VN Ren'Py Alice in Wonderland [v7.2] [Slow Burn Games]

[wertgoku]

Bello, mi è piaciuto molto.

 

[kevcolqaz]

Well love games where the mc can control what happens to his partner is always welcomed.

 

[Jaaustin]

ive really enjoyed all of slowburns visual novels. i hated to see an early end to undercover but enjoying the start of this project.

 

[Badboll]

I guess fraud doesn't exist in this games universe, the step father would have a warrant for his arrest and the debt wouldn't pass on to the daughter and he would owe her every dollar he defrauded from her trust.
That's how reality works. He can also not re-mortdage a house he doesn't own unless they were living in his house, which I doubt was the case, what's her mom doing here in all this. This kind of stuff takes me straight out of the immersion and straight to annoyance.
What the bank man is doing is also illegal most likely.

 

[Prokopije]

Yes, I am trying to make the NTR largely avoidable. However, there are scenes where MC has to watch his wife acting in a movie- might be best described as cucking- but even there the MC can mitigate what happens.

I'm not against ntr in general, but I don't like "old on young" type of content. And I see few older male npc's in op pictures, so... want to know if it's possible to play this game without any of those old folks touching wife.??

 

[joryh]

Yeah. That's how bank accounts work. Ppl don't know how much money they have until the bank manager calls them personally and tells them they're broke. No contact before then. No balance notices when making deposits or withdrawals. Just a blind account that someone else 'manages' by ignoring it til all the money is gone. -.-

 

[Fapbert]

Is it just me or does Dobbs' Christmas party story being unavoidable in the fully loyal route make NTR unavoidable? Even if it's a lie, showing the scene crosses the line for NTR avoiders I think? I'm no expert, love NTR and cheating.

The bank stuff not being realistic didn't really bother me but I get how little things like that can take someone out of it. It wouldn't take much to clean it up and give a plausible story like the Stepdad was giving them fake documents, make her unknowingly complicit somehow and thus responsible for the money, and figure out a realistic enough bank/court story.

During the movie filming scenes, Alice's character says she has a boyfriend and then the next day says she and her boss are both married. This actually works if the movie is supposed to just be awful shit, which it is.

But after the pub scene, MC is thinking Dobbs doesn't know they are married. This is ridiculous as Dobbs knew them both before the movie deal.

Anyway, this looks like it's gonna be another great project from slowburn. Even if the graphics haven't "evolved" or whatever. Looking forward to it and hope a good cheating route develops.

 

[Eleanorduval]

Yes, I am trying to make the NTR largely avoidable. However, there are scenes where MC has to watch his wife acting in a movie- might be best described as cucking- but even there the MC can mitigate what happens.

Let not beat around bush even after modifications,NTR will not be avoidable.I feel being tricked "NTR largely can be avoided"

I don’t like and forces players hand.It’s for ntr fan only u should probably mention in description so no ntr players avoid play it.If u gonna can make NTR avoidable make it 100% or keep all it ntr.

In the description u written "would me keep Alice away from”,but u insist on unavoidable ntr scenes.The last part of description misleading players in my opinion.
Was better to do something like 12 day of Christmas everything is 100%,u just u don’t get the money.

Hope u are open mind to listen to some constructive criticism.

 

[godscoper]

Good luck to Dev, not a fan of NTR/ cock, even if getting grouped, plus unavoidable scene with Dobb's his version is at Christmas party his side alice gave handjob, vs alice side she didn't do anything.
don't know what is true or not.

 

[EnTeeArrr]

Let not beat around bush even after modifications,will not be avoidable.I don’t like when dev tricky and forces players hand.It’s for ntr fan only u should probably mention in description so no ntr players avoid play it.If u gonna can NTR avoidable make it 100% or keep all it ntr.

In the description u written "would me keep Alice away from”,but u insist on unavoidable ntr scenes.The last part of description misleading players in my opinion.

Hope u are open mind to listen to some constructive criticism.

nothing about this post is constructive its just whinging.

 

[I-Love-Adventure]

nice game thank you

 

[slowburngames]

Let not beat around bush even after modifications,NTR will not be avoidable.I feel being tricked "NTR largely can be avoided"

I don’t like and forces players hand.It’s for ntr fan only u should probably mention in description so no ntr players avoid play it.If u gonna can make NTR avoidable make it 100% or keep all it ntr.

In the description u written "would me keep Alice away from”,but u insist on unavoidable ntr scenes.The last part of description misleading players in my opinion.
Was better to do something like 12 day of Christmas everything is 100%,u just u don’t get the money.

Hope u are open mind to listen to some constructive criticism.

Well, you are right in that it will be a challenge to make it completely avoidable, but I will try to offer alternatives. The idea for the game is that the MC can either embrace NTR or try to protect his wife from it.
There will be sex scenes in the movie that the MC is forced to watch- not sure if that counts as NTR.
NTR is in the tags to warn anyone who doesn't want to risk it.

 

[Sasuke0909]

Off to a great start, another slowburngames blessing for all of us.

If you don't like the whole NTR/Cheating why even bother downloading in the first place? give it a break!

FMC is beautiful btw! Hope to see someone like "Betty" too.

Again thanks dev!!

