Miðgarðsormr

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Last time i played this game (almost a year) it had basically no content whatsoever is there finally some sex in this game?
 

assrekt

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Is it too much? Or hard to read because of it? I'm really not a fan of bolding, I think it's too bulky, but I feel there are sorta time that call for it, but not a clear enough distinction to find out when.
Yeah I think the bold fonts made it too bulky. It like messes up the tone and rhythm of the script. I think the all caps should suffice when trying to emphasize when the characters are screaming.
 
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Morah SDG

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Yeah I think the bold fonts made it too bulky. It like messes up the tone and rhythm of the script. I think the all caps should suffice when trying to emphasize when the characters are screaming.
I think I shall try applying this going forward to my proofreading edits, and some changes to the previous scripts as well. Thank you for the input.
 
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