VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Above the Clouds [v0.75] [Mundo Games]

Loved the game.

Good dialogues, lovely characters, super fun situations and full of gags plot.... The younger sister is just a blast
You actually managed to make me read everything instead of just skipping to the lewd parts ! 5 star rating
I can't wait for next release. Thank you very much

I don't really get this game. The renders, models are really top notch, clearly a great effort (and skill!) went into this game. And then its butchered completely by the continuous flow of cringy "jokes" that the author tries to sell us as "story".

To the author: c'mon man, this could have been an easy 4 star incest game if you had stick to a generic story. With a little extra effort on the writing part maybe even more. Was it really necessary to screw it up this much?

The overall game was good, but there was too little sex animation and too much narrative dialogue .
The author wants to be funny in a fantasy story, but honestly what's funny affects the overall effect of your story .
One of the works you can look ,'Power Vacuum', at is the author who adds a lot of laughs while moving the story along in sections .
The overall dialogue is pretty good, it's only been updated a few times but it's still quite a long story, but since I'm not a native English speaker, I'm not really interested in long stories .
Hopefully the author will add more sex scenes in the future so as not to waste the good girl image , now the game is over an hour long, and I only have three pages worth saving, which is a shame for me .

Honestly, when I first started to play this game, it felt stupid so I abandoned it for a short time to focus on other games. I decided to give it another shot a bit later, and I'm so glad I did. Like many others have stated, this is one of the few games that got a genuine laugh out of me (two others I can immediately think of are Haleys story and Space Corpse XXX).
This game is very different though because it feels like "controlled chaos", similar to an episode of Aqua Teen Hunger Force (I'm showing my age, ouch). The part where your sister jumps up and teleports with her demon, or the, "I AM THE LAW!!" scene, wont leave my memory any time soon. Holy crap that was funny.

This game broke me. Laughed so many times, when that stupid “Partying in Russia” music and the senseless cut scenes came up.

Ok, more serious now. First, that's not that classic fast finish or “MC is dead” thing. Dad is there, yes, and he's crazy. Don't like him much, but that's just my taste. Considerate it as pro, not con, because it's part of the story, that makes the game so diversified.

The grind is ok, and it's worth it. Renderings are nice, Models are fine, too. If you're looking for a VN, that makes you finish and laugh, you're right.

Above the Clouds has some of the better humor I've experienced on this site. Jokes, puns, situational comedy, visual references, sound effects, and other devices make this game a very enjoyable comedy. It's so entertaining that I think it's worth checking out in spite of what I'm about to say: the erotic content is kind of a mess.

No sex scene ever feels earned. The sexual progression feels a bit like the author is following a formula of sexual beats, like, "Okay, it's chapter 2. This is where the protagonist should see the sister naked. Chapter 3: time for either a blowjob from a non-relative or hand stuff with a family member."

But it's missing the connective parts. It's missing any romance, sexual tension, or gravitas to build up to these scenes because every scene is just (admittedly amusing) comedy until it's time for the protagonist's dick to come out.

For example, there's a character who has barely interacted with the protagonist or shown attraction to the protagonist when she tells the protagonist he can hang out in her tree house while she's at school. While there, he finds her BDSM box. She comes back from school, he basically says, "I found your toys, slut", and she's just like, "Okay I guess you're my daddy now," while letting him put a remote controlled vibrator inside of her.--And of course, during the entire ensuing sex scene, the protagonist's sister is comically searching for the sound of the vibrator, again creating conflicting tones.

In conclusion, Above the Clouds is not erotica. It's a comedy game with some super awkward sexual content. That puts it at odds with me because I think most people play games with explicit sexual content for reasons they will not achieve here. However, apparently that "works" here a little more than it doesn't work, because it still gets 4 stars.

Great game, great humour, the models are beautiful and the mc is a decent dude. The comedy is not over the top its absolutly perfect.
If this game became a series it would be awesome. The moms on this are perfect can not wait to see more of them. Always a sucker for redhead so can not wait to see more of timmy's mom

Awesome Characters - 5/5
Funny Story - 5/5
Nice Models and Design - 5/5

I truly wish there was a bit more content already, or that the updates came a bit faster, but you can´t rush art.
Also...





... I want MOOOOAAAAR

Great animation and the amount of detail is astonishing compared to other visual novels. I can see the author putting lots of effort into this.
- The characters all seem real and down to earth, unlike some other games with an unrealistically horny attitude toward mc (except for The Angel, but she isn't coming from the earth so...).
- The sound effects and music are on point, to be honest, I think the game is already really good in the audio department and doesn't need voice acting. - The story is really easy to get into since it doesn't have many dramas, and it is genuinely funny. I found this game on a bad day and it definitely put the first smile of the day on my face at the time.
Really looking forward to the next update, already became a Patreon

This one is fairly unique. It's got by far the best humour I've experienced in a porn game, which is fantastic. I don't remember the last time I played a H game without skipping dialogue. On the other hand, it's very story focused, and not so much "porn" focused". The sex scenes are good, and the character models are amazing, but sometimes it feels like it has too little porn. I'd give it a 7/10, but sadly I can't give half stars in the rating.
Definitely good if you want to have a laugh, but I'd say it needs to raise the focus on the sex stuff.

