reality and Adult Porn games rarely overlap each other.
I do like as well "reality"-porn, but it is not the case of F95, where huge part of the game library is about sci-fi, fantasy, monster, monster-girl, futa-shit.
This game, seems to follow the footstep of the dull US all-sex adult... Plot: "Pizza guy knock the door... woman open the door... next step blowjob".
There is no sophistication, and it is fine of course, but the dev at least it put a well built frame gameplay around the dull plot.
No grind, interesting dynamic of spy conversation on phone.. nothing original but it delivers.
It is all about managing expectations, and understand what the dev wants to deliver.. a simple and cheerful story...
- Nov 15, 2020
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While I agree, that's also why I used the word "coherent" first.
It doesn't have to be realistic per se, I'm all for paranormal, fantasy, even some "over the top stuff" like a university that corrupts and feminizes their students (cf. The SUP).
But it needs proper introduction to make it believable, coherent and consistent, and this is where this game seems to fail for me.
It's too bad really cause there is potential in here
- Nov 16, 2019
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I kinda understand that you are trying to set yourself apart from "other" phone games.. Although everyone says like a wifes phone but that wasnt anywhere near the 1st.. anyway i digress..
1. I understand you added the laptop to be different.. but it doesnt really serve much of a purpose other than reading E-Mails. but well you are doing everything else on a smartphone...wouldnt you just use that for emails..
2. If you removed the laptop the phone could be bigger and more central (but i guess you fear being like others) and then the text and pictures on the phone could be alot bigger and easier to see/read (for my small 1366x768 laptop, am sure i am not alone)
3. I think the "guided" route/s may work better than a full on sandbox anyway.. although alot of people make a sandbox game because it makes their content releases seem alot more substantial.
4. I do feel that that progression is alittle fast at the minute (but am guessing you want content so people dont say meh no porn) just seems to be like i got a new job... wow look at all these cocks...lol
Also reminds me of a southpark episode when they just keep saying "simpsons did it". You are going to be compared to other games ect.. and steering away from something they did..because you dont wish to be compared is a mistake. Look at these other games see what works and what doesnt and impliment into yours stuff you believed works.. Just because your game may end up like another doesnt make that a bad thing (If that thing is good)..
You just seem to have done certain things specifically to look different thats all
That all being said, as i always say i am NOT trying to insult ect i added these comments in the hopes it will help you improve.. so no bad feeling or thoughts were meant by them.. I see potential in this game and hope that its done right and just keeps improving
1. I understand you added the laptop to be different.. but it doesnt really serve much of a purpose other than reading E-Mails. but well you are doing everything else on a smartphone...wouldnt you just use that for emails..
2. If you removed the laptop the phone could be bigger and more central (but i guess you fear being like others) and then the text and pictures on the phone could be alot bigger and easier to see/read (for my small 1366x768 laptop, am sure i am not alone)
3. I think the "guided" route/s may work better than a full on sandbox anyway.. although alot of people make a sandbox game because it makes their content releases seem alot more substantial.
4. I do feel that that progression is alittle fast at the minute (but am guessing you want content so people dont say meh no porn) just seems to be like i got a new job... wow look at all these cocks...lol
Also reminds me of a southpark episode when they just keep saying "simpsons did it". You are going to be compared to other games ect.. and steering away from something they did..because you dont wish to be compared is a mistake. Look at these other games see what works and what doesnt and impliment into yours stuff you believed works.. Just because your game may end up like another doesnt make that a bad thing (If that thing is good)..
You just seem to have done certain things specifically to look different thats all
That all being said, as i always say i am NOT trying to insult ect i added these comments in the hopes it will help you improve.. so no bad feeling or thoughts were meant by them.. I see potential in this game and hope that its done right and just keeps improving
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Is a great game but this update was too short. Please, make longer updates with more text, it's the only thing that this game need to be a perfect game, congratulation for your work friend. 