Others After Sunset - Into the Lawless City [v0.1 Bugfix] [Corrupted-Sun Workshop]

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Great concept and im looking forward updates. I ran into a bug and i'm trying to consistantly trigger it for you, so far if you continue to play for 4+ rounds and she falls and looses there is a chance the game can crash. But im not sure what all causes it.
 

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managed to crash the game 2 seconds in. Opened up the options screen and then clicked New Game with the options window open.
 

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Demo is fairly solid thus far, I think what would be good would be a guide/tutorial of sorts explaining the benefits/drawbacks of certain combat ranges and maybe even in the exploration screen like the chance of a thug encounter so you know when to expect a fight. maybe a masturbation option as well to clear arousal with an off chance of being walked up on? Assuming the lack of penetrative actions thus far is mostly down to the fact this is a very early demo/proof of concept for the game

I did find that the lack of a struggle/escape option was a bit strange kind of railroading you into the lewd stuff if Sunset ended up getting grabbed and I really dont think having the skip turn have an energy cost and the lack of a guard/defensive stance is something you should keep moving forward. Especially if you want to eventually design bosses around having special attacks that you might want to avoid/defend against rather than try to parry/tank it
Thank you so much for the review!! I thought about put a small tutorial during the first fight, but decide to leave it to the second update, i've been cooking this for a while and the anxiety was eating me alive, so I just wanted to release it. I'll post a devlog on patreon soon™ about some features that I want to implement in the next update (one of them being the option to escape a grapple!) so stay tuned!!
 
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Great concept and im looking forward updates. I ran into a bug and i'm trying to consistantly trigger it for you, so far if you continue to play for 4+ rounds and she falls and looses there is a chance the game can crash. But im not sure what all causes it.
Going to try and figure the cause of the bug, thanks for the report!

managed to crash the game 2 seconds in. Opened up the options screen and then clicked New Game with the options window open.
Oops, that was a oversight by me, I should release an bugfix soon. In the meanwhile, don't click those buttons while the options are on the screen!!
 

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I love the concept, the demo looks very promising! I do have a few notes:

- The character designs are quite nice, but some sprites feel slightly off (maybe someone more knowledgeable will provide a more detailed opinion on this)
- I'd consider redesigning the enemy attack hint icons - they were a little unintuitive for me, maybe use something similar to WiFi signal strength icons?
- I'd love to see some more dynamic UI elements, some small animations/particle effects can go a long way! Given the punky aesthetic maybe borrow the animated, sharp and eye-catching style from Persona 5?

I also have a question/request: with high corruption will the heroine be able to use lewd attacks on the enemies? I'd love to see a story that doesn't see sex as something depraved and shameful, with the protag being slut-shamed constantly. An alternative is her starting out shocked and embarrassed, but as she gets "corrupted" she just becomes more comfortable/sex-positive, using it for battles and having fun in the meantime.

I can't wait to hear your thoughts and see how the game grows! Good job and good luck!
 
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Needs a spell check

I hope the serum doesn't just make MC more horny, I think it should have a bimbofication effect, making her tits and ass bigger, and making her dumb. She can fight it and retain her personality, but if she gives in her final end state is becoming a sexual object.

Get a Subscribestar so you can implement more kinks, Patreon is unreliable and will prevent you from doing beast and other content that would draw your crowd.

Futa Enemies

Needs a roll back text with middle mouse button option

Needs a skip text button (normally in games it is holding down ctrl button)

Reminds me a lot of Tunnel Escape, research their games for ideas, good inventory and other mechanics

More stages of damaged clothing

Polish the art with an AI

Customize character option, larger breasts

SilkyMilk would be a great choice of voice actress.

Different paths and pathfinding, like a map overview instead of just one linear path

Beast enemies

The healing needs to be better, currently it is useless as enemies deal more damage than what you heal.

Battle defeat should result in her getting railed

More scenes and animation with groping

Needs pregnancy mechanic

Corruption route needs to be more clearly defined. I am curious to see how you implement it.

There are other things but don't want to overwhelm you, overall not bad.
 

KungFuKitteh2

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The art could definitely use some work, this looks like the kind of game I would like but the sprites were an immediate turnoff.

The proportions are unnatural and inconsistent, and the perspective is messed up in some areas:
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She has a man's shoulders (a bit too wide to present as feminine) and the hips / thighs are disproportionately massive.

Don't take what i'm saying as gospel obviously because art is subjective, at least to some degree. But it definitely looks like there are some fundamentals to be worked on, if doing all the art in-house is what you want to do.

Looking forward to seeing how this progresses. Hoping it can be a good opportunity to hone your skills as devs.
 
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wadsadas

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just here to say I really enjoyed the alpha, I can see the potential immediately!

