Enjoyed this one a lot, writing is great, especially the comedy, even without the overt references, and for an ESL game there are very few grammatical errors. Traced Koikatsu art is a great concept that really helps the assets feel like they actually have personality.
Some questions though lmao, as much as I find the jibes about the Commie girl entertaining (particularly how they're ingrained into the universe), there are some things about her Character that are tonally inconsistent, to the point where she almost feels like a mashup of multiple different characters.
First off, why does she know who Che Guevara is when it's over 100 years after his death and canonically within the universes own logic that is explained during the classes, information about him would be lost. The only angle I can think of with this is that it's a play on how his image has been commodified and recouperated into a generic fashion symbol but in that case it would be arbitrary to defining her character. At least with the Hat, she openly admits she wears it because she thinks it's cool (fits her character of being a rich kid processing her personal frustrations through an aestheticized politics) and it's more likely that the Commissar Hat would survive culturally.
Secondly, why does she have all these weird conspiratorial views? Is this something that is accurately reflected in Latin America? (I assume you're from Central or South America?) Especially the stuff about Jews is more of a Right-Wing thing so unless you're trying to make some kind of Radical Centrist point, I don't see how this makes sense.
If you are trying to make some kind of point about Extreme Ideologies, you're actively undermining the critique of her as a hypocrite by reducing all politics by their proximity to an arbitrarily defined centre that doesn't actually exist in this world, and given what little we know about the universe it implicitly reinforces some of the aspects of the society that you hint as being authoritarian or oppressive.
I get that it's not that serious, and that she's a comedy relief character with a messiah complex, but the framing of the story within the setting actually reinforces some of her critiques, which makes me think that you could actually make her a better character expanding on her trope more like you have started to with the other characters.
I do think it's funny, don't get me wrong, the writing is excellent it's just that I feel as if this character was either originally intended to be 2 seperate characters or that you are inserting too much of your own political biases into your writing, and it's making the content jarring. I'm sure most people wouldn't notice, especially when you consider most of the demographic for this game are hardly going to be anyone who isn't a Liberal, but it just reflects as incoherent on you and you're actually a really talented writer in my opinion and could make this game truly special.
I'll leave it at that for now since I'm kind of ranting now, keep it up tho homie, this shit sent my sides into orbit
