EZ8lt

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What an excellent to a story and the art is extremely good as well. Would love to see the mom or sister having to work in the tavern with a lot of drunk and very handsy customers and having to wear a very skimpy tavern server outfit. Mom and or sis climbing into the MC's bed at night for a little comfort. How about Nora having a little animal fetish with the family dog and or horse? (and some of the other girls as well).
Looking forward to your next update. Good luck.
Comments like this are the reason why they never should've phase out the facepalm reaction.
 

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(y):):love::pGreat game, I like it very much, especially since such games are rare on this site. I wish there were ugly women, fat women with bushes at the bottom of their pussy. The masterpiece of the world where you give the choice of whether women should be hairy or not is a rarity on this site these days. Good luck, I'm looking forward to the next update. I would like to have a choice about the tags you plan to introduce in the future. E.g. NTR can be avoided
 
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Comments like this are the reason why they never should've phase out the facepalm reaction.
Different strokes for different folks, but at least the Picard meme version is still here = :FacePalm:. Dunno why they'd remove a simple facepalm emoji though, when some sites have a middle-finger and pointed-gun emojis.
 
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v0.1 Prologue P1 review

some quick criticism:

Writing and Content
  • too many "your mom" jokes - it was overbearing where i hoped the friend would clock mc one or just walk off on him but because he didn't it didn't feel like it fit in a dialogue sense
  • a bit boring that most of the female characters already sexually like MC
  • incest patch feels necessary otherwise dialogue sounds weird between Catherine (Mom character) and MC
  • typo: wrong character: "Catherine" used for MC line (forgot where, sorry)
  • has consistent erotic tease, especially around Mom
    • otherwise contains sexual content
      • one being elusive if you don't play the minigame optimally (Dana)
        • didn't enjoy the minigame, felt too fast and using png of real animals lowered quality
      • and the one at the river was pretty good as is
  • no sound is a bummer
Graphics
  • the detail to the environment along with textures help fill the space
  • lighting is usually good but there are cases where it's overexposed:
    • normal good lighting: u1s2i9.jpg ; overexposed, yellowish on mc, lighting: u1s2i17.jpg
  • attractive models with a natural feel to skin texture and colour and no bras
    • although larger breast shapes look odd under clothing(such as Mom)
      • nipples also need a more natural morphs u1s5i18.jpg
    • Mom eyes vary in luminosity, right side having an uncanny glow u1s1i45.jpg
  • younger male models also look pretty good
    • body hair and uncircumcised dick helps embed that old medieval feel
  • that being said, the separate file is unnecessary as quoted below:
Dev, you could've made a in-game switch between "hairness" and "hairless" versions (in menu options or as a choice at the start of the game) of CG-s, instead of creating two separate games to download,
  • and mom's unshaved version looks too neat, as if shaven but not bald
  • animation is smooth
    • but looping ruins the naturalness, e.g. water sways back and forth; body movement mechanical

nothing much to say on writing yet, it was okay. some graphic inconsistencies. good dose of erotic content for a first release
 

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I really enjoyed the game and will support your progress on it. Definitely listen to some of the criticism but still make the game you want to create ateotd. I think the models are great and the story so far has a great setup. cheers!
 
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tretch95

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SO yeah if you pass by here dev pls, give me smt abt the story not a big spoiler, just smt to make me interested. Also I completely agree with you games that have big chunk of dialogue especially during sex scenes are such a turn off. I mean if I wanted to read a book I would just do that.
The irony is that sex scenes in literature usually describe the physical act itself in all details (sweat, moaning, etc), rather than a dialogue between the sex partners.

Or should we rather say: cringey monologue fragments, taken from american mainstream porn ("uuh ur dick is so big / cum for me baby") or hentai fiction (like the "throbbing dick" and the "onii-chan")



Perhaps the problem here is that most authors are Gen Zs who never had sexual experiences outside watching porn and sending dick picks to their classmates. And how would you write about something you never experienced yourself.
 

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Different strokes for different folks, but at least the Picard meme version is still here = :FacePalm:. Dunno why they'd remove a simple facepalm emoji though, when some sites have a middle-finger and pointed-gun emojis.
Because it heavily antagonizes forum users. Without any substance.

If you have a reason to disagree, lay out your arguments. Like an intelligent person would.

Or perhaps learn to tolerate opinions.
 

