Nice story, but I hope the author doesn't get swayed on the Kim issue. After all, that kiss moved the story, wasn't the purpose of the MC to make its "sponsor" happy? Well, he succeeded, and I wouldn't make a fuss about a kiss. Then, folks, it's nice to empathize with the MC, but sometimes you seem to forget that it's a game, not real life. Who cares who fucks whom, the important thing is that a piece of the cake remains for us too.
Another thing, if you don't like a game or a story, you can also do without it, you don't have to ruin the fun at all.