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The aim is to create a contrast. As I said earlier, I doubt that people like the MC still exist in the West today, but you shouldn't expect too much realism in an AVN.Veronica is written like she lived in an Amish community until a day ago. There's not being corrupt, then there's being an 80 IQ dumbass who can't puzzle out why you'd touch something that feels good lol
It was a risky choice, I admit.Also, bizarre choice to revolve the intro around something that won't even be present later on. You're going to attract people who want what you're not making, and not the people who'll want whatever it'll actually contain.
I tried to remove as many references to skin colour or racial differences as possible before the release. But Monique's character was based on that so I had to leave some in. In the future I'll try to put some interracial back into a sub-route but there won't be any focus on abnormal penis size, skin colour or superiority/inferiority of an individual's 'race'.
yes, almost all the content including Monique was taken to extremes (some people love it, some people hate it), I hope there aren't really people like her in real life...Well, this was surprisingly good. Really a good start. However, it seems to me that the developer slightly exaggerated the "0 to 100" corruption issue. If I had to assess Veronica's initial "corruption" level I would say it is minus 1,000,000. That girl needs urgent sex education classes!. On the other hand, Monique's character is, by far, the most disgusting character I have ever seen in a Visual Novel. She is disgusting from the outside and inside. I just wanted to hit the monitor once and again. I guess the developer wanted to create something like a hypocritical "neofeminist", but again, he exaggerated a lot. In any case, the balance is positive. Congratulations to the developer and I hope you have luck. I just hope this isn't another "American" style NTR reduced to interracial fetish. From the developer notes it seems that this will not be the case, luckily.
As previously requested, the interracial will be part of a totally optional sub-branch in the corruption route, and even then I'll try not to overdo it on the fetish. (It'll probably be reserved for a separate DLC once the game is 100% complete).