Sadowdark

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v0.1 Prologue P1 review

some quick criticism:

Writing and Content
  • too many "your mom" jokes - it was overbearing where i hoped the friend would clock mc one or just walk off on him but because he didn't it didn't feel like it fit in a dialogue sense
  • a bit boring that most of the female characters already sexually like MC
  • incest patch feels necessary otherwise dialogue sounds weird between Catherine (Mom character) and MC
  • typo: wrong character: "Catherine" used for MC line (forgot where, sorry)
  • has consistent erotic tease, especially around Mom
    • otherwise contains sexual content
      • one being elusive if you don't play the minigame optimally (Dana)
        • didn't enjoy the minigame, felt too fast and using png of real animals lowered quality
      • and the one at the river was pretty good as is
  • no sound is a bummer
Graphics
  • the detail to the environment along with textures help fill the space
  • lighting is usually good but there are cases where it's overexposed:
  • attractive models with a natural feel to skin texture and colour and no bras
  • younger male models also look pretty good
    • body hair and uncircumcised dick helps embed that old medieval feel
  • that being said, the separate file is unnecessary as quoted below:

  • and mom's unshaved version looks too neat, as if shaven but not bald
  • animation is smooth
    • but looping ruins the naturalness, e.g. water sways back and forth; body movement mechanical

nothing much to say on writing yet, it was okay. some graphic inconsistencies. good dose of erotic content for a first release
(y)My friend should put this post in the review section
 
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v0.1 Prologue P1 review

some quick criticism:

Writing and Content
  • too many "your mom" jokes - it was overbearing where i hoped the friend would clock mc one or just walk off on him but because he didn't it didn't feel like it fit in a dialogue sense
  • a bit boring that most of the female characters already sexually like MC
  • incest patch feels necessary otherwise dialogue sounds weird between Catherine (Mom character) and MC
  • typo: wrong character: "Catherine" used for MC line (forgot where, sorry)
  • has consistent erotic tease, especially around Mom
    • otherwise contains sexual content
      • one being elusive if you don't play the minigame optimally (Dana)
        • didn't enjoy the minigame, felt too fast and using png of real animals lowered quality
      • and the one at the river was pretty good as is
  • no sound is a bummer
Graphics
  • the detail to the environment along with textures help fill the space
  • lighting is usually good but there are cases where it's overexposed:
  • attractive models with a natural feel to skin texture and colour and no bras
  • younger male models also look pretty good
    • body hair and uncircumcised dick helps embed that old medieval feel
  • that being said, the separate file is unnecessary as quoted below:

  • and mom's unshaved version looks too neat, as if shaven but not bald
  • animation is smooth
    • but looping ruins the naturalness, e.g. water sways back and forth; body movement mechanical

nothing much to say on writing yet, it was okay. some graphic inconsistencies. good dose of erotic content for a first release
LOL your-mom and fart jokes to me are still amusing and I'm probably 2x as old as the MC. And I wouldn't even play an AVN if there was no incest or at least a patch, so it's probably an incest AVN by default meant to be played with the i-patch anyway that only exists to get around Patreon's bullshit (ie probably incest first then re-written for Patreon, most won't notice as only 3-4% of F95 plays an incest AVN without the incest, so probably not much attention/effort was paid to the Patreon version of the dialogue). It would be better though to simply not use Patreon in the first place and use some other platform with no patch necessary to avoid the awkward-dialogue confusion. If that were the case as an incest/loli/hairy pussy/harem fan (the little sister seems cute, can't wait to fuck and creampie her and maybe put a baby in her, probably much to the horror of their mom) it would otherwise be worth supporting from what I see so far despite that annoying mini game, but not giving money to those Patreon Nazi's, nope, forget it, I don't care how good an AVN is or even if someone was selling legit $2 bills for 50 cents on there. Fuck censorship and anyone that supports it.
 
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Because it heavily antagonizes forum users. Without any substance.

If you have a reason to disagree, lay out your arguments. Like an intelligent person would.

Or perhaps learn to tolerate opinions.
They can still just reply with Picard. Or even with no emojis at all = /facepalm. But I suppose most are too lazy to do that since it does take extra steps and more keystrokes vs simply sticking an emoji on a post.
 

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LOL your-mom and fart jokes to me are still amusing and I'm probably 2x as old as the MC. And I wouldn't even play an AVN if there was no incest or at least a patch, so it's probably an incest AVN by default meant to be played with the i-patch anyway that only exists to get around Patreon's bullshit. It would be better though to simply not use Patreon in the first place and use some other platform with no patch necessary to avoid the awkward-dialogue confusion. If that were the case as an incest/loli/hairy pussy/harem fan (the little sister seems cute, can't wait to fuck and creampie her and maybe put a baby in her, probably much to the horror of their mom) it would otherwise be worth supporting from what I see so far despite that annoying mini game, but not giving money to those Patreon Nazi's, nope, forget it, I don't care how good an AVN is or even if someone was selling legit $2 bills for 50 cents on there. Fuck censorship and anyone that supports it.
I know a creator who didn't learn from his mistakes and added incest and three of his games were banned
 
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I know a creator who didn't learn from his mistakes and added incest and three of his games were banned
It's why he shouldn't have used them in the first place, too unreliable. Hays Code bullshit like that is why sites Subscribestar and Backed.by were started. Sure, most devs with no spine and dollar signs in their eyes bend a knee to them and try to carry on by cranking out mostly shit good enough for Patreon but then isn't worth subscribing to anyway due to being watered down to hell as far as lewds and kinks, but some go elsewhere and still do fine while sticking to their vision (write whatever you want uncensored as originally intended with no patches required, other than maybe loli ones for here to get around Rule 7).
 
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