RPGM An Alchemist's Tale [3.52 Alpha] [Captain Allegretto Games]

[LazyKeks]

This is stupid.

No. You aren't in a relationship, by that point. Yes. You're building points towards it. No, you're not being cucked, because you aren't in a current romantic relationship, as of yet. Yes. It feels like there would be a way to affect this from happening, in future updates. But even then, she's most likely fucked the Orc long before you, the MC, was a concieved possibility. Nevermind the Harpy and Orc Futa MIGHT have a Relationship long before you. Doesn't that also means Netori? So you want Netori, in other words?

Cause if so. Wow. Hypocrisy. Still NTR content, but which one? Since you never stated which one.

I don't really want to get into someone else's dialogue, but for most of the anti-ntr (strange name, but let it be) 3 ltrs is written in my signature "Someone other than MC fucks LI / potential LI". And as far as I can tell, that's just the way it is.

 

[Kazaim]

Why. Should the Orc feel empathy, for your stupid ass mug running into her Grove, being busy doing a thing you have no business in. Yes. There would be guilt. Why? Go figure. You, the MC attempting to make a relationship with her and she knows the MC is very touchy and emotional. Did you expect anything else?

Also. Stop putting yourself in the shoes of a drawn Character, in a game of Porn/Hentai no less. Much worse if you should expect NTR of any type to be in it. It's gonna do something to your mind and fuck you up in your grey matter. No wonder so many reacts like a pissy bitch anything they don't like, despite every Tags and warnings of any kind before their very eyes and senses.

I don't know what your fucked up expectations are. When you clearly, are attempting to make a demand of something, that which YOU, already have an answer on. By your own findings, me attempting to lecture your dumb ass and the Dev that got sick of you like i have now.

I'd suggest you stop playing anything with NTR Tag on it this is how you react and behave. It's not good for you, and everyone else including me do not appreciate it when we have already attempted by the best of our patience and ability to help you by being amicable. Despite your stupid, stubborn demands. I wish you the best meanwhile in your life.

 

[Kazaim]

I don't really want to get into someone else's dialogue, but for most of the anti-ntr (strange name, but let it be) 3 ltrs is written in my signature "Someone other than MC fucks LI / potential LI". And as far as I can tell, that's just the way it is.

I suppose so. I'm already finished. But it seems my "Reply" attempt didn't work, for some reason. I clicked it. But oh well.

I've moved on. I'm just gonna go and play something and watch this Thread for some time, and see where this project goes. I'm not entirely sold on it, especially cause i'm truly extreme when it comes to disliking anything with any form of "Woke" crap or weirdly masculine, fat/chubby and short-haired weirdos. But i'll see what i like and don't like about this in future. Peace to you.

 

[Ragingrager]

Why. Should the Orc feel empathy, for your stupid ass mug running into her Grove, being busy doing a thing you have no business in. Yes. There would be guilt. Why? Go figure. You, the MC attempting to make a relationship with her and she knows the MC is very touchy and emotional. Did you expect anything else?

Also. Stop putting yourself in the shoes of a drawn Character, in a game of Porn/Hentai no less. Much worse if you should expect NTR of any type to be in it. It's gonna do something to your mind and fuck you up in your grey matter. No wonder so many reacts like a pissy bitch anything they don't like, despite every Tags and warnings of any kind before their very eyes and senses.

I don't know what your fucked up expectations are. When you clearly, are attempting to make a demand of something, that which YOU, already have an answer on. By your own findings, me attempting to lecture your dumb ass and the Dev that got sick of you like i have now.

I'd suggest you stop playing anything with NTR Tag on it this is how you react and behave. It's not good for you, and everyone else including me do not appreciate it when we have already attempted by the best of our patience and ability to help you by being amicable. Despite your stupid, stubborn demands. I wish you the best meanwhile in your life.

I never implied the orc should feel empathy, I implied she acted like a horrible cunt during the scene. It's also not her Grove, and what the player does in a random part of the forest isn't her business. Also you basically just confirmed that yes there is romance there, otherwise the harpy wouldn't care about any of this. She would have a entirely different reaction if there wasn't.

I also answered your question about it being potentially netori in an edit.

Also. Stop putting yourself in the shoes of a drawn Character, in a game of Porn/Hentai no less.
I don't know what your fucked up expectations are. When you clearly, are attempting to make a demand of something, that which YOU, already have an answer on. By your own findings, me attempting to lecture your dumb ass and the Dev that got sick of you like i have now.

