VN Ren'Py Angel in L.A. Vol. 1 [v0.6.4 Rework] [DigiurgeCreations]

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I think it looks like a good start and if development keeps going at a steady pace, I'll be very pleased! I went ahead and pledged as a Patron, let's see where this goes. Oh, and, I like the model you used. I don't care if it's "realistic" or not. I did see a few typos, minor stuff like apostrophe use.
Thank you, your support is much appreciated!:cool:

I work everyday to move this project forward. Since it is still in Beta there will be some mistakes that I miss, but I will get it cleaned up, promise. (y)
 

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I am currently working on Day 2.

Here are a few sneak peaks from version 0.2b:


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First day of school

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Already getting into trouble?

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New best friend Carmen
 

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I have no problem with that doll-like look, but will wait until we have 0.2 or something like that. I like it when a game's playtime is longer that the download time ^^
Just a quick update about the length of time it takes for this game so far.

Yes, the demo was very short, I admit, I rushed it :cry:

But, on a good note...I've been working my ass off and have considerately improved the amount of content available in my game.

I didn't time Day 1 (v0.1b), but I did make 9 scenes total for that version.

For Day 2 (v0.2b), I just finished scene 9 out of 12. I did time this and the play through (on auto with one path) took me 44 minutes to get through. By the time I'm finished with scenes 10, 11, and 12, Day 2 should be over an hour of game play.

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This is my last update on this demo thread. After this I will request a new thread when 0.1b is public.

7/25/19 Update:

I just finished the last scene of version 0.2b. I plan to go back through it and test it until it is time for release. I may not have to release a beta version if I finish in time (which is my goal).

7 Days until version 0.2 is released!
Phase One: 0.2b Development
Progress: 100% (Completed)

Phase Two: 0.2 BETA TESTING
Progress: 50%


After spending hours a day, day after day, I must say that this version (0.2) has the makings of a great game (imho) and I look forward to working on this project for as long as it takes.

I know it's still early, and I know most of you will have to wait to experience the full version for Day 2, but I am sure once you do, that you will enjoy it and look forward to future updates.

I can honestly say, without a doubt, that I am proud of what I have accomplished in the short time I've spent as a Developer. I have learned a lot, and continue to get better at all facets of developing this game.

Here are some sneak peaks:

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I am currently working on Day 2.

Here are a few sneak peaks from version 0.2b:

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New best friend Carmen
Hey, so I played the demo. I'm quite intrigued by the game. Love Angel's face and slim hips and butt, but I do think her breasts are a bit too disproportionately large... but that's not why I'm writing.

I was wondering about the difference in skirt length. Angel is supposed to be quite innocent and reserved (it's just day 02 I think), but her skirt is super short compared to Carmen's. That skirt of Angel's does not look like a good, modest girl's dress.

I'd expect that as she gets corrupted, it would get shorter. Is there a reason it's so lewd already?
 

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I'd expect that as she gets corrupted, it would get shorter. Is there a reason it's so lewd already?
Yes there is a reason for the skirt length, and it is fully explained in version 0.1 of the game, so once you play that you will see :)

The large breasts are actually a part of her character as you will also see in the intro from 0.1, but I've actually reduced the size of her breasts a little since 0.1 because I was using a clothing morph to fix the "shrink wrap effect" that Daz3d clothing has on its figures and it actually made her breasts larger than the original setting I had.

I didn't really even things out until 0.2, but even after doing that they will still seem quite large from a side angle compared to looking straight on tbh.

There is also always the possibility of a breast reduction surgery in the future if enough of my Patrons (and future Patrons) vote to do so. I may lose some patrons who are big breast fans, but honestly I think I might gain more too and things will eventually even out. Personally though, I've always been a big fan of innocent type girls with big breasts, it has something to do with the two opposites clashing that gives off a very desirable appeal imho. But who knows, I guess time will tell on that front.
 
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Yes there is a reason for the skirt length, and it is fully explained in version 0.1 of the game, so once you play that you will see :)
Good. While I recognize that this is a porn game and that the human player needs to be kept interested, without explanation I think the slutty skirt would've broken the innocent girl illusion or story immersion.

