I think I finished most of the game so here is my final opinion:
I liked it a lot, but there's a lot of room for improvement.
Some suggestions and constructive criticism about the game:
First: It would be great if there was some form of fast travel, at least something that would transport you into town. It would save the player a lot of time.
Secundo: I've seen in the comments that we already have plans to modify the snake game, so I just want to ask that this be one of the first things you do. I literally give up on killing those snakes.
Third: Some arts are very ugly, among them I would like to highlight the art of Green and Rain.
Green being the only character in the game that I consider ugly, Rain on the other hand has a very beautiful base image, in my opinion the prettiest in the game, but her sex scenes make a point of making her as ugly as possible, it gets sad.
I think that's it, now just some fantasies I had while playing the game:
Going back to my previous comment about the possibility of Allen having a girlfriend (or wife), I read that the most likely candidate would be Lisantre, but I think it would be great if we could date Rain, in my opinion date her brings many possibilities for future fun.
The player can choose whether she continues prostituting herself or not;
We could earn a percentage of the store's purchases or sell our products there, I know we can already do that, but I was thinking of something on a larger scale, like a little store of our own where we decide the prices of the products and wait for everything to be sold, or a little space where we could prostitute Allen;
If we stay with her, it also opens up more scenarios with her father;