VN - Ren'Py - Android LIFE [v0.4.2 EA] [MateDolce]

Great idea.
The story is really interesting. I often just skip text to get juicy scenes, but this one got me. I've read everything. The scenes and animations are hot too. The only downside it that it's very short. 4 scenes with MC and 1 without so far. But I see that the development has begun recently, so it's fine. Waiting for new chapter.

It takes around 10 minutes to get to the first choice and only in this horrid game.
During those first 10 minutes there are:
No h scenes (none in the entire game)
Drawn-out useless exposition
Writing one step removed from cringe

But you wanna the the REAL KICKER;

That one choice is the only choice in the game and it approximately 30 seconds before the game ends.

The one choice doesn't matter before the outcome is the same where, in the only scene in the game, you get your only non h scene.

That's right, you waste upwards of 10 minutes of your life for daft writing, even more daft character, and i'm have the be the most daft out of all of this for taking the time to see how much time this game wastes.

TLDR:
A lot of room for improvement