Also porn games are for self inserting, netorare itself is literally designed around the concept. I didn't demand the dev change the game or anything, I just asked for a yes or no answer to two questions.

I'd suggest you stop playing anything with NTR Tag on it this is how you react and behave

NTR tag is generally very playable when its avoidable instead of skippable, assuming its not some game where 90% of the content is ntr and the vanilla route seems to just be spitting in the players face. I've just never had someone get this angry over asking a yes or no question or have someone like you get offended when I point out an netorare scene is netorare. You've suddenly made this otherwise friendly conversation very hostile when I've basically tried to agree to disagree multiple times.

 

[Captain_Allegretto]

Just a last two cents on it. As the writer. Green isn't "guilty" in that scene. She's nervous the first time you see it because your being confronted with a thing she warned you about. A shittier character MIGHT say they are ok with non-monogomy and then be shitty when confronted with it. Allen plays it off cool and enjoys the show.

Subsequent viewings she should seem more embarrassed then anything else. She's a bottom but also kinda secretive and not used to being watched.

As for the woke masculine stuff. I don't see what you see about characters being masculine. Outside of billia who I think you said you were specifically ok with. As for maria. Dude. She's a 63 year old retired paladin of a fertility goddess. But hey if you don't like some characters and do like others the good news if sex scenes with characters you don't like will be avoidable you don't have to pursue any specific character.

It's not "woke" to just let different characters have different body shapes. It's way more fun for me personally then having a stack of girls with hourglass figures. I want muscle futas. Tomboy. Femboys. Bimbos. Monster girls. The whole 9 yards

 

[Cuhulu Disciple]

Description of the game, Light-hearted Visual novel, Developer notes, The main bad guy steals your Waifu's with evil pheromones and NTR's the shit out of you.

sound like super mario bros and it's very wholesome game.
people love saving peach from bowser big and bulky hand and it's very light hearted moment.

but everything changes when you put NSFW tag somehow.

 

[LazyKeks]

Why. Should the Orc feel empathy, for your stupid ass mug running into her Grove, being busy doing a thing you have no business in. Yes. There would be guilt. Why? Go figure. You, the MC attempting to make a relationship with her and she knows the MC is very touchy and emotional. Did you expect anything else?

Also. Stop putting yourself in the shoes of a drawn Character, in a game of Porn/Hentai no less. Much worse if you should expect NTR of any type to be in it. It's gonna do something to your mind and fuck you up in your grey matter. No wonder so many reacts like a pissy bitch anything they don't like, despite every Tags and warnings of any kind before their very eyes and senses.

I don't know what your fucked up expectations are. When you clearly, are attempting to make a demand of something, that which YOU, already have an answer on. By your own findings, me attempting to lecture your dumb ass and the Dev that got sick of you like i have now.

I'd suggest you stop playing anything with NTR Tag on it this is how you react and behave. It's not good for you, and everyone else including me do not appreciate it when we have already attempted by the best of our patience and ability to help you by being amicable. Despite your stupid, stubborn demands. I wish you the best meanwhile in your life.

Pretty rude, man, though I'm not sure if it's directed at me.

 

[Ragingrager]

Pretty rude, man, though I'm not sure if it's directed at me.

Don't worry, it was directed at me.

 

[Captain_Allegretto]

Hmm. I kicked walking speed up but accidently also made the mushrooms faster.

Thinking imma keep that. Drop the minigame from them and use it on a different ingredient you need less of. There's a slowmoving mushroom it'll work great for.

 

[Kazaim]

Just a last two cents on it. As the writer. Green isn't "guilty" in that scene. She's nervous the first time you see it because your being confronted with a thing she warned you about. A shittier character MIGHT say they are ok with non-monogomy and then be shitty when confronted with it. Allen plays it off cool and enjoys the show.

Subsequent viewings she should seem more embarrassed then anything else. She's a bottom but also kinda secretive and not used to being watched.

As for the woke masculine stuff. I don't see what you see about characters being masculine. Outside of billia who I think you said you were specifically ok with. As for maria. Dude. She's a 63 year old retired paladin of a fertility goddess. But hey if you don't like some characters and do like others the good news if sex scenes with characters you don't like will be avoidable you don't have to pursue any specific character.

It's not "woke" to just let different characters have different body shapes. It's way more fun for me personally then having a stack of girls with hourglass figures. I want muscle futas. Tomboy. Femboys. Bimbos. Monster girls. The whole 9 yards

That's fine by me. I'm just saying, for one who's seen enough art that looks like weirdly off-putting or just not attractive. A lot of other Artists has created unique characters without Hourglass looks as so on.

