Not sure what you mean?Dunno if this has been said before, but there is no way to pick both Kaira and Blaire end states at the beginning.
Not sure what you mean?Dunno if this has been said before, but there is no way to pick both Kaira and Blaire end states at the beginning.
She's going to try her best.Will she be able to turn protagonist into one? Superhero with mind control powers is pretty neat.
Imagine Xavier, but he's actually doing something useful.
Please write more. I'm stoked that people are actually reading and catching the character stuff. Kiara and Blaire turned out a lot different than originally intended but I think the characterizations wound up being much more interesting.Actually I think there are some more interesting dynamics going on here, and it's worth mentioning them.
I'm going to start with this Dev is one of my favourites in terms of story. (At this point).
You have a very interesting dynamic going on between heroes and villains, the heroes are definitely up to some shifty stuff. We're talking "1984, Brazil, animal farm" kinds of stuff, They are good, but that does not mean they are ethical. The villains don't currently have any real roles in the story but I can well believe some of them are James Bond/Nosferatu/Vlad the Impaler/or just Vector/Syndrome/Grue villain kind of bad. (Syndrome/Grue are actually remarkable on point in many respects)
Now
Superpowers while not common are not uncommon either, it seems that a small percentage of the general public might have some minor power, one of Blair's friends proves to be, at least, minorly pyrokinetic at one point.. She does not seem to be tracked and the MC does not note any mind defence active so she would be untrained and unnoticed by the Super"heroes"
You have a mentor and they're a supervillain, the heroes are happy to kill him, they certainly rob banks, but beyond that sort of evil they are extremely ethical, honestly mind powers of any sort are extremely powerful, plus they are effectively immortal. That said right now they're in your head, they have had several prime opportunities to subvert the people around you, and are taking extreme care not to do so, have offered support in whatever path you chose to take and have suggested that you could work with them.. (and if you are gay/bi (the MC is not) his probably up for that too when he gets a body, though that is possibly optional, he's pretty clear on his stance on sex.. "Yes please! two, or more, consenting adults can do what every we kink want.".)
This is saying allot about the supers, I suspect there are several superheroes we are yet to meet that do not follow this set of ideals. "Erase some memories for the greater good", "lock them up as there powers are too dangerous to be allowed out. (of our control)".
This story is not about being a Hero or a villain, though I suspect you will be able to behave a little like both, the nature of this game is such that any diverging paths would require a lot of extra writing from Myscra. I would not expect too much there, we're in for a fairly linear story.
Blaire is never really going to be a good conscience, she loves the protagonist, (the worst part of this love is that it exists before he messes, for want of a better word, with her head, it's her family imposed priorities that led her to be dismissive of him in the past, which explains her demeaner at the start, and is an extremely sad way to live your life.) You can somewhat direct her path, but, honestly whatever you do is going to leave her not really caring if you are good or evil. I honestly would like Blaire to have more agency, but... the issue is that true to her core motivations her agency is going to be exactly what she is doing. Honestly the MC needs to buy her some flowers, or get up earlier every now and again and help with the cleaning. Blaire deserves more from the MC than she got from her family.)
Kiara is a terrible conscience, she's possibly a genius, and while that's not classed as a power, it all to often comes with the word "evil" in front of it, she's certainly selfish, and used the mc to restructure her priorities to her desires, and the MC is a little naive here and effectively does it blindfolded so we have no idea what she did. She is your friend, but for Kiara... its possible that friendship is a thing she could sacrifice or abuse for her own greater good. And imgaine if you were given the option to restructure your own priorities are you sure you would put them in the correct order if that order made you a lazy slob, or might you raise things like work/gym ethic and such? She's certainly been abusing the MC's trust so far.
lol far more than I intended on writing..
They were friends as kids and always lived next to each other, and Kiara was different when she was younger.Thanks for the answer, though as you might guess I've passed it now. (and teaching me a new word. -irrumatio )
I don't expect her to be excluded from the story, nor would I ask the dev to do so, I wanted more distance from a flawed character (Which is great) that looked to be heading somewhere I was not interested in following, I mainly wanted the character to have a little more culpability/trustworthiness which she actually gets.
