- Sep 27, 2021
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Overall, the game leaves mixed feelings. Interesting concept, a lot of content and different paths.
On the other hand - huge inconsistencies between the different paths and in the logic of the game itself.
But I will repeat myself - the game has a very interesting concept. So here are suggestions on how to redo that (certain parts):
- MC owes a huge amount of money (I won't go into the discussion that amount of money is insane) to be paid within a year, with payments every 2 months. However, with the mentioned 2 month paying plan it will take 800+ years to repay debt fully. Even with Bad Guy getting the house from MC - it shaves off 100 payments -almost 17 years of payment, but still 800+ years of payments. At the same time, payments are totally not enforced. If MC skips the payment - nothing happens. The day counter to payment due goes negative. 0 logic.
- MC goes on whoring his wife, who's kinda loyal at the start - just because? Totally no sense! Yes, the early versions of the game contained the Bad Guy's offer to pay extra for every "whoring" act. And yes, MC can accept or refuse (if it's not player's cup of tea). That was very logical, I have no idea why it was removed (possibly difficulties of implementing it?)
- Back to wife. She is loyal to MC at the beginning. However, MC can push her to whoring with the idea - we need that for money. Or MC can push wife to stay loyal and, in that case, wife is kinda loyal ... till she goes cheating (with the dialogue like: - you should fuck black guys - no, I will remain loyal - no, you should definitely try fucking black cocks - yeah, I'll do that). Total bullshit.
- The App. App purpose and logic (and integrity of MC character). The declared app purpose is to be aware of what's happening with the controlled character and if needed (or desired) - influence their decision-making process It is implemented same as with "Wifes' Job" quest line - when she is harassed - you (MC) can advise (force) her to either stay or leave. Similar, You can use the app to influence relations between Wife and Mike, as well as between Wife's Sis & Steph (push towards or against). Same w Bad Guy's Wife. Same w few quests of StepSis. However, later MC just watching how his wife goes cheating. Or how Wife's Sis fucks job colleagues (At the same time she is angry at her Sis - MC Wife for cheating on MC). Same also applies to social network profile - At the start of the game MC has some control over Wife's SM account. But even if he blocks numerous chat requests, later wife have nothing against sending nudes or receiving dick pics.
- The App parameters. There are a bunch of them. However there is no indication if they interfere with the quests (or character performance) in any way.
- Overall design\implementation and activities. It's so confusing and illogical. First of all, the whole build of the game is not clearly defined for the new players. When the player is already in the middle of the game - it is totally clear that you get the info for the meeting or a date on the next day in the form of a chat. However, at the beginning of the game this "You are on the date" is totally confusing. Should a player do something during that "date"? Later these "dates" disappear, and the player gets notifications as chats the day after.
- Economy: Make the due date not 1 year but 5 years. Possibly make this as a quest, where Bad Guy (or Bad Guy's rep) sends a message every year that will inform that amount to pay have increased (let's say 500k per month after 1st year, 2mln per month after 2nd year, 10mln per month after 3rd year, 50mln per month after 4th). Make payments enforced - let's say 1 day prior to payment date - receive a message from Bad Guy rep that payment is due. Enforce it with a bad ending - if not paid within a day - wife, wife sis, stepsis are kidnapped and raped. And MC is killed.
- Return the Bad Guy's offer to pay for wife's sharing. And if declined - make Bad Guy's rep repeat offer with each payment reminder - It will create more logic into consent wife sharing path.
- Possibly rework the quests (at least the ones that are related to Wife, Wife's sis, stepsis) to include branching to alpha (MC use only), beta (sharing w consent) and possibly cheating (cuck). Note - there are a bunch of quests that are already that way - for example Wife's work quest. Or Stepsis neighbor's and colleagues' quests.
- Include more quests' cross references - if a character cheated or was given consent in one quest - make the character be more inclined to behave same way in later quests as well.
- Rework Character parameters, quests and App - Each character as a bunch of parameters - as shown in the app (Cheat, Hotwife, Family, BBC\WBC, BJ, Anal). Some of them clearly matter (Feminization for Son, Anal for wife), but there is no clear indication if any of the rest mean anything. Fife's sis with 0 in cheating and a bunch in Family will go fuck work colleagues. Wife w 0 in cheating will eventually go Black Cock hunting. Either need to remove the parameters (but in that case what is the point of the app) or rework the quests to include the parameter checks (and introduce hints that certain parameter criteria is met\unmet
yep Devs needs to go back to drawing board, and get some people to help with the whole thing, as there seems to be a lot of conflicts with some paths. I didnt play the new update, but i feel like there were too many characters in QoS chat to keep track of.
Love the game, but it needs a lot of work and has a huge potential!