It's a good start it's not perfect but, trough the time it will be better. I say this because i've found some bugs especially the HUD with Laura at park, it should be show her hud but it shows Rea instead and some minors bugs like which character talk (it shows it's one of the girls who speak but it's the MC).
Also in the class, the teacher talked about the last men was born in 2025 and lived 20 years so he died in 2045 not 65 so the events take place in 2065 not 85 if we paid attention to that (maths aren't easy for everyone
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I'm intrigued to see who this will be in the futur update with this plot at the end.