And well, the Major lady is incredibly chubby for someone who's retired Paladin. Gotta eat an absolute fuckton of fatty foods to get there, and i did see her do her practice/training to keep up in shape. I'd call that being a hypocrite when it comes to her design and behavior, she's supposed to be a lot more healthy and fertile looking than that.

But hey. If this is what you want and it's your vision, kind of, seeing as you are commissioning art to use. You do you.

 

[Captain_Allegretto]

FYI. There where three people who subbed to my patreon last night for a buck each. Which I just closed. I don't intend to use patreon because I really really don't trust them not to rug pull adult content. If you wanna support the game please use subscribestar or just post feedback. Feedback is fantastic.

 

[1Teddy1]

Bilia makes me feel like she is gonna shove me down/carry me off to angerly ravish me every time I interact with her.

 

[Captain_Allegretto]

Bilia makes me feel like she is gonna shove me down/carry me off to angerly ravish me every time I interact with her.

Good.

Also this build does have a bug where helping Maria at her desk and second time causes a crash. Fixed in my local and will be updated on the main links once I have more of the QOL fixes in. BIG thanks to kark for reporting that. Still trying to see if I can recreate the other you saw but no dice yet.

 

[LazyDwarf]

I have a bit of a different question to everyone else here. How avoidable will the straight content be?
I obviously understand that there will be straight stuff, especially given the main story and its NTR themes.
I'm more so wondering how much i as the main character can avoid boinking women, and stick to men. I don't really care if i have to see someone else having straight sex, there's still atleast one man.

 

[Captain_Allegretto]

I have a bit of a different question to everyone else here. How avoidable will the straight content be?
I obviously understand that there will be straight stuff, especially given the main story and its NTR themes.
I'm more so wondering how much i as the main character can avoid boinking women, and stick to men. I don't really care if i have to see someone else having straight sex, there's still atleast one man.

Good question. Upfront. In the early releases there will be more pussy then cock for sure. It's just how I ordered things.

For gay main storylines there will be a bestfriend who in the future can become futa, female, or stay a femboy. Ll

Most of the rest of the gay is in side stories with 1 or 2 scenes.
More bar sluttery
There is also the lumberjack man who will have at least 1 scene with Allen and with Allen and his wife.
A slutty male bard/prostitute (i.e. Normal bard)
There are some male centaurs you will be able to eventually ride. (Ones a bully. Ones cute. top and bot respectivly.).
There's going to be a couple boy-with-pussy scenes so it depends on how you view that.
Plus a main badguy badend where you join the harem

That's all before counting futas.

But avoiding straight entirely? Definitely not a priority for me but the way I'm making stories separate and compleatable unrelated to eachother it should be largely doable. There are some straight scenes the might be unavoidable in main story. But they would be largely peeking based. Like in the intro. Some things need to happen to move the plot forward.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

This is the BIGGEST billshit I've read in a long time. You whiny fuckers don't let it go no matter how telegraphed or avoidable. Learn to just ignore threads with fetishes you don't like. It's is the most unreasonable shit ever to just keep going. The dev has been perfectly clear in this case what's here, which is far more than some fuckers give you. Just MOVE ON.

Indeed. I was just in another game thread the other day where the dev added to future tags !OPTIONAL NTR!. People lost their minds and review bombed the game on what of the platforms for supporters to the point where the dev went back and decided not to add it.

 

[Raikoblast]

So this is what happens when I try to speak to Maria in the evening a second time to try and help her with paperwork. The first one procs fine, I get the +2 to relationship, then I just get this error each subsequent time I try. Any help with this?

Also, I've not seen such a shitshow of comments in a long time haha. Imagine thinking that every game has to be tailored to your exact wants and fetishes. I personally don't care for ntr but I'll be damned if I'm gonna bitch and moan about it to the dev just to get my way. You should add even more scenes just to spite the fuckers now, I'll just close my eyes and click faster haha

 

[Baralover001]

*Frantically checking notes* Fuck, I dunno man. I guess I can put in some content warnings. Maybe make a skip option from the main menu.

