Well I played/read through this one and it was highly creative going with a more comic book vibe... And I did love the way choices were visually presented and how the story truly played out based on the choice you made... The visuals were stunning and the artistry shined...
Only issue I saw with visuals, was how when it was dark outside, some of the location choices appeared as daytime when it was actually night time... May want to make night time versions of all those events (i.e. swimming, stretching, running in the park, etc.) in order to keep the continuity in check...
As to the script, I did enjoy the story for the most part (except for the tentacle killing your lover scene, I was very turned off by killing someone while having sex with them, and the scene with the foot fetish followed by killing the prisoner scene, both felt extremely sadist)... The only issue I had with the writing it's self, is that it was full of minor broken English (probably from how it was translated and interpreted), spelling errors, misused words, and grammar errors... But it wasn't terrible, as I could still get the points that the author was trying to portray, and I sorta figured out what words were really intended, even when the word was wrong for the context it was being used in... I did get a S&M vibe from the author since it played out in several scenes... Even though it did walk a fine line, not always seeming to be consensual...
I can see that this story is wanting to push towards themes of dark story telling, not your normal erotic corruption story, but actual Evil type corruption, which for me is a bit disturbing... It's one thing to read a horror story, but a horror story where sex is used to kill and destroy in horrible and sadistic ways, or at least keeps pushing in that direction, I don't find that interesting or fun to read...
This visual novel/comic is more of a niche type story, made for a smell sect of people into dark erotica... So reader beware, if that is not your thing, you may wanna avoid this one... It's not complete yet, but it has enough so far to know full well what direction/s the author/s are intending to take the story... Will it have a happy ending or not? Who knows at this point, have to wait and see... Me personally, I will NOT follow up on this one as it's not something I like reading about... Even though the visuals are fantastic and creative, the darkness of the plot is NOT something I wanna be reading, since you are playing a protagonist that is perpetrating that sort of darkness...