I chose the partner path, seemed like it would give her more autonomy, and to be honest sidekick screams "I'm better than you", which seemed a betrayal of the established character relationship, that said there were some important character development (?) in her story that showed genuine concern over possible negative consequences regarding her actions. (I guess I like flawed characters developing, up till the gold door was not a lot of trust shown between these two, and I was beginning to wonder how they ever came to be friends.)
Or even mores so, though she would never admit it.The only way I can personally accept the Sidekick path is that Kiara does admit she thinks being mind controlled is a real turn on - as arousing as controlling other people.
That's an idea I had not thought about.well, I think she does say something like that BEFORE getting that branch, latter it definitely gets confirmed when you get to the other branch. Honestly, I went both, the partner one because of the same reason as people seem to choose that one, and the sidekick because if something went bad after the super path starts maybe she could be safe if something bad happens (I mean: I would take her more as Oracle and Batman than an active sidekick).but I think the sidekick path is memeier in the special scenes.
As something different, I think the *upgrade to psychic powers* that is in the checklist could be like a second tier of sorts so it can develop more things in people (who knows maybe even powers, so maybe Blaire could have some).
I'm reworking this for the next release so I'll take a look at it.Another bug report... not a biggie though - doesn't affect gameplay much.
If you use your skill to put a girl to sleep at an odd time, and then dreamwalk and increase your connection with her, when you wake it should be the following day, but because you might be at the pool or in class, rather than in their bed room, things seem to get a bit confused with the time of day label, etc. Moving around a bit and passing some time seems to fix things.
Thanks!I just wanted to say I really like this game's setting and descriptions. I think it's great. It's one of those games where the h-content gets in the way, because the rest of the game is just so good.
I just finished the dreamscape for 2.2 so you will be able to reenter it then.Can you enter Prism's/Crystal's dreams again after the first time? I couldn't find any opportunities to do so.
... I kind of didint think about that. I'll do what I can to make the altered versions work with the new updates.I'm always happy to see a new update for this. I'll probably start a new game to check out the revamped intro, but I'm curious how the changes to mental constructs impacts old saves. Will the numbers get updated to modified values and such, or will it just work for new games. As the game expanded beyond Blaire I did find that I pretty much never felt like using the sleep inducer, so I can kind of see why it got cut. Perhaps once the roster of characters expands a bit it might be more useful again.
Depends on the whims of Patreon I'm afraid. I would love to add them so if I can get enough money for it then I'll commission some art work or bring someone in.Do you plan on adding images in the future?
I'll look into reducing the grind.From a gameplay point of view, having to grind Crystal's affection up by calling her, sleeping, calling her, sleeping for like 30 levels to get to the Downtown event after you form the connection is very unsatisfying. There really needs to be some inbetween stuff or for the grind to be reduce to like 40.
Also, can you add a $1 tier to your patreon Myscra?
I'm going to rework these screens a bit and hopefully fix things up. Currently, you can't reach 100%.Is this the max you can reach?? (with relay placement?)
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I feel like it is not.... but when I go to the phone to place relays I get a weird screen
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The prismpostconvos are not final. I honestly had so much to get through and modify that I definitely missed some. If any of them in particular read weird, please let me know.Myscra
OK I have now completed the 2.1 content.
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I was not, thanks for the heads up.Dunno if anyone already informed, but Photona info shows Prism description
Thankfully, I was given some good advice early on, so changing the text color is fairly simple. I've actually grown aggravated as well with it since I started writing her content. It will be changed.I've been struggling with her text colour on all the screens, and its the one you can't change. ( I don't imagine there is an easy fix for this. I suspect her text colour is hard coded throughout the game.)
I've been working on a 1 lady at a time model so Liara will most likely be after Prism is mostly done.kinda hopeful for liara content to learn and help her reduce her fear at least
None needed, I'm impressed with how active you are here, I just figured you were being active on you patreon account, unfortunately I can't afford to financially support anything in the current climate, but hoped finding bugs and typo's was some kind of support.First off, Sorry everyone for not responding to messages earlier. I have not gotten any forum notifications in a month so I assumed that people had moved on to other things until the next release. I have noted all of the bugs and typos as of 9/9 and will be fixing them on the next release.