The large breasts are actually a part of her character as you will also see in the intro from 0.1, but I've actually reduced the size of her breasts a little since 0.1 because I was using a clothing morph to fix the "shrink wrap effect" that Daz3d clothing has on its figures and it actually made her breasts larger than the original setting I had.
I like your use of the big breasts and how people react to them as a plot driver, so you should keep that.

Hopefully the rendering changes help. I found them so large that a) Daz kinda screwed them up and they sometimes looked bad (at least in the demo) and b) there's no way that a decent doctor would not have recommended reduction. That weight would be terrible for her back and posture.

Porn fantasy aside, G cup breasts on a girl as slim-boned is improbable, especially since her mother doesn't seem to share her size (although you could explain that away in the Mom has had a reduction). Without explanation she's either a radical statistical anomaly or she has tumors.

There is also always the possibility of a breast reduction surgery in the future [...] I've always been a big fan of innocent type girls with big breasts, it has something to do with the two opposites clashing that gives off a very desirable appeal imho.
I'm a huge fan of busty innocents being groped and corrupted, so I hope you carry on as you started. I'm not suggesting giving her normal proportions, and I'm definitely not suggesting you make her thicker or hippyer to compensate, but a little reduction to make it easier for Daz to make her look good from front and side could help.

I see plot-based reduction as a possible alternate path from Pure / Naive to Experimental. While she's still oversize, people could treat her a bit like a freak, so while she's getting attention, it's not attention that appeals to her. But if she decides to get reduction surgery, she then becomes more sexy than freak. So the attention she begins to get is appreciation rather than sideshow, and that affects her in that she likes it and starts to seek more of it...
 
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especially since her mother doesn't seem to share her size
It's actually her step mother

but a little reduction to make it easier for Daz to make her look good from front and side could help.
Yes, that's what I've been doing, although I will admit there are times (especially early on) that I might miss it because of how different clothes and morphs affect her bust differently, but I'm getting better at keeping the consistency and you will see that consistency throughout the series more so as I get accustomed to paying more attention to that detail.

To be honest, when I started out I made three different models of Angel with small to large, to very large breasts. Had I known how difficult it was to get clothes to fit her right before I began, I may of just gone with the large option rather than the very large, but at that point I had already committed. So now I'm left with this commitment and the possibility of an in-story event (reduction surgery) in order to return to the more realistic/feasible option.

The problem is, 0.1 goes public in just over two weeks (September 1st) and I'm expecting an increase in Patrons from that release, of which there may be quite a lot of Patrons who actually want Angel to have oversized breasts. So I don't want to dupe them with a surprise reduction surgery in 0.4 or later without their consent. That's why I plan on having a vote later on for any major reduction in size rather than a slight adjustment as I have been doing.

I see plot-based reduction as a possible alternate path from Pure / Naive to Experimental. While she's still oversize, people could treat her a bit like a freak, so while she's getting attention, it's not attention that appeals to her. But if she decides to get reduction surgery, she then becomes more sexy than freak. So the attention she begins to get is appreciation rather than sideshow, and that affects her in that she likes it and starts to seek more of it...
The problem with an alternate path for a reduction is that I would have to do double the renders which would make monthly updates impossible.

In reality, I have personally seen girls with this body type. I went to high school with one in particular and she was very shy but very sexy (and tbh this game is kinda based on her character). The funny thing is, that girl from high school ended up getting a breast reduction surgery and I remember being very disappointed, lol. She still looked sexy, but I just remember being sad because I loved her huge tits!

Anyways, I hope to get things sorted out eventually because few things are as important as the main characters breasts! lol

Thanks for your input and interest in my game.
 
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I don't want to dupe them with a surprise reduction surgery in 0.4 or later without their consent. That's why I plan on having a vote later on for any major reduction in size rather than a slight adjustment as I have been doing.
That's fair. And if you continue to improve how her breasts look from various perspectives, there may not be a need to reduce.