Also, seeing that there's a couple people suggesting using AI to improve the art, I just wanted to add my own opinion; I'd much rather have human art with room for improvement than something AI made. *Not* trying to ignite an AI art debate- but I'll definitely say that if you're interested in improving your skills as an artist, then I and many others would enjoy watching that progression as updates come out. But if you see art as just a means to an end for the game, then I'd say using AI is more understandable.

again, just my personal preference. There's plenty of AI assisted games as of late, and seeing something handcrafted -regardless of the creator's current skill level- is always encouraging! Good luck with the game :D
 
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Klaric

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Really enjoyed your alpha test.
was decently enjoyable, although I hope the combat becomes a bit less like rock paper and scissors, and becomes more fun later down the line, but as of right now, I think the alpha test is pretty good.

Adding more mechanics, perhaps debuffs that carry on past encounters, that you will need to deal with one way or the other could be an idea, to make the game a bit more engaging.
Also its a tad bit annoying to go to the healing tab, to use the mental skill, lower arousal every turn, then leave tab to go into the attack tab. Perhaps add that specific skill to be right above your lust? for easier access, since I imagine this is going to be a skill used quite frequently

Perhaps adding item use, and or a shady shop with shady items, that may work properly, or backfire. You could also have her expose herself or do an embarrassing gesture to get said item. Though this would, i imagine, be way later in development if you like the idea or not.

Adding more dialogue would be nice, but again this is an alpha build so I think what you delivered is good enough.

You probably have already checked out/played some of these games I will mention, but they could be good reference for some ideas.
Karyn's prison
Tunnel Escape

Adding more random events, but with choices could also be an idea.

The breasts feel a little off when naked in the idle pose, I'm not sure why, I could honestly be overreacting/imagining it, so you can ignore me if you want, and I would be fine. Also probably lower the eyes a tad, as they seem a bit high, from what I've been told the forehead is usually 1/3 of your facial height, although at the end of the day you can just say its part of your artstyle.

My worst enemy is the homeless dude who ends up cooming 3 times whenever im grabbed, so I end up being defeated by his cooming expertise. darn him, darn that coomermancer :mad:
I read that you are adding a way to potentially escape grapples, so hoorah no longer shall the homeless be my bane.
an idea for the grapple escape, if you do like the idea of adding items, is have her able to smash or hit them with all kinds of misc items when shes grabbed, as they "lower their guard." Some items can do damage to them, others could add a debuff that makes them more likely to attack a certain way, just an idea.

These are just ideas, in the end, add whatever you want in the game. Go with what you want in your work, because if you’re happy with it, others will probably enjoy it too. Don’t stress about adding everything I or others want, as I would like you to not get burned out on your own project :)

Btw is there a specific way to counter the thug that throws the aphrodisiacs at you? or will that be added in the future?
Lastly lipstick marks are peak, thank you dev for adding them

Anyways, again I really liked your alpha build that you dropped, best of luck to you dev, Ill keep an eye on you and your game.
I also appreciate how active you seem to be in the comments
: )
 
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Polysun

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I love the concept, the demo looks very promising! I do have a few notes:

- The character designs are quite nice, but some sprites feel slightly off (maybe someone more knowledgeable will provide a more detailed opinion on this)
- I'd consider redesigning the enemy attack hint icons - they were a little unintuitive for me, maybe use something similar to WiFi signal strength icons?
- I'd love to see some more dynamic UI elements, some small animations/particle effects can go a long way! Given the punky aesthetic maybe borrow the animated, sharp and eye-catching style from Persona 5?

I also have a question/request: with high corruption will the heroine be able to use lewd attacks on the enemies? I'd love to see a story that doesn't see sex as something depraved and shameful, with the protag being slut-shamed constantly. An alternative is her starting out shocked and embarrassed, but as she gets "corrupted" she just becomes more comfortable/sex-positive, using it for battles and having fun in the meantime.

I can't wait to hear your thoughts and see how the game grows! Good job and good luck!
Hi there, thanks for the feedback!! The idea of the hint icons being something similiar to wifi icons is really good! Gonna experiment a bit with that for the next update, i was never really satisfied with how they turned out. Also, the particle effects will be something i'll look into to be included for the next update, but i can't promisse anything! And yes, Sunset will eventually be able to use lewd attack, i'm still deciding if it's going to be a part of the update. I'll drop a post on patreon talking about the stuff planned for the next update soon™ !
 

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Needs a spell check

I hope the serum doesn't just make MC more horny, I think it should have a bimbofication effect, making her tits and ass bigger, and making her dumb. She can fight it and retain her personality, but if she gives in her final end state is becoming a sexual object.

Get a Subscribestar so you can implement more kinks, Patreon is unreliable and will prevent you from doing beast and other content that would draw your crowd.

Futa Enemies

Needs a roll back text with middle mouse button option

Needs a skip text button (normally in games it is holding down ctrl button)

Reminds me a lot of Tunnel Escape, research their games for ideas, good inventory and other mechanics

More stages of damaged clothing

Polish the art with an AI

Customize character option, larger breasts

SilkyMilk would be a great choice of voice actress.

Different paths and pathfinding, like a map overview instead of just one linear path

Beast enemies

The healing needs to be better, currently it is useless as enemies deal more damage than what you heal.

Battle defeat should result in her getting railed

More scenes and animation with groping

Needs pregnancy mechanic

Corruption route needs to be more clearly defined. I am curious to see how you implement it.

