VN Ren'Py Adored by the Devil [Dev Thread]

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Empiric said:
I'm not sure. Something about her face still feels weird, I tried to make some changes but dunno. She just feels off.
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I like the girl, don't really think she looks off. It might just be that she isn't really posed (especially the eyes look 'dead') Maybe try putting her in a couple of scenes see if that feeling disappears?
If I had to nitpick then it could be that her nose seems a little low on her face as well as her mouth (talking mm here so not a lot) And her face clashes with the pigtail hairstyle. When looking at the alt hairstyle it much more compliments her face profile and I prefer it (but does make her look a little older. Don't know if that is an issue for you).
 
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GNVE said:
I like the girl, don't really think she looks off. It might just be that she isn't really posed (especially the eyes look 'dead') Maybe try putting her in a couple of scenes see if that feeling disappears?
If I had to nitpick then it could be that her nose seems a little low on her face as well as her mouth (talking mm here so not a lot) And her face clashes with the pigtail hairstyle. When looking at the alt hairstyle it much more compliments her face profile and I prefer it (but does make her look a little older. Don't know if that is an issue for you).
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posed and stuff, the newer version with the second hairstyle
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I think it helps in that it gives her a little life. But I didn't think she looked off to begin with :) what do you think? Did it help?
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It was mostly about the face shape, the chin and nose especially looked kinda small and undefined. That's what I tried to change.
 
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this hair would also work, but I liked it on her mom more I think. I don't knooooooooow.
Must be nice to be making female MC games, you only do one good looking chick with one hair and rest can be just whatever dudes, nobody cares about dudes. ><
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this hair would also work, but I liked it on her mom more I think. I don't knooooooooow.
Must be nice to be making female MC games, you only do one good looking chick with one hair and rest can be just whatever dudes, nobody cares about dudes. ><
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If I'm honest most young girls either wear their hair in a ponytail or have it loose and fall down their back. Updo hairstyles are usually impromptu I need to get my hair out of my face type of things.
the previous hairstyle would work for teen I feel as the hairstyle is sporty. It would also work well for a teen who knows what she wants.
This hairstyle seems a little formal for a young teen.

As for the female MC. I don't think there is a female MC game where there aren't lesbian options. And the dudes are (much) less important but not unimportant. I have stopped playing games because the men looked and played like annoying douches.
 
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If I'm honest most young girls either wear their hair in a ponytail or have it loose and fall down their back. Updo hairstyles are usually impromptu I need to get my hair out of my face type of things.
the previous hairstyle would work for teen I feel as the hairstyle is sporty. It would also work well for a teen who knows what she wants.
This hairstyle seems a little formal for a young teen.

As for the female MC. I don't think there is a female MC game where there aren't lesbian options. And the dudes are (much) less important but not unimportant. I have stopped playing games because the men looked and played like annoying douches.
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I don't know what to do with her anymore. :sleep:
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Empiric said:
Maybe like this, I'll try some more hairstyles later.
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Personally I prefer the hairstyle above. but the longer hair below looks good too. Though she doesn't look bad as a blonde I prefer the darker hair colours you tried. It's hard for me too choose between her as a redhead and her with a black hair colour.
The hairstyle does have an impact on her perceived personality. So that might factor into your decision as well (pigtails are generally somewhat innocent, while a (partially) shaven head gives off an alt style. Ponytail for me gives off upper (middle) class vibe (
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). So maybe use her personality as inspiration?
Or maybe you just need a break? Step away from her for a few days and look at her with fresh eyes and new ideas?

Although I have seen a couple of hairstyles that really suit her. So...
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I don't know what to do with her anymore. :sleep:

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She is gorgeous, the tan lines and the way the hand just lets her ample yummy bosoms
hang low in the plump fruity area just waiting 4 the picking .... fantastic.

You nailed it with her, the hair, the posture, the face, the eyes ... phenomenal!​
 
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I really kind of like your style. Is it possible you would share what you use as base for your skins? Or maybe just some tips how you achieve this look.
 
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