4.30 star(s) 3 Votes

Moonis

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Mar 18, 2019
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Kinda nice. Story wasn't too bad. In the beginning I was pondering about skipping this game as it seemed this might dwell too much about traumas (depressing subject) but then I saw some cute girls and decided to continue.

Not the fan of sandbox. Some kind of guide would be nice to let players see where to head for new content. Or at least giving message, when you have seen everything from that girl, so I can continue grinding other locations.

I saw few typos:
Maybe you should take up tutouring or something, you could earn some cash. -> tutoring

Actually Miles I was thinking... -> MC instead of Miles

I'm having a bit of trouble with soemthing -> something

*sigh* okay well izra is firery, forwar, and mature for her age. -> fiery, forward and mature

So... you finally finshed setting up your room... -> finished

You hurridly make your way to class -> hurriedly

also one error:
After the scene where you found out June's double life you got info: Izra's affection increased -> June's affection
 
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4.30 star(s) 3 Votes