VN Ren'Py Adored by the Devil [Dev Thread]

[Empiric]

Since Through Spacetime is coming to an end, and I've been working on girls for my next game for some time now, I decided to put them together to some degree to get final feedback. Plus maybe tease the premise of the story and what's to be expected.

Game's going to be called Adored by the Devil and it's going to be fantasy themed.

MC is going to be younger male this time, in his early twenties. Raised by his grandfather, trained to fight demons, vampires and other fantasy scum.
His grandfather will task him with a job of upmost importance: to protect a girl! What girl?

This girl

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She is being stalked by a man and her mother (Katherine) suspects the creep might not be completely human. Since she had her own experience with supernatural when she was young and MC's grandfather was the one to save her, she asks him for help.

Katherine and her second daughter Vicky

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MC obviously wouldn't want to handle such important job alone, so he brings help. His loyal friend.

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This concludes the 4 main girls, but there are few more I have prepared..

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Last but not least, the shlong of the story:

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* The morphs of the girls should stay the same, skin textures mostly also, maybe just a little tweaks. Hair I'm not sure about at all, I like the ones used by I swap them around a lot.

FAQ (in advance)

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[Canto Forte]

Gonna call it .. detective and loyal friend are smoking hot, cannot wait to
give them all the reasons to stick around me for the long throbbing adventure.

 

[LightmanP]

Good luck, definitely looking forward to your new game. Digging pinkish hair on Hanna's best friend, not so much the black and white, pure black maybe?

 

[Canto Forte]

What inspiration you might draw ... there is babylon ad, also the latest witcher animated movie about the guy escorting a noble woman and a witch into harmful territory,
all those episodes in the game sof thos thrones where the golden hand and his fellow
hand for hire go around them kingdoms, last of us on dynamics of 2 some surviving together. I do sense we are gonna have a party, am I right?

 

[Empiric]

Gonna call it .. detective and loyal friend are smoking hot, cannot wait to
give them all the reasons to stick around me for the long throbbing adventure.

Yes, loyal friend did the best in polls on patreon earlier. So I assume she's going to be getting a lot of attention.

 

[Empiric]

Good luck, definitely looking forward to your new game. Digging pinkish hair on Hanna's best friend, not so much the black and white, pure black maybe?

I was trying all colors from green through red and blue. I also think the pink on just bangs rest black looked best.

 

[Canto Forte]

Spouses are supposed to be most loyal to eachother .. so you nailed it with the loyalty.

 

[hiya02]

Not bad, but more diversity is needed (way too many baldies there )

 

[Empiric]

Not bad, but more diversity is needed (way too many baldies there )

It's mostly just body morphs + skin textures. I'll be adding more "uniqueness" when I'm completely set on the basic body-skin-hair.

 

[GNVE]

Generally great work. Seems like a decently diverse cast (in the not all skinny small tits teens/all hypersexualized/all MILFS etc kinda way) Like that the main character doesn't have a dick that requires it's own zip code. I also believe he is 20ish. Two criticisms:
- I think the hair for Hannah isn't quite right. I think it makes her look a little old. Can't say what it is exactly (style or/and colour?)
- The chest area for the detective seems a bit big for her body.

 

[Empiric]

Generally great work. Seems like a decently diverse cast (in the not all skinny small tits teens/all hypersexualized/all MILFS etc kinda way) Like that the main character doesn't have a dick that requires it's own zip code. I also believe he is 20ish. Two criticisms:
- I think the hair for Hannah isn't quite right. I think it makes her look a little old. Can't say what it is exactly (style or/and colour?)
- The chest area for the detective seems a bit big for her body.

I used this color the first time with same hair, then I switched to the updo hair in the picture, I thought I'd mix them up as she'd use the updo in formal settings and long hair at home

 

[osanaiko]

is this alternate reality taking place in a nudist colony? Why are they all nekkid?

Do you realise that everyone can see their hooha and bobs?

It is shameful.

(/s )

 

[zerofreak]

Hi, I just don't like thickness of the mother, but as you say morphs are decided... For Hanna best friend I prefer the first one more.
Although realistic I would reduce the breast size of the detective as she is well toned... Our reduce the abs.
Young girls are fantastic

 

[Empiric]

Hi, I just don't like thickness of the mother, but as you say morphs are decided... For Hanna best friend I prefer the first one more.
Although realistic I would reduce the breast size of the detective as she is well toned... Our reduce the abs.
Young girls are fantastic

Well the thickness is actually toned down a bit.
This was the first version.

I'll try to reduce the detective's breasts a bit later, but not sure how it's gonna look.

 

[zerofreak]

Well the thickness is actually toned down a bit.
This was the first version.

I'll try to reduce the detective's breasts a bit later, but not sure how it's gonna look.

Well, for me at least it's great that you reduced mother thickness. As always, there is a conflict between reality and porn expectations. I don't know if I would approach current mother but I know I wouldn't approach old one. In any case, your designs are amazing, thanks for your great job

 

[BigDaddyDom]

So you did get rid of the father daughter story line?

 

[Empiric]

I'm not sure. Something about her face still feels weird, I tried to make some changes but dunno. She just feels off.

 

[BigDaddyDom]

I'm not sure. Something about her face still feels weird, I tried to make some changes but dunno. She just feels off.
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She's perfect. The only thing "off" is that she's being romanced by bro and not Daddy Feel free to keep ignoring my comments though

 

[zerofreak]

I'm not sure. Something about her face still feels weird, I tried to make some changes but dunno. She just feels off.
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I would say that is the nose. I don't know why but feels odd

 

[desmosome]

Wasn't there plans to have a sequel game that continues the "good guy" route from Through Spacetime? Will you put that on hold and develop this one first?