Love the game thus far and shows a lot of promise. I can't wait to experience games like these and enjoy the author's story further. I do have my personal qualms with the game but that in no way diminishes the value of this game. And considering the game is still in development, with the vibe that it is going to get much bigger, those qualms may be fixed or tweaked to something more tolerable. The game is definitely 5 stars.
Pros: the game has tons of content already although sometimes it can be difficult to unlock content if you aren't paying attention as deeply as you should. Definitely worth paying attention to most of the time as the author is talented. Another pro is the difference in the women. Every girl is different from Blaire to Prism, they are all amazing in their own way. If you search for them, there are also people you can have scenes with that aren't in your harem, usually, these people are places you would work to make money.
Cons: The game has a bad habit of making things a little bit of a grind to get to the good stuff. Fortunately, the grind itself is usually made easier with the hints the game provides but even then I have found myself waiting full weeks to trigger an event that only can be triggered on one day at a specific time of day. Kiara was hugely guilty of this. And prism doesn't have many options for building rapport with her throughout the week. You can only catch her at the park on the weekends or at class. Usually, depending on the day you only get to interact with her once the entire day, and Thursdays have no interaction at all. Another con right now is the finality of completing the connections of each girl. With Blaire, you can change your connection with her if you don't like your decision which is nice, but Kiara seems to locked permanently for now. I would love an option to change your important decisions during connections to explore all scenes without having to replay 4 different times to get different scenes for Kiara. Another con is the lack of content of content you get after you have finished connecting with your harem girls. Blaire can move in with you if you choose to encourage her love for you and she basically becomes your housewife. I love this concept but you only get 1 additional scene with her after the decision. The scene seems to be random and barely ever activates. Similar to Blaire, certain Kiara routes don't offer much either. Feedback gives you a scene where you have enhanced sex with her in dreams. That's it, no other benefit to choosing Kiaras feed back route. Whereas Dominique gives you a lot more extra content and scenes because Dominique actually builds her own harem. I love the concept of Kiara having her own harem you can also have sex with because she is in your harem, but i decided against Dominique because of the gangbang, and orgy options. I didn't like the thought of her getting gangbanged. Kiara isn't exactly loyal to you sexually in those options. And while it doesn't bother me all that much cause you can participate, it kind of subtracts from the feeling of the harem when there are actually scenes of her talking about or being in sex with other people/ guys. Fortunately, when you see her having sex with other people you can join in. Logically speaking though choosing the sidekick options seem more realistic because she admits to you being the best person she has ever had sex with, so realistically it only makes sense she would be focused on having sex with you rather than having sex with others that can't get her going as well as you can. Other people for Kiara would probably just be icing on the cake if you are in on it, so why not give her the option to have a harem of females as a sidekick too, that would increase content for at least one of them without the complications the gangbang options bring up. It is more than just the gangbang and orgies though, it's the actual dialog in just normal conversations, she is much more upfront about sleeping with others, especially males, and she doesn't seem to care about you as much. Treating you more as just a personal toy rather than an actual lover. But there is precious little content for sidekicks compared to partner routes and it is my hope the author will add both more content and scenes later in the game to make those routes actually worth playing. It's important to note that when i say content I am not specifically talking about sex. I love the extra content Blaire has when she is moving in. She does it gradually and has a new scene every time she does until her entire schedule alters, she stops going to clubs unless it is with you and she sleeps with you every night in your bed. That is what I mean but content, adding positive results other than just sex scenes to the choices you have made. My final con is there are still the occasional grammar and misspellings, but hey it's a erotic novel game, there are going to be that kind of error.
All in all the game is near perfect, and there isn't much to complain about. Pretty much everything the game has in it excels which is why I didn't put too much in the pros section, I'd be here all day if I listed off everything that was great about this game. Keep up the good work author and please don't forget about adding content and sex scenes to some of the other routes to make them more playable. Also If you are reading this, if you could eventually allow us to reenter the dreamscape to change our decisions and experiment with different choices, that would be awesome.