 

[slowburngames]

Is it just me or does Dobbs' Christmas party story being unavoidable in the fully loyal route make NTR unavoidable? Even if it's a lie, showing the scene crosses the line for NTR avoiders I think? I'm no expert, love NTR and cheating.

The bank stuff not being realistic didn't really bother me but I get how little things like that can take someone out of it. It wouldn't take much to clean it up and give a plausible story like the Stepdad was giving them fake documents, make her unknowingly complicit somehow and thus responsible for the money, and figure out a realistic enough bank/court story.

During the movie filming scenes, Alice's character says she has a boyfriend and then the next day says she and her boss are both married. This actually works if the movie is supposed to just be awful shit, which it is.

But after the pub scene, MC is thinking Dobbs doesn't know they are married. This is ridiculous as Dobbs knew them both before the movie deal.

Anyway, this looks like it's gonna be another great project from slowburn. Even if the graphics haven't "evolved" or whatever. Looking forward to it and hope a good cheating route develops.

Whoops! Looks like bugs in the text. I did change my mind about her marital status during the writing- looks like I missed some of the edits. Thanks for pointing them out.
Interesting point about the flashback crossing the line of NTR. Perhaps I should reconsider how I present those lies.

 

[slowburngames]

I guess fraud doesn't exist in this games universe, the step father would have a warrant for his arrest and the debt wouldn't pass on to the daughter and he would owe her every dollar he defrauded from her trust.
That's how reality works. He can also not re-mortdage a house he doesn't own unless they were living in his house, which I doubt was the case, what's her mom doing here in all this. This kind of stuff takes me straight out of the immersion and straight to annoyance.
What the bank man is doing is also illegal most likely.

Hmm... I'm glad you're so confident in your legal analysis. The idea I was trying to convey is that the deeds and bank accounts WERE in the stepfather's name. As her manager, he was able to manipulate the accounts accordingly. The mother had (stupidly) trusted him. As Alice's legal parent, trustee, manager, account holder, lease and deed holder, I just assumed he could get away with it. My bad if that isn't legally accurate.

 

[Eleanorduval]

Well, you are right in that it will be a challenge to make it completely avoidable, but I will try to offer alternatives. The idea for the game is that the MC can either embrace NTR or try to protect his wife from it.
There will be sex scenes in the movie that the MC is forced to watch- not sure if that counts as NTR.
NTR is in the tags to warn anyone who doesn't want to risk it.

Tag aren’t sufficient as there is Game tagged NTR,but ntr are 100% avoidable,an example east side and whisper of desir (good slow burn corruption)
Mc is forced to watch his wife get physically,without asking before is hard ntr.So yeah I think only ntr players will play,unless u have even sex optional in th movie no vanilla will play.St

I dunno if u get what mean.phone affairs fmc is actress too but,she accepts scenes only after permission mc is 100% ok.There is 100% Loyal path even she is actress.

In my opinion to be logic

fiddle path she can ask the change of script (save from Wolf will be cohérente).U can t save her if u let have sex even for the seek of the movie.

NTS let her to do it and enjoy it

Ntr she will not ask permission,she do thing automatically

I m not complaining just like when things are coherent for all players categories.

 

[slowburngames]

I'm not against ntr in general, but I don't like "old on young" type of content. And I see few older male npc's in op pictures, so... want to know if it's possible to play this game without any of those old folks touching wife.??

There's no way to play the game and avoid old leches turning up, but you should be able to avoid having sex with them.
Just touching? I think sometimes minor actions like that may be anavoidable.

 

[russelld]

Great start to a great game.

 

[Badboll]

Hmm... I'm glad you're so confident in your legal analysis. The idea I was trying to convey is that the deeds and bank accounts WERE in the stepfather's name. As her manager, he was able to manipulate the accounts accordingly. The mother had (stupidly) trusted him. As Alice's legal parent, trustee, manager, account holder, lease and deed holder, I just assumed he could get away with it. My bad if that isn't legally accurate.

A trust is set up in a specific way, if it's for her he has to justify why he needed the money, as you said he took out money and lied about why he needed it and what it was going to be used for, you said he took a 500k loan out, I don't think that's actually possible but lets say it is, he said it was for a movie, which is was not, that's fraud.
It's not that I am confident that I am right. There is probably ways he can do what he did. It can easily be explain away with that everyone is colluding, stepfather banker and Weinstein and that the banker is lying to her and also breaking many laws.
The MC and FMC doesn't have to understand or know that they have legal options to use. They can be naive and gullible and believe people they shouldn't. As it's evident they are already doing.
So there is no need to change the plot really. There is plenty of corruption and fraud happening that never gets discovered after all.
But what the step dad did is absolutely fraud.

 

[Jay_Deeznuts]

I guess fraud doesn't exist in this games universe, the step father would have a warrant for his arrest and the debt wouldn't pass on to the daughter and he would owe her every dollar he defrauded from her trust.
That's how reality works. He can also not re-mortdage a house he doesn't own unless they were living in his house, which I doubt was the case, what's her mom doing here in all this. This kind of stuff takes me straight out of the immersion and straight to annoyance.
What the bank man is doing is also illegal most likely.

Hey I'm starting to think none of those pizza delivery men or pool cleaners are actually licensed contractors... this porno is ruined.