This game is hilarious and fun to play Characters are attractive, renders are well done, and there is a great use of motion and perspective to tell the story like it was an anime. It is obvious that a tremendous amount of thought and effort went into the details of this game.

Sure, there are a million jokes and at least half of the jokes fall completely flat, but that's ok, Like a struggling stand-up comic, the game just keeps trying and then eventually gets a giggle out of me. Psychotic manipulative Hannah is particularly hilarious.

The creator likes to repeat certain elements, and it usually works. The doors being kicked open over and over again was funny, then it got annoying, then it became even more funny. The different fights are excellent mockeries of all sorts of anime tropes. The kink relationship with Mia is both hot and silly. So between these three elements, I'm expecting Mia to kick down a door and give a super saiyan kung fu beatdown to a bunch of incredulous bad guys naked with her hands tied behind her back. Or something like that, I'm not sure where he can take it next, but the creator seems to like to tie things together like that. And it usually works.

Sure, there is no deep erotic tension except maybe with the mom (the only character with any conscience at all), but who cares, not every game needs to smolder. Sometimes a stupid silly game is fun. This is fun, and better than 98 percent of the games on this site.

Complete garbage, every few seconds there is a 10 yo obnoxious, terrible, unfunny joke, it is unbearable after 10-15 minutes. It sucks because the models look really nice and it is refreshing seeing new faces.

I cannot say enough about the comedic aspect of this game. It is lighthearted and very funny. The build up for the sex scenes is of course a main attraction in the game but in my opinion this would be a great game even if there were no sex scenes. Great renders and fabulous characters. And HOW did that twig get there???

The character models look great, but they have no depth.
Some parts of the story would be good/ok, but the jokes completely ruin it and make it very cringe.
You have jokes in EVERY damn scene and after a while they get old and boring.
You don't have many choices in the game and especially with Helen there is only ONE right way to go.
The girls fall in love with MC no matter what, so you don't have to seduce or corrupt them, which is especially sad because it ruins the forbidden fruit called incest.

Like I said, the story would be good/ok if the developer took the story seriously, included more choices, and didn't put jokes everywhere.

So overall I can only give this game 2/5 stars.

TDLR: Review for v0.51. What saves this game from a one star review are the renders and animations. The rest is garbage.

Pros

• Great graphics and renders
  
  
• Good animations
  
  
• Male MC (slightly) taller than some female LI:s. A really low bar, which still deserves mention because most daz 3d game do not clear it.
  
  
• No engrish.

Cons

• Over the top silly and totaly unrealistic situations and interactions. Removes the erotic tension.
  
  
• Superficial characters without depth or anything resembling being real humans. How to be turned on by a character that is a joke made flesh?
  
  
• Comedy takes precedent over everything else. Every scene is made to be funny rather than compelling, realistic, erotic or part of building a good story and/or character. Whole story arcs seem to be constructed for no other reason than comedy.
  
  
• Unfunny comedy. For the entire play through, I chuckled a couple of times. And that was it, despite comedy being crammed in every scene and situation. Most of the time, not funny at all. Only unrealistic and ridiculous.
  
  
• Women fly to the MCs cock. No need for seduction and/or corruption. Don't have time for that, all space most be reserved for comedy.
  
  
• Constant mindreading, meaning we get to read what other characters are thinking. Ruins first person immersion.
  
  
• Immediate incestous attraction, without explanation. Ruins incest taboo, though they are at least somewhat hesitant about acting on their incestous attraction.
  
  
• Scrawny midget MC. That he's actually made slightly taller than a few of the female LIs only make it more infuriating that many of the LIs are as tall and big as he is. That means the dev didn't do them equally big due to lazyness, no, the dev purposefully made the MC so small. Yet, no one ever mentions this and it doesn't seem to affect the instant attraction all females seem to feel towards the MC. In reality, a man that small would *NOT* have women flying to his cock. Not that realism is anything this games concerns itself with in any other form.
  
  
• Cock varies in size, somtimes quite average, despite LIs going on about how big the MC is. Could be because what looks big compared to the rest of his body won't look that big compared to the women, as he's very small for a man.

I never take time to review games on here but this game is so good. The animations and renders are awesome. The story is the perfect mix of serious/ funny. Just outlandish enough to really enjoy. Looking forward to more

Interesting background story, excellent renders, funny characters. This truly became one of my favorite games. Many thanks to the developer for creating such a great thing!

Negative thing: Lily, the sister of Millie, died. Not good!

The graphics are great that's all the good I found, at the story level, it's embarrassing, in the same way what irritated me the most was the supposed comedy that the author wants to put on, a comedy that is not funny with 100000sound. effects and some jokes and scenes that give chills As they say the supposed comedy is not funny and more if you repeat it a million times you don't even know how comedy works.

I don´t know about the storyline but i cant give this game anything short of a five star review. The storyline is a bit weird and doesnt make a lot of sense to me. But the games makes this up with the funny dialogue, good sound effects/animations and the beautiful characters. Let me tell you, the girls in this game are really hot. Thought are implemented which can create extra tension and funny moments. All in all great game.

The game looks great, but the writing is painfully unfunny to the point where its unplayable for me. Like others have said, its tolerable at first, but the humor is so repetitive and obnoxious that it gets old quick.