So this is the first release of your game right I think I like your game will your game be regularly updated and will there be more monsters for the male character to submit to especially buff male monsters like a buff male orc

 

[moonblackhen]

I'm giving this game a try, and so far I have only a few comments:
1) The fat Mayor is offputing. Seriously, the most offputing character (of any race and gender) I have seen in a game in years. I've seen other fat characters and just ignored or avoided them, but this one's appearance in particular is really rubbing me the wrong way.
2) I don't mind the large maps or the movement speed. What I do mind is the rather slow start, where I just go around, talk to people, and collect money (and ingredients). The first few days were nothing but that. And after all of that... I have to waste a few more days collecting 200 gems because I want to avoid the gay scene with the shop owner.
3) Mini games: I have not tried fishing because 100 gems for a fishing rod is a lot and I need the money for the main quest. But the other mini games were annoying, especially the woodcutting one where I just mindlessly press Down n times until I win.

I have not yet reached any sex scenes, other than watching the mayor bathe and the drunkard groping the MC when working at the tavern, so I can't comment on the current scenes. And I haven't even started talking to the harpy, so can't comment on that either.

On the topic of NTR: It doesn't bother me, as long as there is a proper warning about it and it is well done. So I'll just wait to see what you do with it. But in the mean time, please remove the word “avoidable” from the following line:

Again, all skippable/avoidable and when they get implemented, I’ll be upfront about where it is.

That's in the Developer Notes on the first page. You have made it clear that NTR will NOT be avoidable, the most the player can do is skip watching the actual scenes but they will happen regardless. “Avoidable” implies that they can be completely avoided, i.e. prevented, and this is not the case here. So, to avoid confusing or misleading new players who have not yet read the whole thread, please remove that one word.

P.S.: Why can't I choose to not harvest carrots? Once I interact with a carrot I have to choose one of the three options to harvest it, no other way. Why? Are these some special magical carrots that do not allow you to move away from them once you are close?

 

[Captain_Allegretto]

This is the BIGGEST billshit I've read in a long time. You whiny fuckers don't let it go no matter how telegraphed or avoidable. Learn to just ignore threads with fetishes you don't like. It's is the most unreasonable shit ever to just keep going. The dev has been perfectly clear in this case what's here, which is far more than some fuckers give you. Just MOVE ON.

Captain_Allegretto A few things. First a bug:
Speaking to the sleeping Hilda on Friday afternoon locked me up. I couldn't move away and she just repeatedly did the "zzz" emote.

Feedback:
I have to agree on the minigames so far. Most are either too long, too annoying, or both. Not having any leeway definitely makes them feel worse, as well as no tutorialization. Lost the first Redcap cause I didn't know what I was getting ready for (and more because the sequence was just too long). Took me almost a full day of bait to figure out i was supposed to be holding enter not spamming it since my first fish was whatever the near impossible one is so it seemed like spamming worked. No real feedback until like 15 strikes in for the wood.

Pacing-wise I can actually see what you're going for overall, however I do feel you've missed the mark on some things with the 'finish one character' plan. Including that I'm not sure you realized just how Morning/Evening heavy the game currently is and barren the afternoon is. Night is also pretty barren but I'd expect that for the early game where the character still fumbles over himself talking to the pretty church girl.

This might be too much work to implement but since Izzy mentions that everyone has a fully set pattern and she's noticed it, maybe let the main character take notes of where he's interacted with people and fill it out in a notebook or something that will eventually let you know where each character is each time each day.

Finally, I absolutely adore Mayor Ashdown. She's hands down the reason I decided to put time into this. We don't get enough badass BBW with full mommy dommy energy.

First of all thanks for the feedback

Found and squashed the bug in my local, event was supposed to auto run in the background but clicking it let you enter the infinite loop lol.

Some tutorializing for the fish especially makes sense to me. Will be a slower thing to implement right but definitely worth it. I'm gonna address the minigames a few different ways and see what pans out. Iterative design is a great tool.

And yes I hadn't realized how morning frontloaded the events were until now. Definitely debug mode blinders I had on.

Schedule notebook is an idea... I think I would almost rather a character profile page that displayed relevant basic info like general location. While also being a place to shove background info.

Also so much yes on Maria's mom energy. Big Ara Ara danger.

The next character I have standing art for is Janna the Matroj. She's massive milkers body type, you'll like her.

Indeed. I was just in another game thread the other day where the dev added to future tags !OPTIONAL NTR!. People lost their minds and review bombed the game on what of the platforms for supporters to the point where the dev went back and decided not to add it.

100% I said what I feel like I needed to say to get the point across. I'm not going to put down all my scripts and let them be audited by someone who clearly isn't interested in the game I'm making but the game he wants me to make. the literal point of making this game is to make what I want. That does mean a bisexual switch MC with no jealousy impulse, an obvious praise kink, and who is really just having a good time.