Having just spent some time looking at the various renders, I think the side profile issue is mostly that they jut out too much to be believed. I think that the bra that she would be wearing would tend to distribute (spread) the volume of flesh across her chest, i.e. up and down in addition to outward. However, you've seen a IRL girl like this, so you're more an authority than me.

The problem with an alternate path for a reduction is that I would have to do double the renders which would make monthly updates impossible.
That's not what I meant. There would only be one reduction event. But if she were on the Pure path, the reduction could open a path for her to suddenly be faced with Experimental choices. Like in the board game Snakes and Ladders - you could be cruising along on the top (e.g Pure) level, then you roll to a Snake and you suddenly find yourself two levels down in Experimental.

For example, the game is in LA, movie capital of the world. So directors and talent scouts would find her. But imagine that before surgery she was too top-heavy to look good on camera in anything but bad hardcore. Obviously she would reject that offer out of hand. But after surgery everyone in LA now thinks she's a wannabe starlet with fakies, and they come luring her with promises of an actual "role", with just a bit of "tasteful skin" in some B movie. She might now be tempted and you could present her with only Naive or Experimental choices.

It could work in the other direction too. When she's super-busty, movie directors might only offer her lewd roles. But once reduced, they'd see her innocent face and offer a completely different set. You could then show only Pure and Naive options. She could suddenly move up the purity layers.

Anyways, I hope to get things sorted out eventually because few things are as important as the main characters breasts! lol
Haha, you've definitely got your priorities straight!

I find myself unexpectedly interested in this game, despite it being very early days. I think it has potential and the premise is decent. I'll keep following it for sure. Keep up the good work!
 
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Hello everyone! This thread has now been updated to the INITIAL RELEASE v0.1b! It is now free to download!

Please keep in mind that this is only just the beginning of a game that keeps getting better and better with every update. Don't read this book by it's cover in other words, because v0.1 isn't as long as the next few updates. Please keep in mind also that the skills of the developer (me) get better as I progress through this journey of developing this game. The renders improve, the character models improve, the poses improve, the story improves.

Thank you for your considerations and I hope you all enjoy the beginning of a great game to come!

Sincerely,

Digi
 

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So far this game is shaping up really really nicely. Background is solid and the setup of locations and characters is proceeding nicely. Other characters also look good and are different enough that they're easy to tell apart. Writing and English are strong. Dev is getting better at renders with each release (current is v0.3).

The three paths and affection/contempt system are straightforward and I think will be a good structure for the game.

Oh, and Angel is cute and hot, especially after some physics were added to her breasts in v0.3.

The big thing for me is that her innocence and naivete are believable enough. So far her "adventures" haven't been too forced and she's not rushing into anything on any of the paths yet.

At the moment, this is the game that I'm most looking forward to seeing the next release of.
 
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California is the home of the whore, the original porn sloot. With L.A. being sodom.

Will we get to suck off some hollywood elite to make it big?
 

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California is the home of the whore, the original porn sloot. With L.A. being sodom.

Will we get to suck off some hollywood elite to make it big?
One of the reasons why I based the game in L.A. is because of the debauchery that goes on there, including both the film and porn industry. I won't give away any spoilers, but I can tell you that you won't be disappointed with the scenarios the main character and supporting cast will find themselves in. However, the type of scenario(s) you're looking for at the moment won't be in the game until much later on though.
 

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Thank you for the update. I was looking at the sample pics and mistakenly thought the woman kissing the father was Angela, not the step-mom. Are you considering including any incest content in the future especially since in the intro you mentioned that the MC overheard her parents arguing because her father is a "pervert"? Maybe not with the brothers (reminds me too much of project sage) though. Thank you again and keep up the good work.
 

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Are you considering including any incest content in the future especially since in the intro you mentioned that the MC overheard her parents arguing because her father is a "pervert"? Maybe not with the brothers (reminds me too much of project sage) though. Thank you again and keep up the good work.
Thanks! I can't officially answer that question due to the policies on Patreon, but I'm sure there will be an "unofficial" version with that kind of material available at a later time on F95.
 
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