Ren'Py Alena's New Life [v0.7.5] [Jinnxx Games]

[PeggyBlackett]

Kinda creepy-looking girls...

 

[PeggyBlackett]

I don't like this WIP idea.

A lot of games have places where you can choose something that's WIP ...and they don't tell you till AFTER you do.

 

[EveKeller]

Yes, there will be a lesbian focused path...

Spoiler: So the scene in the park

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[Jinnxx]

Spoiler: So the scene in the park

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This is not the lesbian path.

 

[Rotelle]

hey! came back to play the new update. here are some of the things i noticed:

• the option to buy the sim card for $100 is still there after you already have it. dunno if it works, didn't try to buy it - since there isn't anything else to do at the electronics shop, maybe it can be disabled once you have the sim card?
• you can go on alyssa's tour multiple times
• you can get loren's number multiple times (omg i ship it)
• you can talk about planning a restaraunt at loren's house multiple times
• clicking the bubble with the two girls in the hall still sends you to where mat is (i think only if you already overheard their gossip?)
• it says "0 days until next boost" on the last day before a boost
• for the scenes with loren: the scissor option played the renders for the strapon scene. in the progress menu, its thumbnail is the scissor option, but it still plays the strapon scene
• sometimes the option to cover the night shift will be grayed out even if you have it unlocked and have enough energy-- but then if you back out and talk to loren again it'll be enabled(?)
• bought a lasagna at school and had -1 money-- at least its realistic
• asking for a discount sent me back to the map near loren's house, and if i came back and asked for it again, it would still send me back (maybe this was one of the "not ready, might disable till then because confusing" things)
• in the progress menu: energy is called "Eenrgy", dom/sub points aren't there, intelligence says 0, nail polish isn't in the possessions (that last one might actually help me, i didnt realize it was nail polish until I used it)
• scene counter was removed which is fine, but the extra scenes tab said I had 31/2 extra scenes

and some clarifications:

• just making sure, does having loren stay the night do anything other than BEING REALLY CUTE <3
• is the teacher's lounge available? i know it said it was WIP in the update notes but I couldn't even figure out how to go there
• nothing at the tennis court right? just making sure
• does screen share in the phone settings do anything? like, if you leave it on-- or if you turn it off actually, i'm not even sure. it doesn't seem like it does anything whether its on/off or if you remember/forget to change it
• the electronics/porn options on the phone aren't meant for anything either yet right?

some suggestions:

• make the boost in alena's room stand out more - it's hidden in the corner
• the money in the park is too hard to find too
• it would be better if the camera pan-up at the date with loren was animated - since a few other scenes in this game are animated, its definitely possible
• maybe get rid of the fade-to-blacks when moving at school? i actually really like that the school cafeteria helps with energy problems, but because of the fades, it can take a while to wake up, go to school, go to the other floor, go to the cafeteria, eat, then go back
• could we get energy listed at the top? it does more than the other stats, that's for sure
• scenes with loren in her room<333 it would also give you a reason to go back to her house after you've planned to start a restaurant together
• in the future, maybe you could buy clothes at the girly stuff shop and it would let you customize some scenes? in case you want alena to still wear the school uniform in some of them for example. i don't know if it's possible to do that without making the games file size huge or anything, but if its possible, it would be fun

i do have to agree with others on the grind, i have gotten used to it but it can be a bit much :c though if you took out money and energy from the game entirely, you could see everything the game has in like 10 minutes xnx the stuff you've added in to help reduce it for now does help though and i'd love to see more

thanks for continuing to work on the game! its fun and its really cute and i just want to see more of it especiallythepartswithloren and i was happy to see an update today! what's your general roadmap for the game - what kinds of stuff do you want to make next?

 

[slavegal]

I like the idea, but it is too sluggish. It is too easy for MC to lose both energy and money. for example, MC needs 6 points of energy to work and earn an average of 20 coins, and then two cups of ice cream that cost 18 coins can restore the energy MC used, meaning 6 points. MC could profit 3 coins per shift per day, and a dildo cost 200? It means many gaming days of repetitive activities. And two cups o ice cream cost 18, a can of tuna boost 5 points of energy cost 20 ?? I feel there are fundamental math errors in those settings. Considering sleeping can restore 2 points of energy, players can buy two bags of chips to keep working, but it still needs about 20 times repetitive working in the pizza shop without any new content.

Of course, MC can trade her body for food, but that costs even more energy (10 points energy to show the butt for food, more energy than working ). If payers choose that, MC would need more days to collect the money for the dildo...just wondering, why this setting? it doesn't make sense, unless ...

 

[EveKeller]

This is not the lesbian path.