Happy too, I'm engaged with the story as a whole... though time to insert a spoiler tags... as I wrote about a lot of end version story line.Please write more. I'm stoked that people are actually reading and catching the character stuff. Kiara and Blaire turned out a lot different than originally intended but I think the characterizations wound up being much more interesting.
None needed, I'm impressed with how active you are here, I just figured you were being active on you patreon account, unfortunately I can't afford to financially support anything in the current climate, but hoped finding bugs and typo's was some kind of support.
I think this a "playing early" kind of problem, but, Prism's Rap gets reset at at the end of the last version or the start of this one, and then you have to grind it up again, having already been though all the conversation options I had to grind through them again, which was frustrating, also there may have been 1 or 2 new ones that I had previously missed, would it be possible to get the ones that have been read marked somehow? It would make new topics of conversation easier to find, And lead to less just clicking though till the hearts fill up.
Happy too, I'm engaged with the story as a whole... though time to insert a spoiler tags... as I wrote about a lot of end version story line.
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Thanks for all the work. I should/will rate this game as it really deserves it.
Wanted to say that I like your game and that I found a couple minor bugs and typos[v2.1].
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Yeah that is what I took from the characters so far... Don't get me wrong I think that Kiara makes a great devil character, and honestly she could be truly evil, though I am not convinced you're taking her that way just yet, I was just kind of wondering why the MC and Sam are not a little more concerned, even a perhaps little horrified, and with the elegance of your story/characters/writing, I was a little mystified as to how this was proceeding as it was.I am going to wind up going back to Kiara and reworking some of her story and characterization. She's suppose to be a bit more evil than the MC but your point does stand. Neither the MC or Cerebralite would be okay with some of the stuff that she does.
For a start Kiara using such a community would solve a couple of the moral quandaries that exist for Sam and the player, and if she slowly becomes more evil in a less overt fashion, that would allow for more breathing room around moral judgements from the other characters. Or more evilly, She could say that is where they are from.. The MC has no reason to doubt her at this point. And I'm pretty sure Sam is not aware of much when he is not present in the scene, I mean he never comments on the elder god you encounter...When I was writing her I was kind of reaching for ways to differentiate the paths and kind of just ran with some of the ideas. She's still going to be the devil on the MC shoulder (to Prism's angel) but having out right evil (for now) was not the plan. Currently, the direction I think I'll take it is that the people she's directly hypnotizing (as opposed to the general making people horny) will be members of her hypnosis fetish community and be volunteers and/or recruits. Kingston and Molly will be directly recruited by Kiara and in for the whole hypnosis thing. She will complain that the MC is to sensitive and won't let her just do her thing and use her powers more often. She has it in her to be evil but the MC is a moderating influence.
That would be interesting, you could mess about with the readers (players) ethics here quite a bit here too, I mean how far is the MC willing to bend people? If Blaire is the jealous type do we go into her head and mess with it or do we sneak around behind her back? how do the players choose solve this situation?Same with Blaire, I want to go back with the dedicated route and make things a bit clearer and reinforce how she stands with other women and such Kind of a hot husband type deal. Also, I will change the second cycle of rapport building with crystal (set it to 30 instead of 0). I'm not sure what I was thinking with that.
Oh you miss-interpret me.Myscra
To perhaps offer offer a counterpoint.
Unlike Malleee I don't at all think that Kiara is "going to far". Nor do I think that the MC would care all that much.
Again my issue here is not with how evil Kiara is, it's the lack of reaction from characters who should react, Kiara is written as smart enough to be subtle, and if she's not the character interactions won't work. Prism will lock Kiara up, Prism might even kill Kiara to stop her. I can't imagine she would want to but... Prism will protect people it's one of her base motivations and Kiara has no way to defend herself from Prism. If Kiara starts at this level of "evil" Prism has no viable/believable way of interacting with her in any way but antagonistic.The scene that springs to my mind is the "chillin with the Villains" debate early on in Kiara's superpath.
Assholes are prime targets. Kingston was a jerk thus became a target. The logic here is internally consistent to me.
I feel that changing things towards: "Don't worry they all were totally submissive hypnofetishists beforehand." removes a lot of impact from the story.
