I was going to say a deep review but the damn text just say Fuck you, i'm gone. Had to re write all.
So short review
This chapter of Sonia need the secret sauce, it does not hit like the other routes ykno? And i get it, they are not the same, different characters and all that, 1 word. Blaze, they are too similar but, dayum if her route it's not good ma boi, .
Next, I need comedy, there was excellent comedy in this episode, I laughed a lot, I expected nothing less. But I need more.
My brother in Christ, the MC needs a rework, compare my boy to the girls, He's got that "420p" rizz for these "1080p" baddies. I'm not saying you should change the design, just give the kid a little more definition. The poor guy is working on hopes and dreams, lol.
NOW, THE MEME OF THIS VERSION (More than a meme, well, joke.)
MAYONNAISE MAN, it's funny because sometimes when I glance at the MC while reading a text, his skin turns a sick color, like when he gets drunk and has a hangover the next day. I thought which was funny and I replied to Bo "Bro, a piece of paper is jealous of him."
When the 6 hours of torture with Sonia passed (How scary (I wish it would happen to me)) I thought they were going to draw my bro like this:
IT WOULD HAVE BEEN PEAK COMEDY
I would have died laughing, for real.
I think that would be all that is important, because I don't remember anything else of what I had written, mind you, it was longer and better written, but it makes me lazy to think again what I had written lol, They were two updates with slightly more serious tones, which isn't bad, I like it. So, what's next, boss?
Pd: I need more comedy, comedy nourishes me, AH! And I felt, I don't know, the chapter was shorter, but maybe it's because I played it in one day, I like it a lot, when I go to play I say "Silencio... Empezó mi novela"