VN Ren'Py Alice: A Hard Life [Ep1 v1.6] [Caylake]

[88Michele88]

So, there no skip text nor rollback he seem like he deactived them.
We need be free to have our way to rallback when and where we want and I prefer skip usless text stright to the importart part.
To what they want us from to go back and se what that choise mean to accept or not we need to be sure to not be had bad surprises.

Give us back preference rallback and skip option, they are crucial in all choise based games.

 

[stahalle]

and another game wasted because you get forced to either strip for the principal or give the landlord a handjob.....
deleted it for now maybe if things get changed i give it another try.

 

[Caylake]

yeah there were grammer mistakes but honestly it wasnt that bad. my biggest complaint are referring girls as he/him and referring boys as she/her its probably going to be fixed in next update hopefully.

Thank you for your consideration. You won't see grammatical errors in the next update. Sorry for my mistakes!

 

[stahalle]

you wrote she is a clever woman. she just found out that her neighbour is a lawyer. if she really is clever she could ask him what her options are, if the landlord can throw her out (in my country for example he couldnt just throw her out) and she could sue both the landlord and the principal for sexuell harrasment. i mean for what you gave us the options to not be a slut when she just goes and let herself be degraded by the landlord to give him a handjob? no self-respect woman would do that.

 

[grumpyoldcat]

yeah there were grammer mistakes but honestly it wasnt that bad. my biggest complaint are referring girls as he/him and referring boys as she/her its probably going to be fixed in next update hopefully.

Grammar, punctuation, spelling, and the like are in theory, easy fixes.

But it's very difficult to fix bad pacing, dialogue, characterization, plot, and so many other fundamental things that cripple any kind of cohesive story trying to be conveyed, even in something as lowly as smut.

 

[YogaPants]

you wrote she is a clever woman. she just found out that her neighbour is a lawyer. if she really is clever she could ask him what her options are, if the landlord can throw her out (in my country for example he couldnt just throw her out) and she could sue both the landlord and the principal for sexuell harrasment. i mean for what you gave us the options to not be a slut when she just goes and let herself be degraded by the landlord to give him a handjob? no self-respect woman would do that.

Yesterday i watch a liveguard stepsis jump in the bathtub to save her stepbro from shark and fked him just in case so that he wasnt afraid. You know what? I enjoyed that sh*t Sherlock

 

[Whore2U]

you wrote she is a clever woman. she just found out that her neighbour is a lawyer. if she really is clever she could ask him what her options are, if the landlord can throw her out (in my country for example he couldnt just throw her out) and she could sue both the landlord and the principal for sexuell harrasment. i mean for what you gave us the options to not be a slut when she just goes and let herself be degraded by the landlord to give him a handjob? no self-respect woman would do that.

i mean its game, even movies have lots of dumb shit going on...

 

[stahalle]

Yesterday i watch a liveguard stepsis jump in the bathtub to save her stepbro from shark and fked him just in case so that he wasnt afraid. You know what? I enjoyed that sh*t Sherlock

good for you.

 

[Furrexxx]

is kid are Danny from true bond?

 

[stahalle]

i mean its game, even movies have lots of dumb shit going on...

but why write her as a clever strong willed person than? you see it in the classroom scene she wants to be respected. that handjob just doesnt make any sense if you are not on the slut route.

 

[TomUK]

As the story progresses you will realize that this is not the case. Alice is a teacher at school to catch a man named Toby, to get information about him. toby is Jacob's father. Please wait for the update!

I know what the story is, but it's the similarities to another game, there might be slight difference, but the scenes are eerily similar.

 

[Furrexxx]

handjob scene can be, but not in the begining of game. and strip for principal looking really stupid

 

[YogaPants]

but why write her as a clever strong willed person than? you see it in the classroom scene she wants to be respected. that handjob just doesnt make any sense if you are not on the slut route.

it's much more enjoyable to degrade a strong willed woman, even if it's just in name

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

you wrote she is a clever woman. she just found out that her neighbour is a lawyer. if she really is clever she could ask him what her options are, if the landlord can throw her out (in my country for example he couldnt just throw her out) and she could sue both the landlord and the principal for sexuell harrasment. i mean for what you gave us the options to not be a slut when she just goes and let herself be degraded by the landlord to give him a handjob? no self-respect woman would do that.

All she had to tell him was she’s a secret agent working undercover in the school to bust the drug dealers, the principal should know that unless he’s also part of the problem in ghe sting operation, also don’t trust that librarian, think she’s fuckin jacob for drugs or maybe to work for his dad, but she went out of her way to protect him

 

[YogaPants]

I know what the story is, but it's the similarities to another game, there might be slight difference, but the scenes are eerily similar.

What game? I love the forced genre

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

What game? I love the forced genre

AWAM, the classroom, Jacobb is like Aiden, Josef is like Dre and that girl that hangs out with them is like Jen, also got the bbc janitor

 

[heatherwendy]

What a lovely game, love the lesbian path I am going on , hoping and wishing for much more .Hopefully some sexy lingerie is in the next update "Pantyhose" is great seduction , some footsies perhaps ~ as you really never see it too much , again great seduction. Cant wait for the next update , this is going into my favorites ~

 

[Tuatha Dé]

What a lovely game, love the lesbian path I am going on , hoping and wishing for much more .Hopefully some sexy lingerie is in the next update "Pantyhose" is great seduction , some footsies perhaps ~ as you really never see it too much , again great seduction. Cant wait for the next update , this is going into my favorites ~

is only lesbian? because as I read there is some forced stuff

 

[Orphanus]

is only lesbian? because as I read there is some forced stuff

Dev themselves said as of now there is no path that allows to avoid all m/f content, so either that's meant to say it won't be possible in the long run or it already isn't possible at this time.

 

[Armonie]

Thanks for sharing, I had a great time with Alice !

Whatever the future of the game, there will always be a minority of toxic and particularly vocal people to say they don't like this or that. I hope this game and its MC keep their unique personalities away from petty influences.

To make some scenes avoidable ? Why not, but for pity's sake, don't lose your script identity and logic in the process.