OK..? So buying a strap-on is for... heterosexual activity?
I get that not everything and every side quest will be "lesbian friendly" but I really thought this one was.
My apologies.

Edit:
btw I really like your custom characters, the girls are very cute ^_^

 

[wario7403]

guys where can i see how much i have loren friendship ?

I dont know how many point i have

 

[Jinnxx]

• just making sure, does having loren stay the night do anything other than BEING REALLY CUTE <3

It locks in Loren to stay in the room and never goes back home if it's too late, so the user don't have to be worried/anxious about the time

• is the teacher's lounge available? i know it said it was WIP in the update notes but I couldn't even figure out how to go there
• nothing at the tennis court right? just making sure

I thought I added a button to access it, but apparently I forgot:3 And yes nothing for now, I'm just laying the ground work for the next updates

• does screen share in the phone settings do anything? like, if you leave it on-- or if you turn it off actually, i'm not even sure. it doesn't seem like it does anything whether its on/off or if you remember/forget to change it

This is related to Alex path, but I still haven't dug though it after the free mode so foe now the screen share does nothing. Aldo the porn app thing is also wip because it's related to Alex path

the option to buy the sim card for $100 is still there after you already have it. dunno if it works, didn't try to buy it

Yea that's normal, the error is fixed for players who play the game for first time. You're seeing this because you loaded your game that was saved before the fix. But I suggest you pay the $100 anyway because there's a variable that changes when you do and other variables are counting on it (But not now, that's for future updates)

what's your general roadmap for the game - what kinds of stuff do you want to make next?

That's a secret but the main storyline is about loren and alena facing troubles to set up their own restaurant. They're gonna do it the city so it will be really hard for them to set it up. Also the side characters need to be on the scene so I have to work on them as well


Thank you for your suggestions! I'm certainly looking into them. And thank you for the gold bug digging, I'm gonna look into them immediately.

 

[Jinnxx]

guys where can i see how much i have loren friendship ?

I dont know how many point i have

In the stats menu, use ESC button

 

[Jinnxx]

OK..? So buying a strap-on is for... heterosexual activity?
I get that not everything and every side quest will be "lesbian friendly" but I really thought this one was.
My apologies.

Edit:
btw I really like your custom characters, the girls are very cute ^_^

Yea sorry the only fixed lesbian path is Loren's. I'm not sure about the tennis path btw, it might be fully lesbian, or you can avoid non lesbian stuff in it. Btw you can use the strapp to fuck loren. And thanks:3

 

[Jinnxx]

I like the idea, but it is too sluggish. It is too easy for MC to lose both energy and money. for example, MC needs 6 points of energy to work and earn an average of 20 coins, and then two cups of ice cream that cost 18 coins can restore the energy MC used, meaning 6 points. MC could profit 3 coins per shift per day, and a dildo cost 200? It means many gaming days of repetitive activities. And two cups o ice cream cost 18, a can of tuna boost 5 points of energy cost 20 ?? I feel there are fundamental math errors in those settings. Considering sleeping can restore 2 points of energy, players can buy two bags of chips to keep working, but it still needs about 20 times repetitive working in the pizza shop without any new content.

Of course, MC can trade her body for food, but that costs even more energy (10 points energy to show the butt for food, more energy than working ). If payers choose that, MC would need more days to collect the money for the dildo...just wondering, why this setting? it doesn't make sense, unless ...

I added the school cafeteria to ease up the "pain" of getting energy. The whole idea about food being so expensive is that to give the user a sense of achievement/progress once they're too rich to care about the prices, also mind you there will be more than way to make easy money now since Loren and Alena wanna open up they're own restaurant. If the money was easy to make from the beginning I'm not sure it will give the same effect/vibes about the sense of progress. I think even if I made the money easy to make there will still be people complaining about the game being too grindy, so I'm not really sure what to do right now.

 

[wario7403]

In the stats menu, use ESC button

ok thanks

 

[Anonymous100]

What does the game goal mean here: The ending? So if we do that, the game ends? Or is it the end of Loren's path? If so, will that lock out from other paths if achieved?

 

[Jhonthedon420]

Android?

 

[RossoX]

Are the renders from a 3D engine like koikatsu and similar?

 

[Kinjiru]

Good start, has potential. The navigation is weird, sometimes it teleports me to other locations if I use the 'room' button. Definitely need more choices in the story.

 

[Degeneracy]

Too buggy, oftentimes you get teleported to the diner and unable, for me, to attend class. Will wait on this one for bugs and the stamina to get fleshed out. Possible gym scenes to raise stamina cap, or sports outside school.

 

[DantexxDNC]

Holy crap did someone play this before releasing it? Check your shit before you waste peoples fap time lmao 0/10

 

[jojotaro88]

This game is EMPTY.