I might agree with dubious character but I would not take dominating mindcontrol as a given aim, (from what I've read at this point) lightweight "Nudges" seem more likely to me. There's a conversation with Sam where (around the same time as chillin like a villain where there are a couple things that make me think his not so into the full control side. He seems a little taken back when Sam suggests acts that are not so hero like. And then Sam goes on to describe things where the ends might justify the means..But seeing how he uses the powers he has, I fully believe that if he had more accessible mindcontrol powers he would use them just as casually. The MC to me may have started out as a decent blank state but by now I consider him of highly dubious character.
No, what I took from that was Blair is a bitch to him, and the MC's reaction was to put her head back on the way she wanted it, now perhaps he just did not consider the opportunity being presented, or perhaps he wanted Sam's approval here, but if he was truly dubious he would have been tempted to mess something up here.On the Blair psychic surgery scene:
Are you interpretting the MC's variness as a moral quandary?
Not really.As for Prism's reaction to Kiara spreading hypnosis around town, it is already in the game.
Are you talking about: " Crystal doesn't seem particularly happy about Blaire not knowing about your connection and does encourage you to talk to her and to admit what's going on. It's something to think about and you promise her to do so."Another scene in the current version is where Prism 'encourages' you to tell Blaire that you are a psychic and messed with her head. In me that scene merely evokes good-natured eyerolling and going "Oh shut up Crystal, everything's fine." I get the feeling that you might have a different take on that scene.
Well and truly, though I'd say I am not looking to shape the story, I'm simply saying what I took from the story and the motivational parts of it I have had issues with.In the end different people enjoy different things and have divergent perspectives.
So as said in my earlier post I merely wanted to offer a counterpoint from someone who has a different view than your argument to Myscra.
As someone who has in fact taken a philosophy class during my schooling years I feel a strong urge to make several stupid jokes here. But I shall refrain from that. Still you did make me chuckle so good on you.
Don't worry about it.First off, Sorry everyone for not responding to messages earlier. I have not gotten any forum notifications in a month so I assumed that people had moved on to other things until the next release. I have noted all of the bugs and typos as of 9/9 and will be fixing them on the next release.
'C' stands for Class, where class 1 was compared to Professor Xavier or Magneto and class 5 would be a very weak ability. 'A' denotes the power is artificial, such as Kiara's powers, rather than innate. I honestly don't know if this is in game anywhere at the moment, I just remember somebody else asking this question.- this probably was explained, but how is the power rank work? (I know that C1 is stronger than C3, but what exactly means the 'A', 'C', etc)
Glad you enjoyed it, I certainly took a closer look at my assumptions, I don't "know" that I'm right, so you've had me take a look at the game text and re-evaluating it was interesting.Concerning Malleee
As expected we are going to have to agree to disagree. While I do believe there are good arguments for both sides of this discussion(and I enjoyed having it) I don't feel that taking up a lot of the thread with a constant back and forth for who knows how many posts provides a lot of merit for anyone but the two of us.
I suspect that will be somewhat the intent, limited by story threads though, drift off too far from the main story line and every path would need to be written separately, in this format that seems like a hell of a lot of work. I'm not aware that Myscra is a guy? I would have guessed at it but I've wondered.Besides ultimately it is not we who need to convince the other. It is Myscra who needs to decide how he wants to write and continue his game/story. As I believe I have said previously I like scenes that are ambigious enough to allow multiple interpretations for the reader. Maybe future scenes will support this.
That's a shame I was, about to delve off into what you thought the glowing eyes signified and what powers the MC might be subtly exhibiting, I'm of the opinion that the glowing eyes and the sexual telepathy may not be same power. I was also thinking that it might not be (only?) healing we are seeing as a secondary power, I mean have we actually seen the MC physically injured yet? There seems to be a presumption he has been but???Or maybe future updates will lock in a much firmer stance on various characters. In any case it is his decision to make.
Regardless I have made the points I wanted to make so unless the Dev Myscra chooses to weight in on this and/or has questions for me I will end it here.
I would have been disappointed for it to have been anything but that. Thanks for the conversation.I wish everyone who enjoyed this a good day and thank Malleee for a civil discourse. I am unfortunately used to much more unpleasant arguments.