There are other things but don't want to overwhelm you, overall not bad.
Sorry for the spelling mistakes, english is not my first language, if you want to you can send them here and they will be fixed on the bugfix i'm cookin up! Most of the features you mentioned will be added in the next update, so stay tuned! I'll make a post on patreon talking about the next update soon™!!
 

Polysun

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just here to say I really enjoyed the alpha, I can see the potential immediately!

Also, seeing that there's a couple people suggesting using AI to improve the art, I just wanted to add my own opinion; I'd much rather have human art with room for improvement than something AI made. *Not* trying to ignite an AI art debate- but I'll definitely say that if you're interested in improving your skills as an artist, then I and many others would enjoy watching that progression as updates come out. But if you see art as just a means to an end for the game, then I'd say using AI is more understandable.

again, just my personal preference. There's plenty of AI assisted games as of late, and seeing something handcrafted -regardless of the creator's current skill level- is always encouraging! Good luck with the game :D
Thanks for the support! I'll try to improve my art skills while developing the game, i always thought of art as a hobby before deciding to make this game, but don't worry! I'll definitely get better!
does sunset eventualy develop an alternative combat style?;)
Definitely! Lewd skills are a must in battlefuck games!
 

Polysun

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Really enjoyed your alpha test.
was decently enjoyable, although I hope the combat becomes a bit less like rock paper and scissors, and becomes more fun later down the line, but as of right now, I think the alpha test is pretty good.

Adding more mechanics, perhaps debuffs that carry on past encounters, that you will need to deal with one way or the other could be an idea, to make the game a bit more engaging.
Also its a tad bit annoying to go to the healing tab, to use the mental skill, lower arousal every turn, then leave tab to go into the attack tab. Perhaps add that specific skill to be right above your lust? for easier access, since I imagine this is going to be a skill used quite frequently

Perhaps adding item use, and or a shady shop with shady items, that may work properly, or backfire. You could also have her expose herself or do an embarrassing gesture to get said item. Though this would, i imagine, be way later in development if you like the idea or not.

Adding more dialogue would be nice, but again this is an alpha build so I think what you delivered is good enough.

You probably have already checked out/played some of these games I will mention, but they could be good reference for some ideas.
Karyn's prison
Tunnel Escape

Adding more random events, but with choices could also be an idea.

The breasts feel a little off when naked in the idle pose, I'm not sure why, I could honestly be overreacting/imagining it, so you can ignore me if you want, and I would be fine. Also probably lower the eyes a tad, as they seem a bit high, from what I've been told the forehead is usually 1/3 of your facial height, although at the end of the day you can just say its part of your artstyle.

My worst enemy is the homeless dude who ends up cooming 3 times whenever im grabbed, so I end up being defeated by his cooming expertise. darn him, darn that coomermancer :mad:
I read that you are adding a way to potentially escape grapples, so hoorah no longer shall the homeless be my bane.
an idea for the grapple escape, if you do like the idea of adding items, is have her able to smash or hit them with all kinds of misc items when shes grabbed, as they "lower their guard." Some items can do damage to them, others could add a debuff that makes them more likely to attack a certain way, just an idea.

These are just ideas, in the end, add whatever you want in the game. Go with what you want in your work, because if you’re happy with it, others will probably enjoy it too. Don’t stress about adding everything I or others want, as I would like you to not get burned out on your own project :)

Btw is there a specific way to counter the thug that throws the aphrodisiacs at you? or will that be added in the future?
Lastly lipstick marks are peak, thank you dev for adding them

Anyways, again I really liked your alpha build that you dropped, best of luck to you dev, Ill keep an eye on you and your game.
I also appreciate how active you seem to be in the comments
: )
Thanks so much for the review! I did notice that it was kinda of annoying to keep opening the utility skills tab just to use the lower arousal skill, i'll add a shortcut or move it in the next update! And yeah, the breasts in the naked idle are a little funky, for some reason i was having a really hard time drawing them, probably because of my bad anatomy knowledge lmao. The idea of Sunset smashing something to escape the grapple is really interesting! I'll make a note of it! And to counter the dealer aphrodisiac attack you'll have to use a close range attack! The idea is that you rush him before he can aim it at you, and he wouldn't want to risk splashing himself with that stuff!
 
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I saw someone here mentioning about keeping the mask on in sex scenes and I have similar suggestion. I don't remember which game was, but you could equip something to each piece of cloth that prevented it from being removed even when being sexually assauted. I don't know how viable it would be to add something like that in your game, but I mean, if someone wants to keep her mask on or maybe even the jacket or top (or any gear really) while the rest of her clothing is removed while the enemies use her, it could be pretty interesting, I guess.

Just mentioned this since I noticed the clothes are already an added layer to her body. Seems like something that could be added to the game perhaps. Pretty cool so far btw. Hope everything goes well on the development!
 

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I'm uploading a bugfix version right now, so the links might be down for a little while! Also, just posted on patreon about what's to be expected in the next update! Be sure to check it out on my patreon!!

Edit: I don't know exactly how to update the thread, but I think I just post the links here and report the thread to update it?



 
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